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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Chapter 38 -teaser

"Many a times I make a plan and then fate makes another plan for me ..." softly massaging the puffed knuckles, Jodha sighed. Rocking the swing with his dangling foot, Jalal amusedly watched his girl tending and talking. Seated across him, with legs curled under knees and seriously giving her explanations - "Ah!! Jooo.." his demanding heart moaned for more of her but the always on-guard sensibility immediately condemned. Darn you!! Focus on her words, not on their source!! Obediently heeding to the inner voice, Jalal drifted his gaze to a safer direction - down to her fingers.

"When I left from office, I left with complete confidence of returning home by Seven but.." she paused to blow air and warm up his chilled fingers. "Little I knew fate reserved this day for another dose of your wrath," glimpsing up, she winked and he chuckled.

"And you seem to have no qualms about it?" he quipped. "No sharp retorts, no slamming doors on face, no cold shoulders... You're exceptionally calm and dealt the situation with great poise. Why missy?"



Because you are my everything!...Revealing the secret behind her sloga...😆

The ever smart BOSS make her to blurt out on her own...😉
Edited by Jeryl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti



You know what.. you just reflected what I had in mind..👏
Only difference is your answer was elaborated.. Jodha's was in one line.. I'll PM u the line I wrote... My way of acknowledging your time and affection for PBD 🤗

🤗 🤗
I knew it di that Jo's answer will be one sentence only but I write this paragraph just to share my thoughts!!😊
Also,my little brain couldn't think of one sentence for this😆
Once again I have fallen in love with ur imagination.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeryl


Wow...Wow...Payal well reflected thoughts 👏👏👏
Forget about what Jahnu might come up with...your take is equally good 🤣

Thanks dear. Needless to say,jhanvi Di's dialogues are better..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeryl



Because you are my everything!...Revealing the secret behind her sloga...😆

The ever smart BOSS make her to blurt out on her own...😉



No Rose.. not close 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti



No Rose.. not close 😆




Lost touch with PBD haan... 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read, read and read again your lines Payal.. and I fell in neck-deep love with Jalal... again ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeryl




Lost touch with PBD haan... 😡


Not losing touch.. may be overdose of PBD with early updates 🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

I read, read and read again your lines Payal.. and I fell in neck-deep love with Jalal... again ☺️

🤗 🤗
We all are in love with this jalal di
Shrewd but calm.
Faithful yet playful.
Responsible son,understanding husband/bf.
Best lover.⭐️⭐️

Where do we get such a man in reality??
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Posted: 9 years ago
CONGRATS on the New thread...
Beautiful teaser...like husband- wife convo...family time...

So is it...Bcos you're Family...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: selvi1275

CONGRATS on the New thread...

Beautiful teaser...like husband- wife convo...family time...

So is it...Bcos you're Family...



Nice guess.. but not quite there 😉
Hubby-wifey convo.. let me add TO BE 😆

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