NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 4 CHAPTERS 7 & 8

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hemakeerti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: lashy

How's that a water connection 🤔

That's how durgeshnandi felt .. ask her 😛

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

ok... so r u online Jahnvi??...plz visit ur thread too

and Jahnvi, isn't this the same writer in ur last thread, we feel similar to somebody we know???

Yeah.. same girl/woman Deeksha.. I'll visit my thread on Monday (hopefully) 😆

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

which pic...😲

Chk.pg 1

Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago

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harshal

@harshu27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

wat a pic awsum lashy just chked it on pg 1...d haveli looks truly like a fairy tale castle to me... 😳

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: lashy

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: melovesja

Chk.pg 1

thanx dear...😳

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Heyya akkaaa!!! Since you didn't update last sunday, hadn't expected an update till today..but surprises are always a 100 times better when they come unexpected na...love you for this one!🤗🤗 I read the update 3 days back, haven't had time to comment..sorry!

The paintings before every chapter keep getting better and better di...this one is breathtakingly beautiful...her expressive, sharp eyes and her slender hands holding the dupatta..such elegance!!❤️ Can I keep it as my siggy..pleaseee???😳

Coming to the chapter, the connection between Heera and Akbar is something I felt throughout the chapter...unravelling each other, connecting the dots, finding answers to the questions about each other's identities...you've written it so so so well..👏👏

To start with, the Jija- Saali connect was great...they both realise they need to look out for the other person in this tough time where they both are equally engulfed by grief of losing their loved one. 😭

His anger and thirst for revenge is understandable, I hope he gets it..Khalil especially needs to die a slow painful death! 😡

My girl's got such a sharp mind...it more than makes up for her partial eyesight..one line from Bindiya that the sheds aren't new and she deduces that the maids hadn't exaggerated the other day..he was indeed a young established merchant. Proud of my gal..

And that opened up another range of questions in her mind..such curiosity when it comes to her guy...I'm loving it!!!

The angry young stranger becoming more familiar to her with every answered question...☺️☺️

The return of the 4 dams and the purse...that has to be the best 'shortest' story in itself for me! Right from him being the 'rude' guy charging 4 dams for the water to him finding the purse to return the 4 dams to the rightful heiress...our 'Sahiba'.. love the connection there!

Another list of questions after this..why did he return it, how did he know Bindiya wasn't the Sahiba...she's gonne be having sleepless nights if it goes on like this...bless the angry-young stranger!😆😆

Heera's conversations with her jiji are heartbreaking and yet insightful..so many unanswered questions, the already existing problems and a fresh range of puzzles to decode..

And as Heera converses with her diamond ring here, another pair of eyes look into a hazel- brown topaz ring! That makes his thoughts drift to those expressive pair of eyes of the 'Sahiba' that had many stories to tell...for which he might not care now, but eventually will I'm sure! 😳

They can then compete on who spends the most number of sleepless nights decoding the other..😆😆

And I'll be spending sleepless nights thinking about these two...😆

I'm particularly in love with how they both have each other's thoughts etched in their minds since their first meet and the first time they heard each others' voices. You don't give every stranger a second thought after all..☺️

Loved this chapter, wouldn't have put it down till I finished the last word if this had been a completed novel..how I wish I could get hold of all 60 chapters right away!!❤️

Eagerly looking to get answers to all of Heera's questions...as curious as her! You updating today aa? Hope you do..Sunday is HBS day haina..😳

Love yaaa🤗

Edited by baubles - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: baubles

They can then compete on who spends the most number of sleepless nights decoding the other..😆😆
And I'll be spending sleepless nights thinking about these two...😆

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