Chapter 40 Is It Hate OR Love - Page 38

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

I am very sorry for commenting late di. Actually I forget to comment.. I read thrice but forget to comment. I am so sorry. I am holding my ears.

Aree Yaar don't say sorry for late because I am always late😆

U read thrice☺️

Love U Laxmi😳 When I saw UR pm... I was so happy to know U write as well... U never told me... I think you were not in my buddy list so I never got pm before... this weekend I will read your stories🤗

Coming to update..

Yah Allah..

😆

It's completely power packed update. Truly saying we always seem angry & romantic jalal but never seen political jalal..

I am glad U like side of Jalal😳 Actually I read about Akbar... and in reality he was shrewd politician and was able to take over almost entire Hindustan... so decided to cover his quality in this story.

I think we are going to see his new side. That was feast to us.

Thank u di for this.

😛

Jalal. What we have to say about u. I thought u will leave ur wife but still u accepted her little wish. After winning all bets from jodha..

Loved ur jalal di..

My Jalal I love my Jalal tooo... ☺️ He is my dream lover😉

I love the bond between father & daughter. True we can't see fathers in tension. I loved the way jodha supporting her father.

Poor Bharmal... All the time in trouble😆

Having a sister really good. Sukku control.. hahaha..

That is pillow not Surya..

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poor girl..her love life in problem & she is happy. Hope it will clear soon. She will be with her long time love Surya.

Loved sukanya teasing jodha.

Jodha all blushing..

True jodha. U are going to have tough time with bhavi di naughty jalal. Let's say Jalal will going to have tough time with stubborn Jodha😆

Actually I wanted to show bonding between sisters... which I failed to show in the past... even when Jalal send her back to Amer...

Fabricating 3 kids...hahaha.. even I laughed at this point..

Heheheh... I was trying to show... Shivani innocence... she still in gudde guddi love😆

Oh my god.. mirza & shivani tooo fast.. I love this couple but unfortunately in serial they are not couple.

What I desired to see in serial and I write it in my imagination... I wanted Mirza and Shivani... together in the serial too

Thanks to u for Making them as couple.

😳

Shivani truly kid. Still her mind had to mature. She accepted so fast. &

Its so hot di.. their hot encounter..

Both kissing..hmmm..

In this three sister Jodha is tooo slow🤣 other two are express jet😆

What will happen to shivani if jodha is there. I got to remember jalal struggling to stop jodha when sukanya & Surya kissing.

hehhe... probably Jodha fainted🤣

Thank god she is not there or else Our pyari jalal will be in great trouble to stop her. Hahaha...

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Oh god. They confessed just now. & shivani insecure.. very sad for mirza. He has to be little patience.. he should not scold her.

He felt frustrated at her rude and childish behavior.

Hope both patch up soon..

Yeh quick wala make and break up hai🤣

Political side of jalal. Wow.. tooo good. Interesting di..

Jalal talking calmly. Don't underestimate the cool lion folks. It's just calmness before strome.

Jalal thinking.. it proves clearly that only he has the ability to become the great shahensha..

Awww I am so glad ... U felt that for my Jalal... chalo mehnat safal hui😳

Yah Allah what u did.without thinking u accepted mirza marriage with king sabal daughter. & he knows that mirza loves shivani..oh god.. what will happen next.

What i did😆... U should know... by this time... I love drama... I don't like to spare anyone🤣... I believe problem strength love and relation... they both need this problems to understand each other.

Eagerly waiting for ur next update. Plz update soon di.

We can't wait di..

Yaar I will try my best😳

Thank u sooo much for the wonderful update.

Thanks for the pm.

Plz update soon..

Love U too🤗

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

hy di ...

Hi MAVI🤗

how r you? finally m unressing it 😊
I will comment on chapter lately but I want to say these three magical words to you that you r
STUPENDOUS TREMENDOUS AND FANTABULOUS WRITER. Love you for the update .
😳 😳
di seriously I adore your writing, I adore your thoughts your way to penning down the chapter is really out of words no word is setting appropriate to describe 😊

ME SPEECHLESS😎... ME BLUSHING☺️... MY CHEEKS TURN RED😳

Now coming to chapter
Chapter: JODHA was lost in her and jalal's la la land...😳 continuously blushing while reminiscing a her and jalal's kiss and sensual encounter 😳 . Really how hard it was for JALAL to control on his desire to get intimate with his love of his life😕 and JODHA ... really hats off to her to get such a strong hold on her desire after when her husband was insanely desperate for her😆 but she is right at her place with her POV that the obstacles were in their life due to some bad omen and she don't want any evil happening in their life.😊

She even realized that somewhat she was wrong... but when it comes to his life... she doesn't care... she sensed bad omen... but I agree it is not easy to control your desire when you both are so desperate and on top it's been more than six month... long separation...

Omg 😲 she was in her land when she encountered with her father😳

😆Poor girl...can't even dream properly

the way she gets controlled on her thinking,I love it 😊 bharmal was so distressed about political issues and sukanya 😔 after all father is father, he can't see his daughter in tears . And its genuine when any father see his princess in tears her tears broke his heart . But I love the way JODHA understands his fears and console him 😊 father and daughters bonding love it 😊

You know this chapter... I write with a lot of thoughts... I wanted rectify my mistakes... I felt through out the story I focused on Jalal and Jodha only ...so I emphasis on other character ... I am glad U enjoyed it.

Sisters cute banter, sukanyas silly and shameless talks. 😃 he he, sukanya is getting chirpy and naughty day by day. JODHA cares her sister a lot loves her so much that. even she can't think how sukanya will feel after betrayal.

Betrayal...? Do you think Surya will betray her?

Omg!! shirza (Shivani and Mirza) story has started . but di still Shivani is unmatured but Mirza, for him it is difficult to control his desires . In this, it clearly looks that he is brother of JALAL 😛 🤣

Yap Shivu is tooo childish...

but what JALAL is doing 😕 he is fixing his alliance for political reason.😔 but y Mirza didn't tell him the truth of his and shivani falling in love .

Mirza thought Jalal is going through a lot... and also Mirza and Shivani fought so he was not sure how to handle it... and all this political issue was so sudden for Mirza as well...

But here also I adore your writing the way you describe political issues. Di I want to say that you should give this new political turn to this story. I want to see jalal's cunning and shrewd mind in this situation . You have portrayed his character out of way romantically and his anger . But now want to see his political mind too.

I am glad U like this new Jalal...😳

Again coming to akdha land, always loved it adore it . Their cute nok jhok . But I can also feel jalal's pain for rukayia at last she is his best friend, and first wife . They share their childhood together after all .

I am so happy to read... U agree with my pov... glad U didn't complain😆 Yes this deep bond doesn't break just like that...

JODHA secretly envied rukayia, she tried to look sexy and what moti is saying to her really funny . I can't imagine jalal's cute innocent shy and naive JODHA in sexual avatar even JALAL can't imagine it . But overall I love their talks, sensual touches and more.

Jodha and seductive no way😆

But we want update soon di
please update soon .Waiting for update

Sure... I will update fast😳
pm me, and thanks for pm this chapter. Di its a humble request continue the story for those who loves your story .

I have got such an amazing response that I have decided to continue story with big track😛

don't disappoint us just finishing the story with two chapters. We want to see political twist in story. again update soon

Sure thank U for such a lovely comment Mavi🤗