New Akdha SS - First Letter updated part 2 on page 8 (22/8/2016)

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PART 1

A beautiful bride entered in her room with lots of dreams of her first night n and her life. She looked around n find room was beautifully deorated with candles n diya and in the middle there was a king size bed decorated with red roses n she blushed hard to looking that but in next moment a pink paper on bed cought her attention n she went near bed n lift that paper it was a letter of her husband with lots of excitement and big smile she opened and start reading her husband's first letter for her...

"Hello Jodha,

I believe your family told you everything about my past but before you start your new life in this house i want to tell you everything about my past and about future of our relationship so i writing this letter with the hope that you understand everything clearly n completely ...

Jodha I was married to a lady named Salima. Her beauty is unparallel, royal outlook like princess and stunning personality with great taste of everything whether it cloths,jewellery,or other things like home decor etc. I was married to her for three years before she passed away coz of blood cancer. She looked gorgeous even in her days of sickness and leave this world with her heart stealing smile. I tried my best to save her but in the end lost her. You know she cooked wonderful food and was knowledgeable beyond compare you can call her itinerant encyclopedia haha..

Now you know all about my past lets talk about our future or should i say your future in this house.

Jodha, you must know that eventhough I am married to you now but I will never be able to forget Salima for as long as I am alive. You are married to me. But she was and will always be my Wife, my Love n my Soulmate . I will never be able to give you the same status as her, I will never love you like her and even I will never ever able to give u any place in my life, so Jodha please do not try to get close to me and try to get my love or any place in my life. You may stay in this house. But you will always be a guest for me...

Now you thinking if i am not ready to accept you as my wife then why did I married to you, Jodha sometimes circumstances forced us to do what we do not want to do and same happened with me. You know about my mother's health she is very sick counting last days of her life and one day she asked me to give her one promise as her last wish that she want to see me get married again with her best friend's daughter and i fulfilled her wish n did this marriage with you. I know i did wrong with you Jodha please forgive me and if you want to break this marriage or want to leave this house after reading this letter, you are free to take any decision I have no problem with that n i am ready to accept my fault infront of your family and society so nobody raise finger on you...

JALAL "

Jodha sat on decorated bed in the bundle of mess. Just shocked, speechless and totaly numb. How could her destiny played that much cruel game with her. The man she gave her heart at first sight telling her she have no place in his life and his heart...

So friends how is it should i continue or not

P. S. Sorry for every writing n grammatical mistakes n plz hit like button n gv ur valuable comments...



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avika444 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intriguining concept Jiya
Jalal still loves his late wife Salima ...and he clearly told Jodha "there wont be any future of them together" .
Poor girl is heartbroken ,lets see how she makes her place in his heart
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful start dear
nice concept
poor jodha she is so happy after looking at their bedroom decoration,
her dream about her marriage life shatter ,
jalal he still love his late wife salima
now I am curious what is jodha decision
please continue dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome chappy Di
Poor Jodha
Jalal wrote a letter to break her heart
I thought a letter means either good or bad thing
She was so excited but at last it gave pain to her
Update soon Di
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So di plz continue this ss
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Definitely you should continue it Jiya...
It's a wonderful concept... 😊

I understand how difficult it must be for Jalal to give his beloved's place to someone else... But at the same time he should also realise that whatever he is doing, is affecting Jodha too... What is her fault in all this??? Is it so easy to ignore the fact that the person you love so much, who is your other half now, doesn't even appreciates your existence... 😔

Please update regularly... Pleaseee...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
poor Jo
waiting for next update
please update soon
and please update others story also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story jiya!!

I haven't read any of your story yet, but I will read soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story jiya. ...
Good concept. ..
Jalal cleared everything to jodha...
Should see hw will jodha make jalal love...
Update soon...
Thanks for pm...

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