NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 5~CHAPTER 10 - Upd 10th JULY

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: Aishwarya_ASHnI

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Aishu don't be sad...🤗 I'm behind about 10 replies still... saved your reply so will be getting back to it soon... hee hee... replying sabko ek ek karke... and will send you link of the page ok?

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#392

Dear Lashy, Kausi and Harshu,

Thanks for your compliments..

But...

I also tried to convey that while she is pondering about her meeting with Akbar, she mentally composes her poem, line after line, and when she finally sits down to write, it takes a complete shape. I think I have failed in communicating this...

Saraswathi Aunty/Periamma.😕

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

After ages!! 😲😲

Her explanation of both their feelings during the meeting... was absolutely spot on

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Dear Lashy, Kausi and Harshu,
Thanks for your compliments..
But...
I also tried to convey that while she is pondering about her meeting with Akbar, she mentally composes her poem, line after line, and when she finally sits down to write, it takes a complete shape. I think I have failed in communicating this...

Saraswathi Aunty/Periamma.😕

Yes, I didn't realise that ... but you've conveyed it now... and it looks even more beautiful

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: lashy

Her explanation of both their feelings during the meeting... was absolutely spot on

Yup true. And I specially like this para!! read 2 or 3 times!! ❤️ ANU2 😆 What a comeback!! 👏👏

As for AMK. The mysterious past. The memories he carries. Magal's Coconut. Isn't it strange I find myself thinking he will need Harka more than vice versa. And who can deny him that privilege when he has seen 'perfection' where others have seen disability. Has he seen into some part of her soul. Of course he has. That may well lend him some strength or become a weakness. But meanwhile he is her shield and of course her biggest fan!. Finds himself wondering and being curious about her. And if you, Lashy, do not engineer immediate and more frequent meetings, he will do it himself. Why they even have this unkempt garden to meet in. Where he can watch her or drink her in. ☺️❤️

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#396

This is what is called "fishing for compliments!😉😆"

Periamma.

Originally posted by: lashy

Yes, I didn't realise that ... but you've conveyed it now... and it looks even more beautiful

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

This is what is called "fishing for compliments!😉😆"
Periamma.

we got tedaish aunty... 😉 😆 😛

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

This is what is called "fishing for compliments!😉😆"
Periamma.

You're already a star, Periamma 😃⭐️

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
 You're already a star, Periamma😃⭐️

ditto my thgts...aunty ur hunar is grt... 👏

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..Anusha..

@..Anusha..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: divyavm

First wait, where is the faint and fall down emoticon?

Jokes apart, what a beautiful description of the Harka and AMK interaction :) The decorum and trust captured so well.

Why jokes apart Magal? I can't quite believe I managed to capture anything . 😆

But thank you for giving me the links to chapters and your takes. It's what helped me to keep up despite being late.