New Akdha SS - First Letter updated part 2 on page 8 (22/8/2016) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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oye I want update... I can understand Hindi as well...
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Originally posted by: jiya.k

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Hello friends i need ur opinion abt next update actually i write next part in English n hindi like i write in ishq ibadat n problem is that i hv nt getting time to translate hindi part in English so if u guys no problem cn i post without English translation n add translation after some time...plz share ur opinion n like this post...

as wish dear
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first of all congrs for new story jiya
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about update it's incredible
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Originally posted by: sho123

about update it's incredible
i like the concept alot
really looking forward to read further

thanks for pm
really eager to know jos decision and ja jo journey of love 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As ur wish...Hindi update bhi chalegi
Bas jaldi update Karo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome story
will jalal ever love jodha?
Jodha give her heart to jalal
Jalal loves salima
continue soon
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part 2...(no proof reading)

Note :- as some members asked me to gv english translation too so gv short update of hindi part in brackets sorry for not giving full word to word translation...

With so many emotions n sadness in her heart n many questions abt her future in her eyes after four days of that faithful night jodha again enter in same room in last four days she was busy in performing a daughter in law's duties in hamida's last rituals from cremation to last prayer for peace of her soul she performed her every n each duty with full dedication n took care every thing n gv her silent support to Jalal without saying a single word n in btw all her work n in btw lots of relatives she forgot reality of her marriage n her life n when in evening all relatives went to their respective houses left her n jalal alone in that big house that silence n emptiness of house reminds her reality of her life n every word of jalal's first letter start ringing in her ears n so many questions n confusion arise in her mind abt wht decision she should take should live in this house as a guest as Jalal told her or leave this house, she confront Jalal n ask her right on him n on his house or should live here without any right of a wife without caring her self respect n if she decide to leave him than what answer she will gv to her family n how her family react with so many questions bt no answer of any of them she entered in her or their so called bedroom n every second of that night came infront of her eyes like a movie n she closed her eyes in pain n took deep breath n opened her eyes again to find again a letter on bed with a small jewellery box so many thoughts came in her mind after looking that letter with heavy heart she slowly went near bed n with trembling hands lift that letter from bed n opened it n found that was Hamida's First n Last letter for her...

JODHA BETA

Jo kuch bhi humne iss khat mai likha hai woh hum tumse khud apne pass baithakar kehna chahte the par kya kare maut ne zindagi ko itna bhi waqt nahi diya ke hum tumse apne dil ki baat kar sake tumse haath jodkar muafi maang sake, Hum jaante hai Jalal ne tumhe sab kuch bata diya hoga iss rishte ki vajah aur iss rishte ka sach aur tum humse bahut naraaz hogi na ya sayad humse nafarat karne lagi hogi ke humne sab kuch jaante huye bhi tumhe iss ek tarfa rishte mai bandh diya aur tumhari zindagi barbaad kar di humara yeh gunaah muafi ke laayak toh nahi hai phir bhi ho sake toh hume muaf kar dena beta.

Ab tum isse ek maa ki usske bete ke liye mamta kaho chahe ek maa ki khudgarzi ya ek bimaar lachaar aurat ki majboori ya apni aulaad ko khush dekhne ki aakhiri tammanna hum naa chahte huye bina tumse yeh pucche kya tum ek aise rishte ke liye raaji ho jissme tumhe apna pyaar apna haq paane ke liye na jasne kitna intezaar karna padega humne tumhe iss rishte se jod diya par hum kya karte beta humara Jalal bahut tanha hai bahut akela hai usska dil ek aisi banjar zameen ban chuka hai jo naa jaane kitni sadiyo se mohabbat ki baarish ke liye taras raha hai humara baccha bachpan se hi pyaar ke liye tarasta raha woh sirf ek baras ka tha jab usske abba huzoor hume humesha ke liye chodkar khuda ke pass chale gaye the aur unnke jaane ke baad hum unnke karobaar aur ghar ki jimmedaario ko sambhalney mai itne mashgul ho gaye ke kabhi bhi apne bacche ko maa ka pura pyaar nahi de paaye usse jab sabse jyaada apne ammi abbu ki jarurat thi hum
dono hi usske saath nahi the par humare Jalal ne kabhi bhi koi shikayat nahi ki woh bachpan se hi bahut samajhdaar tha aur humari majboori ko acche se samajhta tha par phir bhi humne humesha usski aankho mai apni maa ke waqt aur mohabbat ki chaah dekhi thi waise toh kehne ke liye baano bi humesha har pal usske saath rahi unnhone hi ussko pala posa Jalal ne bhi unnko maa ki tarah mohabbat ki par woh usski zindagi mai humari kami kabhi puri nahi kar paayi.

Humara baccha mohabbat ke baare mai humesha se badnaseeb raha hai beta, usska bachpan bina maa ke pyaar ke tanha gujara aur jab woh bada huya aur college mai pahucha toh usski mulakaat abdul aur salima se huyi aur woh teeno bahut acche dost ban gaye aur dhire dhire Jalal salima se mohabbat karne laga par kabhi apni mohabbat ka izhaar karne ki himmat nahi juta paya aur jab himmat karke woh apni mohabbat ka izhaar karne gaya toh dekha abdul pehle hi salima se apni mohabbat ka izhaar karke uss se nikaah ke liye puch raha tha jiss se salima ne khushi khushi maan liya kyunki woh bhi abdul se mohabbat karti thi aur Jalal phir se tanha reh gaya aur ussne apne pyaar ko apne dil mai chupakar ek acche dost ka farz nibhate huye khushi khushi abdul aur salima ki nikaah karwa diya kyunki abdul ka khandaan unnke nikaah ke liye tayyar nahi tha kyunki salima ek laavaarish ladki thi Jalal ne na sirf unka nikaah karvaya balki unnko nayi zindagi shuru karne mai madad bhi ki woh unnki khushi mai hi khush tha aur apni adhuri mohabbat ka gum bhulne laga tha par phir se kissmat ne apna khel khela aur ek haadse mai abdul ki maut ho gayi aur salima phir se iss bhari duniya mai akeli reh gayi aur abdul ke gharwaalo ne usski jimmedaari lene se inkaar kar diya tab phirse Jalal ne aage badhkar usska haath thama aur usske dil mai chupa huya phir se saamne aa gaya salima se shadi ki baat se hi woh bahut khush huya tha ussko laga tha jaise khuda ne ussko usski mohabbat lauta di hai par shadi ke pehale hi usska yeh sapna toot gaya jab salima ne uss se kaha woh kabhi bhi ussko apne sauhar ke roop mai nahi apna paayegi jalal humesha usska ek accha dost rahega woh ek biwi hone ka har farz nibhayegi par kabhi uss se mohabbat nahi kar paayegi kyunki woh sirf abdul se mohabbat karti hai aur marte dum tak sirf uss se hi mohabbat karegi Jalal ne ek baar phir apni mohabbat ko apne dil mai chupa liya aur salima se iss vaade ke saath ke woh humesha usske pass abdul ki amanat ki tarah rahegi nikaah kar liya nikaah ke baad salima ne ek acchi biwi aur acchi bahu hone ka har ek farz bahut khubi se nibhaya woh humari iss haweli me khuda ki ek naymat bankar aayi aur Jalal bhi bahut khush tha apne pyaar ko apne pass pakar par kismat ko kanha usski khushi raas aati hai aur uss ne salima ko bhi uss se cheen liya jaanti ho jodha beta yeh sach he ki Jalal salima se mohabbat karta tha par woh mohabbat kam aur dosti jyada thi jisse woh pagla mohabbat maan baitha kyunki mohabbat chahe jitna chupa lo kabhi nahi chupti aankho mai dhikh hi jaati hai par unn teen saalo mai humne uss mohabbat ki jhalak kabhi jalal ki aankho me nahi dekhi humne usse samjhane ki koshish kai baar ki par woh kabhi nahi mana aur gujarte waqt ke saath woh duniya ki har khushi har eihshaas se dur hota chala gaya hasna toh dur woh muskurana bhi bhool gaya tha naa jaane kitne dino baad humne usske labo muskurahat dekhi thi jab tum maina ke saath humse milne aayi thi aur tumhari pyaari baaton tumhari hasi ko sunkar usske labo pe jo halki si muskurahat aayi thi uss se dekhkar hume laga tha tum hi woh mohabbat ka dariya ho jo mohabbat ke liye bechain humare bacche ki pyaasi rooh ki pyaas bhuja sakti ho isiliye humne tumhara nikaah uss se karvaya...

Jodha beta hum jaante hai Jalal ki mohabbat pana tumhare liye bahut mushkil hoga phir bhi beta apni iss ammijaan ke liye tum yeh koshish jarur karna hume pura yakeen hai tum jarur kamyaab hogi beta humara baacha bahut akela hai bahut tanha hai ussko kisi ke pyaar ki jarurat hai aur woh pyaar tum ho jodha pehli nazar mai jo pyaar tumhari aankho mai jalal ke liye humne dekha tha usska asar Jalal ki muskurahat mai humne mehsush kiya tha bus tumhe thoda sa intezaar karna hoga woh bhi tumse dilo jaan se mohabbat karega beta usske andar bahut mohabbat hai jo kanhi kho gayi hai tumhe bus usske dil mai phirse mohabbat aur eihsaas jagane honge beta humne tumhe humesha humari beti mana hai aur hum apni beti se ek vaada chahte hai ki tum humare bete ko har khushi dogi ussko woh mohabbat dogi jisske liye woh humesha se tarasta raha vaada karo beta tum Jalal ka saath kabhi nahi chodogi aur apni iss badnaseeb ammi ki yeh aakhiri khwahis jarur pura karogi nahi toh hume kabhi bhi sukoon nahi milega hum jaante hai humari beti hume kabhi bhi maayush nahi karegi beta tumhari madad karne ke liye hum tumhare saath nahi hai phir bhi hum tumhe kuch dena chahte hai iss khat ke saath humne tumhe iss haweli ki chaabiya saupi hai woh chaabiya jo humne salima ko bhi nahi di thi yeh iss haweli ki parampara hai yeh chaabiya iss ghar ki maalkin Bahu Begum ko saupi jaati hai aaj se tum iss haweli ki bahu begum ho iss haweli mai sirf tumhara hukum chalega aur yeh woh adhikaar hai jo Jalal bhi nahi cheen sakta tumse hum jaante hai ussne tumse kya kya kaha hoga tumhe apni zindagi mai koi bhi jagah dene se mana kar diya hoga par ab tum iss haweli mai mehmaan ki tarah nahi balki iss ki maalkeen bahu begum bankar rahogi aur ek din Jalal ke dil ki bhi mallika banogi hume pura yakeen hai aur khuda se yahi dua hai aur haan beta tumhe Jalal ke baare mai aur kuch bhi pata karna ho toh tum bano bi ko phone karke puch lena woh tumhari har madad karengi woh aajkal apne parivaar ke saath dusare sehar mai rehti hai...

Aakhir mai bus tumse yahi kahenge himmat kabhi mat haarna manzil mushkil hai aur dur bhi par naamumkin nahi toh bus apni koshish kabhi mat chodna humara aashirwaad aur hum humesha tumhare saath hai...

Tumhari Ammijaan...

[ in her letter first hamida asked forgiveness frm jodha for tiding her in an one sided relationship n told her that Hw lonely is jalal n hw mach he craving for love since his childhood his father died when he was year older n he spend lonely childhood n hw he was craving for his mother's love n care coz she was busy in took care of his father's business his foster mother bano bi took care of him n he loved her lot n she understood his every like dislike more than anyone but still Jalal missed his mother but never complain since childhood he was very understanding n support his mother in her every decision, when he entered college he met abdul n salima n they became his best friends n slowly slowly Jalal started loving salima but b4 he propose her abdul proposed her n jalal without expressing his feelings help them in their marriage n strting a new life coz abdul's family did nt accept an orphan girl as their daughter in law but after some time abdul died in a road accident n jalal took salima's responsibility n asked her for marriage salima accept his proposal but told him that he is only her friend she will never love him or accept him as her husband coz she only love abdul n jalal married her with promise that he always tack care her as abdul's fidelity n after marriage he was happy coz his love stay near with him bt again faith play his game n he lost salima n after her death he became stone heart n emotionless person but hamida told Jalal never truly love salima he mistaken friendship as love n she asked one promise frm jodha as her last wish that she will gv chance to their relationship n gv Jalal happiness n love n she is hopeful that one day Jalal also love jodha madly jodha just need to awake his dead heart n emotions n till than jodha need to fight for her love coz she knw jodha love him frm first sight n in last she gv her keys of their mansion n gv her title of bahu begum as per their family tradition which she never gv salima n all responsibility n rights as owner of their house n gv bano bi number who live in another city with her family n told her to ask bano bi abt everything related to Jalal's like n dislikes n gv jodha blessing]

Jodha opened that small jewellery box n found a beautiful diamonds studed gold key chain with lots of keys in it she put that key chain and hamida's letter on bed with Jalal's letter n looked them with teary eyes her faith again play game with her life before entering in room somewhere in her mind she decided to end this namesake relation coz she has no hope n no right to stay in that house or fight for her love but hamida's letter give her hope to fight for her love n right to live in that house she took deep breath n hold key chain in her hand with determined look on her face n new hope in her eyes she looked herself in mirror n tucked that key chain in her saree near her waist n said ''Thank you ammijaan for giving me this hope n right to fight for my love i m jodha bahu begum of this mansion gv u promise frm my heart that i will fullfill ur last wish n gv ur son whole world's happiness n love" She smirked n said '' So Mr . Jalal Mohammad bahu begum jodha is comming be ready for this war of love."

P. S. Sorry for every writing n grammatical mistakes n plz hit like button n gv ur valuable comments n silent readers plz hit like button at leas n i m ready for all juttas n chappal if u guys find this update boring...


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Congrats kavya n i hope u have no problem with in short English translation of hindi part... 😊

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