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Zhanna

@alffim

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

This is a very good story to the Independence Day.
In my country considered that to be an officer's wife is a special calling for a special women. I think, your Jodha will cope. 😊

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

a beautiful start buddy..realy worthable for true love regardles of their conditions in marraige..tat makes ja to force jo to beleive him and jo to through away her normal girlish feel..nice concept..happy independence day..ts TS involvs the civilain persn who has love for both family and nation..thanks fr ts and pm..

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
Res Sherry

Unres dear

Awesome chappy

Loved it

Engagement is nice n their description too

Jo is proud of jalal

He's safe

Got scared yaar

They married n song is beautiful

Kiss 😳

Superb TS sherry

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Unres dear
Awesome chappy
Loved it
Engagement is nice n their description too
Jo is proud of jalal
He's safe
Got scared yaar
They married n song is beautiful
Kiss 😳

Superb TS sherry

Thanks for pm Sherry

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

N sorry for the late reply Sherry

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Fabulous update n thnxx for pm dr

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

You ended this one? I did not expect you to end it so soon. 😭

And what would I say about the update... Just fabulous. You have pictured a glance of a soldier's dangerous life and the inner struggle and pain of his dear ones so simply by this simple story. Jalal's actions, Jodha's yearning, the letter, the tension and the song... everything is beyond beautiful! Only for those great patriotic valiant youngsters, who do not stop for once before setting off to such a journey which may take off his life without thinking about their dear ones, we can live a peaceful and secured life with out dear ones... My respect to them increased more and more while going through your story! It was a small story but it said a lot! Thank you so much for this story!👏👏 😳😳

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

awesome update
finally Jo came out from her fear
and accept jalal job
thanks for pm

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cute.ritu

@cute.ritu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Awesome shot

Jo don't want civil service wala boy

& jalal want a girl from a family Jo civil job karti ho

Both have totally opposite pov

But they changed their thinking after meeting each other

Coming to the second part

It is awesome too

Jalal had to leave on their engagement only 😲

Jo was so sad

But he got successful in his first mission...good

& he got to see what he wanted to see in Jo's eyes

Very nice concept

Thanks for pm

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

CHERRY I CAN'T WRITE ABOUT IT
SO JUST WRITE ONE THING
HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND
IN ONE LINE ONLY

"I AM COMPLETELY SPEECHLESS
BY YOU CONCEPT "

THE CHOICE OF SONG
MINDBLOWING

EVERY SINGAL LINE ISSO REALISTIC
SO TOUCHY

AND THE AIRFORCE HEADQUARTER
SCENE IS DO EMOTIONAL AND
HAPPY TOO

AND YEA THE LETTER
IS REALLY AMAZING
VERY INSPIRING FOR ALL... .

AND THE LAST
PROMISE... ...
I CAN'T EXPRESS IN WORDS