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susan

@Susan.Dsouza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

nice one and harshu u should start new FF😃now

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

'what was more rosier apples or her cheeks'...Ooo😛 Well what's the meaning of the title? When he met Old lady in the hut I actually thought she's a witch😲 But she's good and helped our dashing Prince😆 Wait what? They only became friends?🥺 Nice try Harshu... Keep it up!👏 Hope our new bride would visit us here in IF😳

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

WOW Harshu
What a beautiful description of valleys and the young lady
Just superb👍🏼
They grew fond of each other and spending time with each other😳
But this is not fair Harshu
Its an OS but still have to wait for part 2 😕
Post soon...

Edited by Rahiramesh - 9 years ago

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

hayyeee Harshu ...im totally lost in the valley of Himalayas The first part itself was so mesmerising that i kept on reading till the end and felt is this the end??

Harshu their friendship started just now ...and u ended the part 😭 thoda aur aage likhti dear ...we would have got a happy ending .

But anyways this is simply superb ...i loved the way u described the valleys and all ...and mostly the way u described our prince and princess was amazing .

Ab toh definetly i want part 2

Waiting for it dear ...no escape haan

With the same confidence ..continue soon 😉

Thanks for pm

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
'what was more rosier apples or her cheeks'...Ooo😛 Well what's the meaning of the title? When he met Old lady in the hut I actually thought she's a witch😲 But she's good and helped our dashing Prince😆 Wait what? They only became friends?🥺 Nice try Harshu... Keep it up!👏 Hope our new bride would visit us here in IF😳

😆 yeah to b frank kals d story which i read was d prince sees a princess reflection in d waters and she turns out to b fairy princess seeing her he is totally lost in her beauty and faints but when his frnd approaches him and brings him bk 2 conscious when d prince tells him abt fairy princess and etc d story follows...😆 i dint wanted to add d fairy concept and all here😆 as i wanted to give a realistic look...😆 so d old lady wasnt a witch but d princess was a fairy queen...😆 d title kashmiri ki kali means kali means bud like rose bud before blooming into a full flower so here d female lead is s d bud of a flower...😉 not only frnds see more dn frnds i have mentioned at d end...😛 btw thnx kals...😳 ya i have told d bride and she told me dat both d bride and d groom will read...😉

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Will there be part 2?. Well as u said could imagine only akdha. As for the old woman i could imagine only shaguni bai😆😆😆

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Will there be part 2?. Well as u said could imagine only akdha. As for the old woman i could imagine only shaguni bai😆😆😆

dats sound sensible abt d old lady otherwise we had kalgi imagining her to b witch...🤣 btw part 2😲 soch ke bta dungi...😆

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Zhanna

@alffim

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Dear Harshu!
Very nice OS and very poetic description of the nature of Kashmir. It's very beautiful gift. My congratulations and wishes for a happy life for your friend.
The plot with apples for me an allusion to the story of Adam and Eve and Paris's judgement. It seems the apple has a sacred meaning not only in European mythology. 😃

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Beautiful os Harsu😊⭐️

Thanks for pm.

Congratulations Geetu😊 wish you a happy married life.

Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago

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Kuki715

@Kuki715

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Lovely OS Harshu dii.Kashmir...beautiful place.You described the valleys,mountains,rivers so well😊.Apple beauty...cute name😳.The old lady playing cupid😉.Overall enjoyed reading.

And wishing a very happy married life to your friend😃.

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