AKDHA SS : BECOUSE I WANT YOU IN MY REST ALL LIVES .ch-6 completed

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: lolo91
res😊

When you gonna Unres 😉

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hala

@lolo91

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#582

oh hemu ..mind blowing story ..i loved it so much

its very amazing concept and very beautiful update

i loved it so much dear

radha is such a cute baby , the part were she try to hug jalal with her little chuppy hand was absoultly my fav

oh jalal and her are so in harmony , its the fatherhoood🤗

finally jalal knew that radha is his daughter through dna ..he is so happy and proud papa

god this maham😡 she is the worst person ever

glade jalal knew the truth, it was very scary the convo between maham and jo ..she is such a shamless person

oh the part where radha and jo talk😭

jalal is really great...he could have been able to protect his jo from maham ..she should have told him ..but alas every thing is great now

now they will live happily😃

amazing story ..u r great writer hemu ..keep writing and update all ur story

i am sorry for late un res i forgot ..silly me😆

Edited by lolo91 - 8 years ago

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#583

Fabulous update hemu ...Finally Jo Ja found their first child and this maham was behind all this ...good that Jalal threw her out of the house ...A happy ending it is .

Thanks for pm dear

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#584

Cute update Hemu
Jodha had to keep so much from jalal for his safety
Thanks for this cute story
Nd pm

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misty

@misty22

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#585

Its the last chapter.. . M cryin nd cryin. . . Y u did ds to me. . . Ur evil dii. . . . God knows how will be able to survive ds . Nd wat will i do without ir stories . . Promise me u ll neva stop writing . . Else i ll kill u fr sure. . . Arghhh. I cnt stop dese stupid tears . .

Today i feel so blessed . . I feel so connected to u. .

Ur an angel. . U hv md me better.

Nd the spirituality nd beauty dat u exhibit is so pure. .

M in lv wd u nd ur stories diii. . . . U hv always amazed me wd ur wrk. . Bt today its soo different . .

I was crying reading d chappy . Tears of happiness nd yup cz it ws ending. .

. It is soo damn difficult to bid farewell to a impending journey nd its been sooo bfull wd u. . .

M soo addicted nd not to mention it its a healthy addiction . . .

I will neva be able to frgt this story . . Its been really close to my heart. .

Nd lk ur oder stories will read it again nd again every night before sleeping cz u know it gvs me kinda peaceful feeling . . .

The chappy was sooo astounding . M overwhelmed . The beginning scared me too. . .

My heart was beating at an uncontrollable pace. .

I felt wat jo felt. . See dats the magic of ur bfull thoughts nd hands . . . Wish to meet u one day. . Uts my dream . . Nd wanna know how ur imagination is soo wode nd bfull. . . Ur a fairy. . . A bfull obe indeed who chants magical spells nd enchant us all. . . .

Kk the chappy . . I fly away in ur praise.

... He cares sooo much fr jo.. jalal is such a sweet hubby . . . M soo happy jo gt bak his first baby... Wen i read d diary it was sooo emotional... It hurts soo much... I mean maham.. She is a witch.. She kept jo frm her child.. Tried to seperate dm... Nd how much jo suffered... It was soo killin... She had herself gt sacrificed... Bt dere lv md it through... M soo happy fr dm.. Nd maham start ur countdown... My jalal is gonna cut u down.. Bt now attacking his family was a bad option indeed . . .

He is sooo encouraging . . He too is wrried bt d way he consoles jo is soo heart touching . . .

I wanna cry. . . Again. . My story ended. . .

Kk. . M strong . . No m nt

Ya where was I. .

Nd radha . . Cn it be anymore sweeter .

. Nope neva

Wish it was all real. . Bt d way u write its more dn real. . Thanku fr ds wonderful experience . . .

Bt m sooo happy dey made it through... Dey r strong...

. . He is a super loving father .

A family it is.. A bfull one.

Awww. . . 2 lil jo's. . . .most bfull

Sooo cute. . . I cn imagine ja will be increasing jo's wrk by spoiling dose lil barbies . . He will be a grt dad. . .

. M soooi happy dat i was a fortune reader of ds awsm story. Lv u. Dii.. Muahhh my darling dii. . . Thnku fr pm nd solly fr late reply..

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 8 years ago

#586

Sweet and happy ending

Jo-ja got their kids and spared from maham

thanks for pm

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#587

Sweet and Happy Ending.😳

Nice story😛 Jalal and Jodha got to live happily with their kids and Maham thrown out.

Keep writing dear😳

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#588

Fantastic Update

Maham deserves everything now that Jalal dished out

I cannot believe she was behind it all

but glad too that everyone is now happy

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#589

Page 83
Interesting teaser
Thanks for pm

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#590

Chappy -6..
Omg u updates babes..
Kaise khayal aaya update karne ka but thanks to Mishu..
Awesome chappy..
I totally loved it..
How sweet Radha found comfort in his father arm...
Ja never leave a chance to do romance but same time care also..
While in labour pain ja is joking..
Bale bale botj r having cute girl but other is dead..
Babes mujhse kaise kyu lag raha hai ki tu suspense bana rahi hai..
I dont think 2 baby is dead..
Atlast ja ka dimag chala n DNA test jarways..
All is shocking for Ja behavior..
Finally they r happy..
Ab kuch romance ho jaye babes..
Thanks for pm..
No Sry for late reply.. Heee

Edited by ANJIJHA - 8 years ago