AKDHA TS (THREE SHOTS) : THE REMAINING HEART BEATS (PART 3a UPDATED) - Page 26

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--



I KNOW THIS CLG DON'T UNDERSTAND OUR FEELING😭
THEY ALWAYS KEEP US BUSY😭



But don't you worry will got time for our akdha from this college stuff 😉 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr



But don't you worry will got time for our akdha from this college stuff 😉 😃


really than update this os first please 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

update please...😭😭😭

oh honey don't cry
Pls it's hurts me
For my sake
Will soon update
Pakka wala
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

oh honey don't cry
Pls it's hurts me
For my sake
Will soon update
Pakka wala



OK will not cry but waiting for it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--



OK will not cry but waiting for it 😃

good honey will update soon
Just hace faith on me
Love youuu
Miss uuu 😊 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

good honey will update soon
Just hace faith on me
Love youuu
Miss uuu 😊 😭


i have trust on u
that's y ask for update
and is waiting for it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Vrinda--



i have trust on u
that's y ask for update
and is waiting for it

ohhh
I m glad that you still have trust on me
Love u honey
I hope I didn't make u wait more 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
@@@ PART 3 (PART B) @@@

Jalal and jodha totally forgot about surrounding and lost in their warmly hug... And just feel the moments... And the feelings of getting back his Jodha baby make jalal speechless he don't have any words to explain his feelings to get his baby in his arms again... He feel soo endless peace in his heart... Still from both the love birds no one ready to leave each other..., "baby... I love you..." only this come from jalal's mouth as a whisper and this make Jodha to break the hug and she replied, "and i love you endlessly... Baby... NO no my nought baby (heee )..." and jodha again hug him..."baby... Let's go from here all are watching only us... "jalal say while try to free himself from Jodha's protective hug... But Jodha being a stubborn girl not ready to leave him... Jalal take her in his arms and come down from stage and directly take her to the parking ...jalal make to sit Jodha in car and start the engine of car and drove to the hotel... All the time Jodha hold his hand like little baby... And when jalal ask the reason she replied with some Tears in her eyes.., "BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOU AGAIN BABY..." That make jalal sad... But some how he will manage to stop his tears to come out from his eyes and hurriedly drove to the hotel...

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AT HOTEL,

Jalal take Jodha to their room and on the way of room jalal holding Jodha's hand like a child and jodha watch jalal's with so much love in side her heart ... Finally the person whom she love endless is with her all in one piece... In the room jalal close the door and hug Jodha tightly and started to cry like a baby... And this time no one going to stop him... He is crying and just crying and that make Jodha cry too... But feeling wet near his heart jalal got to know Jodha's also started to cry... He break the hug and just silence is their words... No words no sentence nothing can describe this feeling which they feel right now... But one thing is clear both have endless happiness in their hearts like they are complete now... Both have good time together and enjoy their dinner together while feeding each other teasing n all...
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AT LATE NIGHT,

Both are in each other arms lying rest on bed peacefully but sleep is far away from their eyes They only silently enjoy being in each other's arms... Suddenly jalal remember about the reminder in which he read that Jodha donate her heart to him and die... He ask her about it... Jodha started to remind about it and all the flash back memories started to come in her mind and she tell to him," baby can you believe I come here with that cheap Ruk...??? "" what how the hell this also can b possible that you and Ruk together...?? "ask jalal with in hell confusion... And stand up from the bed... Suddenly a knock on door make them divert their mind and jalal open the door... And get totally shocked seeing Abdul with rukaiya and Ruk is crying badly... Jalal ask him," what the hell Abdul you with this cheap girl ...?? "while try to slap to Ruk..." now come inside the room and tell whole story from beginning Ruk... "say Abdul to Ruk while take her inside the room (almost dragging )... Rukaiya started to told them every thing with tear of guilt in her eyes ...

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FLASH BACK,

The accident is not natural when u both meet in coffee shop I m also there n call to humayu uncle n he called me to your home n told to make all set up for this accident... N plz jodh and jalal believe me I didn't do it on my own humayu uncle forced me to do that other wise I lost my love my surya... N only save my love I have to do it...plz forgive me...

The danger of jalal is at highest level he wanted to destroy the whole planet..." Say further ruk how low my father gonna to make us apart... " ask jalal

All the while jodha in shock holding jalal's hand in fear to loose him again...

Ruk say further, And after the accident I called the ambulance and came with u both at hospital n believe me the I get shocked too after hearing the next plan of humayu uncle he told me to take jodha with me n told me that too I don't have to worry because after getting conscious jodha didn't know about her past...

Jodha's grip on jalal's hand become loose n she is started to fall in ground but luckily jalal catch her on time n make sleep on bed...

"jodha baby...!! Walk up pls open your eyes for the sake of me I don't want to loos u again... Please open your eyes please,..." jalal way in almost crying tone
FLASHBACK END,
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AFTER SOMETIME,

Jodha come in her scence n suddenly started to cry make jalal walk up from sleep n he come near her. Taking her beautiful angelic face in his hand jalal very sweetly ask, "baby how's u feeling now, u know who much I was scared watching you lying in bed like this plz promise me u never do that again..." ( N hug her)

"Jalal plz stop to cry see I m all right your jodha is with u always in all your downfall no matter what would happen I m there with u my jaan..." jodha hardly speaks out few words.

"If sometimes would happen to u, I will never forgive my self jodha " jalal almost broken even imagine that something would happen to her.

"Jodha sit down we are going to marry right now I want to introduce to u as my bride to all world... No one can put finger on u if some one try they are not alive anymore... We are going to marry tonight... " jalal drag her toward the parking area n drive to the bridal drees shop.

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AT SHOP,

While jodha is busy to trying the bridal dress jalal informs all his friends n some if jodha's friends too n make an arrangement for marriage too.

Jalal is busy on phone n disturb by the beautiful sound of jodha's payal which sounds in jalal ear like birds are singing..

"Ohhh my my my goddd I want to hide u somewhere jodha if some one see u like this I can't let them in one piece... Ohhh my beautiful princess you look stunning, gorgeous, mermaid, uhhh no uhhh I don't have word to describe u baby... Just want to sat thank u to being in my life to come in my life... I can't wait anymore to make u mine in all the way...(with wink )"
Jalal say in one go.

"Jalal are u lost your mind or what all are staring us n u started personal things here " jodha complained

"Not us darling they staring u only... N now I m dam angry on them all... No one can save them now " jalal say in very angry mood.

"No jalal plz don't do this, I don't want any bad things to happen on our wedding day plz..." jodha beg in almost crying tone.

"Hey, baby OK I will not doing anything but u plz stop crying " jalal promise her.

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AT NIGHT,

All are waiting for bride n groom to come n here they both lost in their own company...

Jalal got ready in his designer suit offf looking dam hot n sexy well build muscular body any girl desire for her prince charming...

Jalal started to come down to join Abdul n all suddenly hear a giggling voice from Jodha's room which attracts him towards her n he directly proced towards jodha's room.

Opening half the door jalal eyes started to scan whole the room in process to get one glimpse of his would be wife n here she is near the dressing table try to tied thread of her back less blouse but her bad luck she failed...

"Should I can help my would be wife in something " hearing Jalal's warm voice jodha jump out on her place.

"Ohhh its u jalal, u make me scar buddhu " with pouty face jodha complained.

"Uhhh who else dare to come in the room of my would be wife n that to without my permission " jalal proced towards jodha while wink smile on his handsome as ever face.

Jodha started to take step back while jalal proceeds towards her more...

"Jalal!!!!! Plz stop we are already late for marriage rituals, let's go down stairs or all your friends come here in process to find u..." jodha almost shout while giggling.

"I don't care about them first I want to drink your all beauty first no one have rite to see u rather then me baby, plz let me do it " jalal started to expose her back by removing her Carly hair n kiss all over her
beautiful flawless skin. N jodha is absorbing all pleasure only moan come out from her throat.

Suddenly jalal takes her in to his muscular arms and started to walk towards door.

"Where u taking me jalal, we have to go down stairs plz put me down " jodha shout in shocked tone.

"Shhh just shuuu, wait n watch u are very anger to get information miss mohmmad" jalal make her stop with wink on his face,.

Coming out from room jalal proceed towards Down stairs which makes jodha to jump on jalal's arms, N in the process jalal lost his balance little which make jodha scar like hell n jodha tightly closed her eyes.

"Jodha my baby plz... Open your eyes see u r safe in arms we both are safe " jalal say very softly.

Both come to the mandap n all r smiling to seeing jalal carrys jodha in his arms like baby boy carry his favorite toy to hide it from world.

"Now please jalal put me down, see all are laughing at us " jodha is hell embarrassed by the act of her would be hubby n blush in all red cherry in color.
All marriage ritual finishe n make both jodha n jalal hell tired..

All r gone only few close friends r remains n doing chitchat n their hot favourite work to teas new couple...

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AT DINING ROOM,

"Now I got, from there u r become so naughty jalal, your friends r so unbelievable, they all r like r minions, heee " jodha blow out in jalal's ear while giggle

"Hmmm it might be true but I m become more naughty just because of my wify only " jalal blow out in jodha's ear n his expert hand stated their work on jodha's leg exposing her beauty underneath the grows...

This sudden attack make jodha jump at her place, "jalal stop it now plz not here we have whole night " with puppy face jodha beg.

Seeing his wife's puppy like face jalal goes melt n stop his soft torture n started to eat peacefully.

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AT NIGHT,

Almost all guests are gone some r remains who started to leave jodha n jalal r alone at home.. After seeing off to Abdul jalal bake in to the room but not find jodha in leaving room n start to shout In panic tone, "Jodha!!!!! Baby where r u, plz don't play game with me like this u know na I don't like this type of games, plzz come in front of me now plz, I m sorry in dining room I was teasing u, plz but on its torture me, plz baby where r u???? " (almost in crying tone).

Jalal goes downstairs in the process of finding jodha all room n bedroom searched by him but there is not a single sign of jodha n he got panic, a tears started to coming out from his grey eyes which became red because continues crying, suddenly some voice come out from the store room which drag Jalal's attention towards it n he rushed towards store room, n here he find his life, his part if heart, his remaining heart beat, his every thing, his jodha baby... Without wasting any single minutes jalal come near to her very near n hug her tight... Jodha is sitting on floor in front the photos of jalal's mom n dad with teary beautiful eyes...

Jalal sit exactly in front of her, "jodha, baby pls stop crying, plz talk to me, what had happened please tell me, u make me scare plz speak out something jodha, m your husband now u should share all your pain to me plz baby share it with me "

"Jalal!!!!!! Is m so bad that all this happened to us, your dad wanted to make us apart, what's our fault, they play this type of game with us, whyy whyyy (sobbing )" jodha can manage to speak out this only.

Now Jalal got to know the reason of tears in her eyes, "Jodha give me your hand " taking jodha's hand he put it on the left side of his chest where the heart beats for jodha only.

"This is me, all of me jodha for u only, m here with u In your all downfall in all hard time no matter what had happened or what gonna happen I m always there with u I never leave u, And yeah!!! The stupid act of my dad it make our love more stronger then before, If it can be reapat again then I forgot any single relation with him" jalal say all of this in mix expressions of love, pain, anger, sadness ,...
Jalal carry her in arms towards bedroom n in fear of first night with her hubby jodha ask, "jalal, r u going to make love to me?????? "(goes all deep red in color ) the innocent question of Jodha's make jalal laugh hard, without uttering a word take her to the bed and make sleep her on it..."if u r not ready for it then we didn't proceed further my love, u don't have to scare of any things okkk I will be waiting for u to be ready for this " after listing him suddenly all fear of her goes she is ready for it n jalal have no boundaries of his happiness he was like jumping like little bunny in bedroom... Seeing him jodha started to laugh which make pain in her belly...
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AFTER TWELVE YEARS,

There is the lady with big belly slowly running behind her 2 year old baby make him eat... But being a jalal's baby he used to tease his mommy like hell n running all over house, garden bedroom even not leave bathroom... N suddenly he stop in front of one room where on the wall maham's photo is hang, jodha come to him an as if she won gold medal in running smiles over him but see him to staring maham's photo jodha feel little uncomfortable n suddenly drag him towards leaving room n make him feed his favorite food with out uttering any word... Jalal come early today then other days n seeing his son eating peacefully is in like awww State n asking, "whhh?!!!! From which side sun rises today salim u eat with this much peace omg today's day have to written in Golden world of this ear..." But jodha didn't utter a word make him scared like hell he came to near her n put his hand on jodha's belly n say, " jaan u have to be happy atleast for this coming little baby... Plzzz "

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AT NIGHT,

Make salim sleep jodha come to bedroom jalal is waiting for her she come to the bed n lay beside him which break the chain of thought of him...
"ahhh u came jaan, why honey u still bleam your self for all this shit happened in our past plz for God shack plz stop to bleam your self jodha plz " wrap his protective arms around her very carefully jalal please her...
With out uttering and word jodha enjoying her Hubby's intimacy n his warmness... Both knows their restlessness but a the end when they become fall in each other's arms all restlessness all fearless all negativeness gonna like a beginning of new fresh day after the dark night...

True love is eternal, infinite, and always like itself. It is equal and pure, without violent demonstrations: it is seen with white hairs and is always young in the heart.


~~The end~~
Edited by Rajat_loverr - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
he he me first again...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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