Ts : New beginning part 3 updated on page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi I guys how r u all ?
Here is my two shot
This is not romantic story between Jo ja but story is about mostly jodha.
This is not my own imagination or my thought I read this type of story in some magazine and I m posting it here after modify as per my test. As always ignore grammatical mistakes. 😊😃
Have nice day all of u

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Part 1

its cold winter morning its very cold weather in masoori.

Moti slowly open her eyes and hear slow sobs of soneone. She surprise and see in direction of sobs. She see her newly weded bhabhi jodha sitting in corner and crying continuously . moti remember yesterday's event happened in her house .

FLASHBACK

after her big brother surya's wedding everyone seems very happy.
They just arrived home after taking beautiful bride with them and post marriage ritual is going on. But suddenly her brother surya who works in Indian army get letter from high command that he needs to present on his post asap possible.

Everyone fill sad that its just few hours his marriage was completed and he got call from high command but no one can do anything its his duty. And her brother went to fulfill his duty towards nation.

After 10 days of marriage they got a very shocking and sad news that her brother died in enemy's attack.

But she think about jodha what a cruel game played by her fate. She even can't enjoy her marriage life or u can say that she just start to live her new life and its got destroy. She be came widow in just 10 days of her marriage.

After ' antimsanskar ' her parents deside to send back jodha to her parents house
back. Which she never like she even told her parents that they r not doing right. But her parents told her that its for only jodha if she stay at her parents house for some time then she fill good.

After 1 month when jodha come back yesterday her parents denied to accept jodha. They even told jodha as ' abhagni '
( unlucky ) and blem jodha for her brother's death. Moti had enough of this nonsense of her parents how can they blem jodha for her brother's death? What is her fault in her brothers death? Instead of gave her shoulder to cry they r kicking her out of house. Then she see jodha who fall on her knee's and pleading her parents to let her stay in this house after marriage with sourya this is only my house where else she go ? Even she can stay in any corner of this house as a maid but let her stay in this house even her parents kick her out of house by telling her that now this is only her house and she have no right to stay at their house. And after this jodha cried loudly.

But then also her parents ( moti's ) don't
Allow jodha to stay in this house. First time in her life moti hate her parents for being this cruel on jodha she even very much angry on jodha's parents. How can parents do this to her daughter? Is parents responsibility is till her daughter's marriage? After that they have no responsibility towards their daughter?
She think that if her parents also thought same like jodha's parents ?

She see jodha was running towards her and fall in her knee's and plead her to support her. Moti get very emotional and her eyes get wet she hold jodha and help her to stand up and hug her . after seeing this her parents get angry on her and scold her. And her father dragg jodha towards door. Jodha still pleading her parents.

After seeing jodha's innocent eyes moti can't stop herself now. She went towards jodha and drag her in her room and lock the door. And first she help jodha to shit on bed and hug her. Jodha also get very emotional and hug her back tightly
and cried her heart out. After sometime moti cup jodha's face and told her " don't worry jodha I m here for u "
Jodha replies with sob " but ur parents ... "
Mothi cut her in between and told " shhh... Jodha ekdum chip ho jao ap kahi nahi ja rahi he ap yahi mere sath rahegi "
Jodha overwhelmed by listening this and told " thanku moti par me tumhare or tumhare parents me bich me nahi ana chati meri vajah se tum apne parents sent lado wo muje nahi manzoor he tumne mera itna sath diya wo hi kafi he "
Moti hold jodha tightly and told her " jodha bhabhi suniye ek bat ap mere bhai ki patni ge wo bhai jisne muje hamesa support kiya he to aj me kese apko is halat me kese chod du "
Jodha try to protest " but moti..."
Moti cut her in between " see jodha abhi tum chup chap yahi so jao ham kal subah bat karenge "

Jodha nodded moti smile and told her to relax herself she will be back in minutes.
Jodha went to bathroom to change and when she come back she think for a while and lie down on floor. Moti come back and see jodha lying down on floor and went towards her and wake her up and told " bhabhi ye kya ap niche zamin pe kyu so gayi yaha bed pe so jaiye "
Jodha denied and said " na moti tumne muje yaha pe rehne diya wo hi mere liye bahot he warna me itni raat ko jati me yahi zamin pe thik hu "
Moti first remain silent and think how a good and innocent she is even after my mom dad do this much to her she don't want that me and my parents fight for her.
Moti hold jodha and said " bhabhi ap much nahi bolegi chup chap bed or so jaiye mere sath agar so muje apni choti bahen manti he to meri ye bat bhi manegi "
Jodha again speechless and hug her tightly before lying down on bed. Moti to sleep near jodha and promise her brother that she will fight for jodha if need she also leave house with jodha.

FLASHBACK OVER

Precape : clash between moti and her parents and entry of our hero and start new life of jodha

Will update second part in after sometime or tomorrow







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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful story dear
And real buddy
Ye sab humari society mein hota hain 😡
Plz update next part fast dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nicely written dear
Just love the concept
Poor Jodha
How her parents do that to her??
Moti is best
How much she support her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

Nicely written dear
Just love the concept
Poor Jodha
How her parents do that to her??
Moti is best
How much she support her



THANKU for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept dear
Thanks for pm
Waiting for next part
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept dear
seriously dear this is reality of our society
forgot other people our own family does not support in such situations
all blame come only on women directly or indirectly, this is harsh reality of our society
god only know when it change
please update next part fast dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice chappy dear
Concept is different
How they all be narrow minded
Even Jo's parents too much
Moti n Jodha bonding is emotional
Update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Nice chappy dear

Concept is different
How they all be narrow minded
Even Jo's parents too much
Moti n Jodha bonding is emotional
Update soon buddy


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Nice chappy dear

Concept is different
How they all be narrow minded
Even Jo's parents too much
Moti n Jodha bonding is emotional
Update soon buddy

Precap is damn interesting
Eagerly waiting for our Hero's entry

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