Ts : New beginning part 3 updated on page 8 - Page 9

Originally posted by: pinu20

Wonderful update dear
Agar possible ho to plz ise continue kro

Originally posted by: lolo91

hi dear

congratulation for ur story

i dont know if i will be able to read it as it deserve

but it has too much hindi scentence and i dont know hindi

i will try to understand as much as i can \

and i wish ur next story will be in english or translate the hindi

thanks dear

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Superb yar
Well I can say Moti is the super hero here in ur story
She well supported her bhabi even though she has to go against that selfish family
Wow jalal has fallen in love with her in the first sight
He is even ready to marry her
She deserves happiness
Finally marriage took place
And moti need a baby who ll call her maasi
Lovely one yar
Yes indeed a new beginning
Think once to make its a SS or ff

Originally posted by: Hm1608

Thnkxx for cmmnt

Sorry di i alredy write full story before i update 1st part

And i alredy start to write my new ss