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Posted: 9 years ago


will update it tonight if i get time😃
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chapter 3 (kabhi pyaar tho kabhi thraar)


next day all participate got one one couch in that way jodha and jalal also got one couch , jodha and jalal got young couch

Jodha reach in practice hall , jalal still didnt came but the couch was there
jodha was puzzled who is he now ? then couch introduce himself to jodha then jodha intro herself too

then couch ask about jalal then jodha say in low voice to herself

kash wo aye hi nahi

then couch says did u say some thing ?

then jodha said , i mean may b he is on the way


Jodha and couch sit on the practice hall , start discussing abt competition

after waiting
half hour for jalal but he is no where to see

Jodha was irritating and bit nervous and uncomfortable too first because she have to performance with monster and second
after very long time she wear pant and shirt normally
she wear shalwar and kameez when she come to college
just because of moti today she wear that

moti force her to wear pant and shirt because she convince jodha and
make her understand that it will be easier for her to practice in pant and shirt then she agree with moti

on other side
couch fed up to wait now , he is about to walk out in anger
at the same time
jalal enter in the practice hall then couch looked at jalal furiously and he says

you are late jalal muhmmad not late very late

then jalal put his hand on his waist , start mimicry like amitabh bachchan and he says

rishte mein hum tumere baap lagte hai naam hai shehansha and he start laughing on couch , jalal says

chill sir iam late only 20 mins

then jodha cut him , she says correction please not 20 min but half hour mr jalal then jalal
turn his face , he become shocked to see
jodha in pant and cute polo pink shirt at the moment he is just starring her , indeed
she is looking superb cute today, jalal went toward and he whisper in low voice
very cute in next min , he become alert what the hell he is saying then
he change his words immediately and he says mere matlab


kya tum baith ke time gin rahe thi miss mata before jodha say some thing to him
couch interpret
and he says

stop its guys no more argument lets start practice we already waste
many time today first iam going to tell u three base steps ok

then couch call his partner and start showing jalal and jodha first step , couch says to jodha and jalal
watch us and listen carefully


Jalal first takes ur partner right hand in ur left and places ur right hand on her left shoulder
and The Jodha should keep her left hand on jalal right shoulder, with her arm over his.

and start moving slowly on the rhythm like this , then couch ask
them did they understand ?
then both nodded
couch continue and he says
now u both going to show us first step


then jalal and jodha stand up from their place
jalal come in front of jodha and ask her hand in full attitude

jodha in her heart :

kaha pas gaye mein iss monster ke saath🥱


Jodha was dam nervous and she was not understanding how to place her hand on jalal shoulder and how to give her hand to him
which jalal noticed
then he take jodha hand by his self and place it on his shoulder and he says

mein tumei kaa nahi jao ga tum aise dar rahe ho jaise tumere saamne koi janwar kada ho

then jodha move her hand from his shoulder and she says

tum kisi janwar se kam bhi nahi samjhe

when jalal heard jodha call him animal there only he lost his temper then he grab jodha arm very harshly , pull her toward him

Jalal says : jodha mere andar ke janwar soo raha hai uss ko soone do warna na

before he complete his sentence couch shout top of his voice and he says

stop it jodha and jalal otherwise iam going , like this we never going to win this competition that poor
principal and miss malpekar have soo much confident on u guys they think
u both gonna nailed it but i dont think so , because u guys are fighting more and practicing less like this we never win this competition
i request u both please cooperate , keep aside ur differences for god sake atleast for this competition
if guys take this responsibility take it seriously at the end u both are very famous in the college , all student and teacher
have some expectation from you guys

then both jodha and jalal feel guilty and both say sorry at the same time to the couch

then Jalal again gave his hand to jodha
this time jodha give her hand to jalal without uttering ,jalal brought jodha in center of the hall like royal princess

Jalal placed jodha hand on his shoulder and Place his right hand just underneath her shoulder blade
then both start moving on the soft music but without eye contact then suddenly couch stop them and he says

stop stop
tum dono ek dusre ko dekh kyu rahe ho ? like bhai aur behen dance kar rahe ho

then jalal furiously turn his face to couch side and he says

behen hoge tere samjhe , jalal didnt like at all when couch address jodha as his sister
and jodha was also shocked with his reaction but she like that reaction 😃

then couch says

ok sorry i was just giving example please look at each other eyes bring some romantic feeling on ur performance
couch gets some important call , then couch says

guys have to leave now u guys practice this first step for today then couch handover jodha a laptop and he says
choose ur song also for today ok then tomorrow we will dont waste our time on song then he says
see u guys tomorrow


when couch walk out , jalal start stretching and yawning in the funny way he says

mata ur soo boring seriously mujhe neend arahe hai tumere saath ur first girl jis ke saath mujhe
neend arahe hai where with other girl i use to enjoy alot

jodha keep laptop on the floor and she folded her arms and she says

then why u choose me as ur partner hay , wahi cheap ladkiyo mei kisi ko partner bana lete
atleast mere din tho tumere sath kharab tho nahi hota

then jalal grab her hand , pull her toward him very strongly , put his hand on her waist and he says

because tumne jalal muhammad ko mana kiya its ur punishment baby

then jodha jerk his hand and she says

stay away from me okay then jodha took laptop from the floor and go toward table put laptop on table and sit on chair and she says

monster we already waste much time on silly fight ,can u please come here
because now we have to choose our song for competition

then jalal make funny face like whatever
he go toward jodha , he pretend like he is abt to sit on her lap
jodha was puzzled what the hell he is trying to do then she get up from her seat fastly and she says

what the hell ur trying to do monster ?

then

jalal didnt reply her at the moment and sit on the same chair and he says

actually second chair was kept soo far and in me no energy was left to go there and bring that i know if i try to sit on ur lap probably u will get up .
he start laughing on jodha
then jodha says

seriously ur impossible

then Jodha stamps her foot and goes to bring another chair for her
then
Jodha and jalal start checking various video in youtube
first time they sitting soo close to each other while jodha was busy searching the songs and
jalal was just staring at jodha with love first time

jalal to himself :

man she is so different from other girl , other girl always try to seduce me and try to impress me becoz of my money she is the first girl
since 1 hour we are to gather but not even once she try to do some thing like that

while jalal busy starring her , jodha turn her face , noticed jalal starring her then jalal suddenly
Murmured so different, jodha shockingly said what ?

then jalal come back to his sense and he try to change the topic and he says

i mean kyu ,why ur selecting old songs ? u want to make whole student gets sleep in our performance time

then jodha make angry face and she says

forgot it , listen this one iam sure u gonna love it

while jodha was busy talking about that song . lyric. movie and dance ,which make jalal hell bore and he gets sleep on table

when she see no response from him , she turn her face
she found jalal is sleeping on table like kids bore from teacher lecture


then automatically one soft smile come on her face and she start talking to herself

sota huwa kitna cute aur pyaar lagta hai jab jaga rehta hai ek dam monster lagta hai

jodha control beti control tumne jalal ko cute kaha then she softly hit her head with her hand and control her feeling at the moment



then suddenly some thing click on jodha naughty😃 , she take out water bottle from her bag and open the bottle , pour whole water on jalal head
jalal wake up because that water was really cool , jalal puzzled who dare to do that ,he saw bottle on jodha hand , then he start looking for tissue paper but in that class room no tissue box was there then he grab jodha bag and start whipping water from his face and he says

how dare you miss mata

then at the moment jodha try to control her laughter but she burst out in to laugh she says

yes i did because ur sleeping in the class where its our duty to search song together , u dont have any moral principles
one girl searching a song since half and hour first u reject my all selected songs without listening then this
i must say ur
impossible to deal mr jalal

then jalal get up and he says

khoon ke badle khoon paani ke badle paani then he snatch bottle from jodha hand
now jodha knw what jalal going to do and she says

jalal no please no listen to me i did that becoz ur sleeping
in that way that was ur mistake


then jodha get up from her seat and start running , jalal also start running to her back
both were running around the table like kid
like
jodha aage aage aur jalal uss ke piche piche


jodha become tired and she said stop , jalal also stop then she continue

u want to through water on me right
then jalal nodded like kid and he says yes i want to take revenge bas

then she says
ok fine i stood here through water on me but from ur place only
then he ask

if u move then ? after all i cant trust u

then jodha says
iam not cheater like u ok then jalal nodded , he evilly grin while opening
a water bottle
and he through water fastly toward that way ,jodha cleverly move a side and whole water comes on miss malpekar head

then both become hell shocked from where miss malpekar came ? jodha murmur

hum dono gaye

then jalal start laughing on miss malpekar like he forgot that she is her teacher

then jodha go toward jalal , she hold jalal right arm , she indicated with her eyes to control his laugh then jalal control

precap : jodha and jalal get punishment from miss malpekar




Edited by Susan.Dsouza - 7 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update fast buddy
I m waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swriter

Update fast buddy
I m waiting



DONE😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb. ..jj getting well with each other. .water fight was nice. ...Interested about precap. .continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
AMAZING CHAPPY DEAR
JALAL GET LATE FOR PRACTICE
I LIKE JODHA'S COMMENT "KASH WO AAYE HI NAHI"😆
OMG JODHA WORE JEANS AND SHIRT FIRST TIME IN COLLAGE😃😳
AND SEEING JO JALAL GET MESMARIZED AND SAID "VERY CUTE"

I LIKE THE WAY JALAL UNDERSTAND JO'S NERVOUSNESS AND KEEP HER HAND ON HIS SHOLDER BY HIMSELF😃😃
HAHAHA...JALAL GOT FURIOUS AFTER LISTENING COUCH'S WORD WHEN HE ADDRESS THEM BOTH OF THEM AS BROTHER AND SISTER🤣...AND THE AMAZING LINE BY HIM "BEHEN HOGI TERI"😆😆

JALAL IS VERY SMART. HE TAKE THE CHAIR FROM JO VERY SMARTLY😎😎
BOTH JOJA ADMIRRING EACH OTHER😳❤️

WOW WATER FIGHTING SCENE IS REALLY AMAZING🤣
OMG JALAL THREW WATER ON MISS MALPECR😲😲
I THINK NOW BOTH ARE GONE😛

THE WHOLE CHAPPY WAS SO AMAZING...I WAS ENJOYING IT
UPDATE NEXT SOON
EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT CHAPPY
THANK YOU DEAR FOR PM
Edited by Akdhalover6898 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hwww...its really a cute story 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
I liked your way of writing ..
Nice update .. will read full soonish..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Susan its lovely chapter dear
Jodha and Jalal's little nok Jhok was fun to read
And the emoji's 😆 loved them yaar
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW this chappy was hilarious and the emoji's you have used are making it more interesting
Awesome Buddy👏
JoJa doing the dance moves together
Coach calls them brother & sister, Jalal shouts at him
Then Jalal's notorious act to get Jo out of the chair and then sleeping infront of her😆
Then water fight, out and out entertaining chapter buddy👍🏼

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