Akdha OS - The Poisonous Stick

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
Me second

Congo hehe😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-
Why is everybody hell bent on killing either of my JJ? 😭

Hmmm... Pta nhi re... sbko leke meeting krna prega 🤔

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Sreshtha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Res

Okk 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: mssujeetha
nice os.
smoking is injurious to health and is equivalent to taking poison is nicely shown.
it affects your loved ones more

Thanks dear

yaa it affects d loved ones along with d smoker sadly...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

absolutely beautiful OS...

btw, have I met you before😳? If not, I must say this is possibly one of the best OS I've read on Ja Jo

Apart from the one point you've mentioned (about how it's impossible to miss signs of emphysema) everything else is spot on!

the language... some of the clauses you've used (your text doesn't allow me to quote or I'd have given you a longer review😳)

He'd not believe a single word unless it was from his superhero

how she rocked herself into a crying stupor and the kid had to muffle the sounds with a pillow

where she kissed him goodnight for the last time

how she didn't know if she'd passed the 'artificial smile' test.

and many more!

Very nice.. keep them coming!👏

you know what drew me to your OS - your title 👏

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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