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Durgeshnandini thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi


😲...😳...😆

😆😆
Sandhya.A thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


The Story goes...

So the haveli wore a festive look
With cuisine delicious made by the efficient cook
She did not expect him to choose to attend
And he could not find a reason to pretend
Thus the two souls were drawn towards each other
Though there were no words spoken between them either
She noticed the miracle that had brought in him the change
In his attitude and routine that made him look strange!

She had tended the wounds of his pet horse earlier
Now she has to tend the pain in her own heart that is severe
Her duty towards her clan is big that she chose
And the time to leave for her destination is drawing close
But it doesn't prevent her from the- longer -than -required gaze on him
And his glances against her with emotions to the brim
Adrenaline rushed to make her cheek red
Seeing him raising his arm thanking her for having been fed

She could faintly spot the smallest trace of smile when he did thank
Though unlikely she thought, she couldn't turn it down point blank
Which made her promptly return his unexpected gesture
With a salute that was sure a welcome posture
But will that mark the smooth journey of these two?
She has her problems and he has so many too
Hers the author has made obvious to us
But his? Looks like they are mysterious and also dangerous..


Who will expose the scheme the Prince has in his mind?
What will happen to the search party the innocent Rajah sent to find
Our lonely heiress whom he wants to marry the prince?
How will he persuade her and convince?
Will the Rajahs of small kingdoms come for her help
After the effort she took with so much of thought and set up
What will happen to her is a great suspense
For the readers who read the story expecting a finesse !

Karkuzhali.




Aren't we fortunate that we have amidst us,
An alluring author and a proficient poetess!

One weaves stories that engages us very much
The other enhances its charm with a poetic touch

Lashy's stories - to magic land does it take
And aunty's poem is like a cherry on the cake

We love you both for bringing smiles everyday
For spreading joy with your thoughts and word play.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


Aren't we fortunate that we have amidst us,
An alluring author and a proficient poetess!

One weaves stories that engages us very much
The other enhances its charm with a poetic touch

Lashy's stories - to magic land does it take
And aunty's poem is like a cherry on the cake

We love you both for bringing smiles everyday
For spreading joy with your thoughts and word play.

wow u too weaved a short poem in der praises ⭐️
Edited by harshu27 - 9 years ago
karkuzhali thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

My dear Sandya,
What a beautiful appreciation poem you have penned..Thank you very, very much🤗
I feel embarrassed because I don't think that my poem conforms to any norms required for a poetry..and I am in no way comparable to or to be treated on the same plane with Lashy..Lashy enge? Naan engay?

Image result for thank you animated messages

Saraswathi Aunty.

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


Aren't we fortunate that we have amidst us,
An alluring author and a proficient poetess!

One weaves stories that engages us very much
The other enhances its charm with a poetic touch

Lashy's stories - to magic land does it take
And aunty's poem is like a cherry on the cake

We love you both for bringing smiles everyday
For spreading joy with your thoughts and word play.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


I thought you called me Sandy Chellam 😳 and only then saw the comma in between.😕😡


Sandy Chellam Vs Sandy Begum...think about it! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


Aren't we fortunate that we have amidst us,
An alluring author and a proficient poetess!

>>>☺️

One weaves stories that engages us very much
The other enhances its charm with a poetic touch

Lashy's stories - to magic land does it take
And aunty's poem is like a cherry on the cake

👏

We love you both for bringing smiles everyday
For spreading joy with your thoughts and word play.


🤗 Lub you Chella Begum (Not my fault Kausi😆)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


What a beautiful appreciation poem you have penned..Thank you very, very much🤗
I feel embarrassed because I don't think that my poem conforms to any norms required for a poetry..and I am in no way comparable to or to be treated on the same plane with Lashy..Lashy enge? Naan engay?

Periyamma😡... shush... one more statement like this...and I shall do bhook hartaal... means... Assamese, Kannadiga, Haryanvi, Marwari, Bihari whatever the brekkie you bring😡... I shall not eat it!
(albeit, with great difficulty)

Your talents ARE amazing... 😃



Btw, I meant to type this in an earlier reply, but missed to...

I LOVED your aiyaiyoo stories... I think because of partiality a tiny bit even more than Baby Babloo's adventures 😆
Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


The Story goes...

So the haveli wore a festive look
With cuisine delicious made by the efficient cook
She did not expect him to choose to attend
And he could not find a reason to pretend
Thus the two souls were drawn towards each other
Though there were no words spoken between them either
She noticed the miracle that had brought in him the change
In his attitude and routine that made him look strange!

She had tended the wounds of his pet horse earlier
Now she has to tend the pain in her own heart that is severe
Her duty towards her clan is big that she chose
And the time to leave for her destination is drawing close
But it doesn't prevent her from the- longer -than -required gaze on him
And his glances against her with emotions to the brim
Adrenaline rushed to make her cheek red
Seeing him raising his arm thanking her for having been fed

She could faintly spot the smallest trace of smile when he did thank
Though unlikely she thought, she couldn't turn it down point blank
Which made her promptly return his unexpected gesture
With a salute that was sure a welcome posture
But will that mark the smooth journey of these two?
She has her problems and he has so many too
Hers the author has made obvious to us
But his? Looks like they are mysterious and also dangerous..


Who will expose the scheme the Prince has in his mind?
What will happen to the search party the innocent Rajah sent to find
Our lonely heiress whom he wants to marry the prince?
How will he persuade her and convince?
Will the Rajahs of small kingdoms come for her help
After the effort she took with so much of thought and set up
What will happen to her is a great suspense
For the readers who read the story expecting a finesse !

Karkuzhali.



Aunty,

My limited vocabulary has no words to appreciate your work!

Please accept this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sandhya di,('di' as per Lashy akka's wish😆)

Loved your poetic appreciation of our aunty and author❤️

Hope to see the poetess in you,more often😃
Edited by .AkDhian. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


Sandy Chellam Vs Sandy Begum...think about it! 😉


🤔😔
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Soch liya...👍🏼
Sandy Chellam is 49% good😳
Sandy Begum is 51% good.☺️

🤣

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