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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Thank you for telling her Deekshu...😆😆😃

YUP DIKSHU THANKS

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My Rhyme:
[The original]
Teddy Bear,Teddy Bear turn around
Teddy Bear Teddy Bear touch the ground
Teddy bear Teddy Bear jump up high
Teddy Bear Teddy Bear touch the sky

Teddy Bear Teddy Bear bend down low
Teddy bear Teddy Bear touch your toes
Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear turn out the light
Teddy Bear, Teddy Bear say Goodnight!

My remix:

Jodha Rani Jodha Rani ran around
Jodha Rani Jodha Rani at last found
Jodha Rani Jodha Rani Jumped up high
Jodha Rani Jodha Rani got the dove who couldn't fly

Jalalluddin, Jalalluddin went for a war
Jalalluddin, Jalalluddin got all he asked for
Jalalluddin Jalalluddin who learnt to know only blood
Jalalluddin Jalaluddin later saw love coming as a flood!

Karkuzhali.

WOW AUNTY NICE ,CUTE RHYTHM LOVE IT
AND THE RIMIX IS SUPER AWESOME

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My tribute to the Jodha Akbar Forum


(Inspired by "A Poem of tribute to the family")


I don't know when it started,
Or how it all began,
But God created families
As only our Lord can;


He was teaching what it means
To love , honour and obey
He wanted a strong bond
That we don't see too much today


He wanted someone to hold us
And show respect for others
And he wanted someone who'd be gentle
And so he created mothers


He wanted someone strong
A support filled with love
And so he created fathers
Sent from heaven up above;


Brothers and sisters came next
With that, an instant friend
Someone to look up to
Someone on who to depend.


When he put them all together
He was amazed at what he has done
He has created a family
Father mother daughter and son;


But look at the family
Created only by two
How many we've become
All because of you


We have a lot to be thankful for
The memories through the years
The many times together
Full of laughter , full of tears


I don't know where would be today
If it weren't for the two of you
To show us strength,support and love
Like only the two of you can do!


My Tribute:

I know when it started
Or when it all began
Since JA was the forum
I was instantly drawn in by its decorum

It was where I met writers
Who posted many wonderful letters
Which was an amalgum of different tastes
That we rarely see with so much chaste!

It made all of us hold together
And made us respect each other
And there were so many outstanding
Who commanded respect in everything

It was made strong and unique
By our famous Shyamala who's a critic
Also it had a commentary bubbly
By Harshu with her daily 'googly'

And we had others coming next
Friends who followed these two to the best
And it is true , but for these friends
It wouldn't have crossed pages of thousands;

And when they all joined and came united as one
With their fiction, essays, and articles of fun
And the mischiefs of the chipmunks seen all over
It kindled the poet that wasn't in me ever

But look at our family of so many admirers
Created by the one and only JA show
How very big we have grown
All because of you who are best known

I have a lot to be thankful forLi'l Shagun
Who brought forth its memories full in a 'wagon'
Through the tireless efforts she had taken
To remember our AkDha lest it's forgotten!

I don't know where I'd be today
If it weren't for you the JA fans
I wouldn't be a member in the fray,
And enjoying all the fun as a gourmet!🥳

Karkuzhali.

NICE ONE AUNTY LOVE IS
YOU ARE SUPER AWESOME 👏 👏

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Thank you very much Hema, (I guess that's your name.)

Saraswathi Aunty.

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: karkuzhali
Thank you very much Hema, (I guess that's your name.)
Saraswathi Aunty.

MY NAME IS HEMAXI
MY FRIENDS CALLED ME HEMU
BUT ITS OK YOU CALLED ME HEMA 😳

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

WOW AYUSHI I JUST LOVED YOUR ALL SONG IN

Ayusi you have awesome memory of song and superb choice to put a fitted one.. Always love to read your song as your reviews

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

My dear Akka,

You have your own beautiful and rear way of expression 😊. How exactly put ja family's emotion and thought what they got for life long you wrote it all. Loved The best work and you.🤗

Mitali

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Shagun just love it. So beautifully write up detailed description of best soul talk and bring back that day.

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Thank you my dear Mitali. This is perhaps the best appreciation I have received for my poem. "A beautiful and a rare way of Expression"🤗

All this is possible because I am also a family member of JA!😃

Saraswathi Akka.

Originally posted by: melovesja
My dear Akka,
You have your own beautiful and rear way of expression 😊. How exactly put ja family's emotion and thought what they got for life long you wrote it all. Loved The best work and you.🤗
Mitali

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Dear Lashy,
Thank you very much for your comments.
Perhaps you have not read my earlier ones, mostly posted in Shyamala's "Of Human Bondage" thread. My most favourite one is the one on P95 of the thread " A post when I say good morning..."( link www.India-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4535250&TPN=95).

Periamma.

I read the other one that you sent me link to... and now this too, Periyamma...

But I still think this one.. in this thread... is the most beautiful rhyme of the lot