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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

congrats lashy di , thread has completed 100 pgs .😳

countdown starts for new thread...😉


Thanks da... 😳
Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

@ Sandy, Chellam don't do this to me.. I listened to the song at 11 pm.. and I swear I was "☺️"

For those not aware, it's from the Tamil Ghajini... you can catch the song on YT 😊

"Oru maalai elaveyil neram ,azhagana elai uthir kaalam.

(One evening with the slight warmth of the sun, during the beautiful autumn days)

satru tholaivile avalmukam parthen ange tholainthvan nane

(I saw her face at a distance and lost myself)

aval nindru pesum our tharunam. en valvil sakkarai nimidam

(The moments she stopped and spoke to me, are the sugary moments of my life)

eerkum visaiyai avalidam kandene... kandene... kandene...

(I found the magnetic key of attraction in her...)

paarthu pazhakiya naanku thinangkalil nadai udai paavanai maatri vittal

(In the four days of acquaintance she has altered my walk, dress and attitude)

koochcham kondda thentrala.. ival aayul neenda minnala.

(is she the hesitant breeze, or a lifelong lightning)

unaketra aanaka ennai matri kondene"

(I have altered myself to suit her)

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Wow wow! Adwi and her flattering compliments!! 👍🏼😆


Swear...

In punar janam...

Adwi would've been weaving such stylish poetries and prose... flattering queens and kings... earning handsome praise and money...
Till one day, one young man heard her 'words'...
Turned out, he was the Emperor of a large large land...
And the rest is history... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: wanita

u torture me with ur 15 days update,..u used to say.. see u in 10 days .. but now 15 days???😃

Will be 10 days again... promise (well... almost😉)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


The Story goes...

So the haveli wore a festive look
With cuisine delicious made by the efficient cook
She did not expect him to choose to attend
And he could not find a reason to pretend
Thus the two souls were drawn towards each other
Though there were no words spoken between them either
She noticed the miracle that had brought in him the change
In his attitude and routine that made him look strange!

She had tended the wounds of his pet horse earlier
Now she has to tend the pain in her own heart that is severe
Her duty towards her clan is big that she chose
And the time to leave for her destination is drawing close
But it doesn't prevent her from the- longer -than -required gaze on him
And his glances against her with emotions to the brim
Adrenaline rushed to make her cheek red
Seeing him raising his arm thanking her for having been fed

She could faintly spot the smallest trace of smile when he did thank
Though unlikely she thought, she couldn't turn it down point blank
Which made her promptly return his unexpected gesture
With a salute that was sure a welcome posture
But will that mark the smooth journey of these two?
She has her problems and he has so many too
Hers the author has made obvious to us
But his? Looks like they are mysterious and also dangerous..


Who will expose the scheme the Prince has in his mind?
What will happen to the search party the innocent Rajah sent to find
Our lonely heiress whom he wants to marry the prince?
How will he persuade her and convince?
Will the Rajahs of small kingdoms come for her help
After the effort she took with so much of thought and set up
What will happen to her is a great suspense
For the readers who read the story expecting a finesse !

Karkuzhali.



It's so unfair to pick and select some lines from such work of brilliance ... it was amazing as a whole...
Yet, I wanted to show you after three readings, what the crowning glories (personally) were from this masterpiece...
Amazing periyamma... you are so good with this... have you done this before to other works too?
Edited by lashy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


No Lashy,
My try on this sort of poems is in your thread only.. But I wrote so many nursery rhyme and poem remixes in Shyamala's threads. I also enjoyed writing comments on her reviews each time in a different way..
But this time I had to take longer time to finish it because of so many distractions, mainly the "Aiyayoo" affair.😉
Thank you for your praises Lashy..🤗
Periyamma.
Edited by karkuzhali - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


Chapter 14.



The "Thank you..."


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..and the "Welcome"

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali




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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">The "Thank you..."</font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">..and the "Welcome"</font>

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lovely aunty
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font size="4">GM Banjaras and Baisas</font></font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">(well... it's 11 here.. nearly 4:30 am there😆) so might as well...</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Special GM to our young romantic Periyamma...🤗</font>
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Oooh Assamese... so interesting... the Luci looks like Puri!😛I think I'll take that..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Btw Periyamma.. we haven't had a Marwari breakfast yet.. only lunch😉</font>



Good morning lashy Di
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: karkuzhali





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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Narikol ( coconut laddu)...</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Luci...</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Pitha... </font>


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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">...and Assamese Tea... </font>

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Good morning aunty
thank you for yummy breakfast

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