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Posted: 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello dearies hope you all doing well...
I am here to end my one of story "BECAUSE I WANT YOU IN MY REST ALL LIVES" To Which you all give good response and so much love and I thought now it's time to let it complete and I choose this day because this story is so special for some who have her birthday today so this update is dedicated to my dearest rasgulla my mishu akka misty22...
SO here is update enjoy it dearies...

CHAPTER 6 (LAST PART)


AT EVENINGTIMES,
AT HOSPITAL,

Jodha all ready to go back home sweet home having lots of happiness in her heart...

Jalal told radha to stay at villa for giving surprise to Jodha...and being obedient kid radha is eagerly waiting for them at home...waiting for her mom and little baby sis...

"jalal, where is radha...? "ask Jodha with little tensed tone... Infect almost with crying face...

" hey.. Hey..!!!! Jodha it's not time to cry my sweetie... Its time to celebration... We got back our baby... Which we think we lost... But destiny make us together again... Plzzz don't be sad my sweetie... Plzzz " jalal hug her tightly to console her.. Because he knows how much Jodha have regret in her heart regarding loosing their first baby... Specially it very hard for jodha to digest the new about death of her first baby... She almost in unconscious condition at that time... But some how the love of lover (jalal) and love of baby (first baby) make her alive again...

"no jalal I wanted to apologise to my baby my Jaan not to make her safe from eyes of evils... Plz take me at home as early as possible... Plz" she started all most crying in begging tone

Jalal drove the car at home as early as possible knowing once they reached home Jodha is no more sad...

AT VILLA,

Trio reached at home as early as possible... And here their surprise radha is all ready in baby pink colour frock with floral print... Which makes her looking like a real angel... Such a cutie pie... Jalal really got lost in her beauty... He started to see his Jodha in little avtar... And started to dreaming his Jodha must be such a cute darling such a cutie pie in her childhood... Because radha looking just like a real replica of Jodha in this avtar...

Jalal come near to Jodha's ear and wishpered, " Jodha I want to see your childhood pic..." (wink)

"hwww... Kyo...? "Jodha reply him in confused tone...

" see na our radha looking like an angel.. You must be like her na... I wann see you in such cutie pie avtar... " replying the answer jalal put his hand on Jodha's shoulder and take her near to the radha...

As they reached near to her radha put decoration stuff aside and wrapped her cubby hand around Jodha's legs...

Which make Jodha melted more, she give the little baby to jalal and take radha in her arms and started to kiss on her cubby cheeks and all over on her face...

JODHA : Finally... My baby... By baccha... Ohhh I really missing you to take you in my arms the day when I got to know I am going to mother of my first child... But..." (a lone tear ascap from her doe shape eyes)

RADHA : ( wipe those tears) no mom... It not your fault at all... I know you love me more then any thing... So no need for any explanation... And yeah remember I love you more more more and more... Always...

Jalal is watching all this in front of his eyes as if he is watching a God's such a wonderful creation such a lovely bond god ever made the MOTHER AND DAUGHTER...

JALAL: (lighten the mood of Jodha and radha) Hawww no one gonna miss me haan.. Don't you want to hug and give kiss to your papa, radha..?? (pout)

Radha jump out from Jodha's hold and come near to jalal and trying to hug him with her little cubby hands... And give a sweet kiss on his cheek with her little beautiful lips.. Jalal too hug her.. And whispered "THANK YOU" in her ear for such a cute gesture...

AFTER SOMETIME,

All are busy in their own works.. Jalal is watching TV and do some official work in laptop and Radha playing with her little sis... Here Jodha is some kind of scare... Because she knows the results as now they found their first baby...she have mixed emotions one side the happiness getting back her first baby and scared to loose her hubby...

JODHA'S DAIRY,

On the very pleasant day when no one at home Jodha is all alone at home while suddenly Jodha feel not so good and she called doctor...

Doctor come and checked her and the day Jodha got to know that she is going to be mother...

Her happiness have no boundaries now.. She wanted to share this happiness with her hubby but the reality come to her mind jalal is not there he is went yesterday night for business tour...

Doctor give some medicines to Jodha and take a leave from there...

Suddenly Jodha's mobile rang.. She run towards phone knowing it must be her hubby... Yes it was he...

"Jodhu my darling wife how's you..?? I am missing you like a hell sweetie..."jalal started his sweet complained to his wife.

"awww my hubby dear me to missed you being in your arms yesterday night.. You know what I didn't get proper sleep without my favourite pillow.. (pout) "Jodha replied him.

" Hawww jodhu now stop make me more desperate for your those pouty lips.. I wanted to kiss now them... "jalal started to talked becoming NOUGHTY.

Suddenly Jodha heared some noise from the down stairs... Here all the family members back to home now...

Jodha say goodbye to jalal and go down stairs to them...

All come back to home by seeing off to jalal including her mother in law, father in law, aunt maham, devar Mirza too...

Jodha come near to them and started to get blessings from them... As she come to maham she was turned her face other side and directly goes to her room...

All the while mirza noticed all this scenario and got angry on maham being rude to his dearest bhabhi...

To lighten Jodha's mood Mirza though to tease to Jodha...

"Bhabhi you should came with as to see off jalal bhai he feels good if you... Bhai is missing you " mirza say with wink on face..

" yup mirza but you know na if I come it is more tough for him to say goodbye to me.. " Jodha replied with low voice...

" ooo oh, cool down bhabhi. I didn't ment to make you sad I am just trying to tease you.. Don't take it seriously.. " Mirza say with panic tone...

"it's ok devar ji... No need for sorry. I am okk..." saying Jodha goes to kitchen to helping to her mother in law...

"Jodha Beta can you Plz make a tea for maham she is not feeling
well.. "Hamid told to Jodha

" yes, ammi I will make it but what did happened to her health..? " Jodha ask

" nothing to worry beta it just because of long travelling " Hamid reply.

AFTER SOMETIME,

Jodha take a cup of tea to maham's room...
(but here Jodha is totally unaware the most horrible dream of her becoming true...)

" What..? Doctor sharma... How does it possible that jalal going to be father.. No no you must do some mistakes... I can't believe you.. Even I my self give medicines to Jodha which you give me that not make Jodha pregnant... Then how it possible.. Haan.. Give me answer.."
Maham talk to their family doctor Mr. Sharma.

"yes,Mrs maham I know it but today morning Jodha ma'm called me and my self conformed it that she is pregnant.. " doctor replied.

some video call and the talk maham do make Jodha scared to the hell and the cup of tea in her hand is slipped out and that got maham attention towards Jodha...

Jodha's all words stuck on her throat she can't able to speak any thing and stand there like a life less body...

Maham come near to the door and open it full which is half open and take some pieces of glass from the ground in her hand.

Maham : Jodha see these broken pieces of glass...if you don't want to see your this child like this then don't open your mouth about your pregnancy in front of the family members...

Jodha : what type of mother you called your self..?? Haan who herself wanted to kill her son's child... Chiii... Same on you... If jalal is know about it he don't leave you alive...

Maham : sweety wait, who gonna tell him this all...??? You..?? If you want to see jalal in 100 pieces then for sure you can tell him I don't mind... But remember after that you lost both your husband and child too... If you want then you are free to say all this to jalal..

Jodha : why ammi.. Why..?? You hate our child this much.. Haan what did Jalal wrong to you that you have so much hate in your heart for him... Haan??

Maham : what did he did... Haan??? As if you didn't knew about it.. When jalal's father died he gave all property to jalal only and there is nothing lest me and my only child and you ask what he did... Waah...

Jodha : but jalal give all the things you and you son need... He never say no to you for anything... Even he give his first priority to you more then ammi... And still It's not enough for you.. Haan..??

Maham : Yeah he gave but I don't want this much I wanted all the property of humayu's company... All the power of him I want...not a small piece a want...amd for this I do anything...


Jodha goes from there without giving any utter having lots of tears in her eyes...

Hey kahna why...? Why Aunty is so cruel to my hubby.. He do everything for her and she wanted to kill his child... How heartless she is... Why??? (Jodha She is all the broken down now hearing the words of maham... Make her heart broken into pieces...)

AT NIGHT,

Jodha trying to sleep but sleep is far away from her beautiful eyes.. The words of maham is continuously running in her mind plus jalal is also not there with h
er to take her in his warm hug and say, "don't worry sweetie.. Everything gonna be OK.."

She must be thinking something to make their baby safe from maham's evil eyes...

AFTER 8 MONTH, THE DAY JALAL IS COMING BACK TO ATTENT MARRIAGE CEREMONY OF HIS BABY SISTER ,

Jalal on call, "hey my sweet darling how you doing...??" Jodha started to jump after hearing jalal's voice Nd reply, "jalal baby it's really you Ohhh my God I am gonna made today after hearing your voice after so long time... I love you sooo much jalal... But when you coming back jalal I am missing you like a hell... Plz come back na.. Now plz it's enough for me to stay with out you... Plz... " hearing the reply jalal's eyes full with tears he too wanted to take his wify in his hug and to pacify her... But some how controlling the tears jalal replied back," awww my sweet darling wife I am coming back tomorrow don't be sad... Plz... (lie to her as already he is on the way to their villa)

AFTER SOMETIME,

Jodha is in her room thing something...
Jalal come in side the room make sure not disturb Jodha and come very close to her and hug her from back... And started to kiss on her neck where she is wearing mangalsutra... Jodha is still in her thinking Stat but aware of that it a jalal who is kissing her... Turning towards him Jodha throw her self on jalal's hug and in this jalal is fell on bed and jodha in top of him... The black and silky hair of Jodha stick on jalal's face jalal remove them to getting clear vision of his wify... As soon as the hair removed the most beautiful face in the world for jalal come in front of him and he is started to kiss this beautiful face of Jodha if there is no tomorrow...
Ahhh ja.. L.. A... L
Jodha started to moan in his mouth... While kissing jalal make Jodha site on his lab and dippen the kiss more... And jodha as an obedient student just follow him...
In the shortage of breath both stop kissing...

JALAL : This what I was missing my darling... Only you, your touch, your warmth Ness, your feel, your face Offf I miss you so much jodhu... Plz come back in my hug again..

JODHA : (Come near to him and started to kiss on his lips...) you know what I am missing you like a hell and you in the morning teasing me that you coming tomorrow.. Haan you bad hubby... *pout *

JALAL : Hawww me bad hubby now you have to bear my badness too...

(landed toward Jodha's bre** jalal passing NOUGHTY wink to her.. But some how jodha manage to come out from his grip and started running toward the door.. Sawing her tounge to him... Jalal also run behind her...)

As Jodha coming towards the steps while running her leg slips and she fell down... On ground...

AT HOSPITAL,

Jalal take Jodha to the hospital... All the way of hospital jalal stop talking to Jodha's lifeless body like a mad man...

Doctor is come out from OT jalal started asking so many questions but doctors gives only one answer we can able to save only baby or mother... Which make jalal shocked to the core... He is not getting any things... Is Jodha pregnant... Then why she is not telling him..???

IN THE DOCTOR'S OFFICE,

DOCTOR : What the hell ma'm we will not doing it it's out of our rules we can't declare the death of baby if she is alive... Sorry we can't do it...

MAHAM : (Putting briefcase if money in front of doctor) now you can do it... (seeing the money doctor ready to declare jalal's baby is dead..)

IN THE OT,

Jalal come to Jodha and put his hand on Jodha's head which make Jodha's sleep disturb...

JODHA : Jalal what happens... Why I am here..??

JALAL : Nothing sweetie just you fell from steps so I brought you here... Don't worry you will be fine...

JODHA : (put her hand no belly) no wait jalal what about our baby... Where it is... Where is our baby.. Is she or he fine.. What doctors say about it..???

JALAL : (Put finger on Jodha's lips to make stop her saying further) shuuu... Stop sweetie how much talking... Take a breath... Jodha plz try to hear me very carefully ok.. No need to got panic sweetie ok.. Be calm down OK... Listen, because of some complications doctors can able to save you or baby... So sweetie I choose you... Plz be strong Okkk...

(JODHA take her hand back from jalal's hand and site on bed like a life less statue as if she lost the reason to live...)

(Jalal hug her from side Giving support to her...)

JALAL : plz Jodha say something don't be like this... Plz for God sake say something sweetie... You make me scare out of hell.. Plz... Cry your pain out...

JODHA'S INNER VOICE,

Is there maham behind all this...?? Nahi... She didn't do such a low thing...but she herself said that she wanted to kill this baby... So there is possibility that she might be do this... Hey kanha...!!! Why she do this to us... Why????

(She is crying from inside but not a single tears come out from her beautiful doe shaped eyes...she is scared if there is maham is behind all this then there will be big issues started in thier family... Her all family break apart.. She didn't want this to be done... )

JODHA : Jalal I am so bad na..??? I didn't take care of your baby.. Plz... I am so sorry... I know ask for apologies is not enough but plz still can you forgive me... I am very bad mother in the world...

JALAL : (Take his hand which give support to Jodha and put on Jodha's mouth...) hey stop this all nonsense thing... You are not the reason behind lost the baby.. OK... Don't blame your self for this...

IN DOCTOR'S OFFICE,

Maham smiled like villan taking a small looking angel like baby in her devil hands... And gave it to the her man and gave also the bundle of money to took away this innocent baby very far from Jodha and jalal... As the man went from office maham worn the doctor, "don't you dare to open your mouth either I know you have beautiful wife and little baby princess at your home... As you wish to make them safe then shut your mouth is better for you...

AT KHAN VILLA,

Jalal come in to the villa having Jodha in his side hug... She os looking dull in color as she lost the reason to live...
Jalal to cheer up her take to her to the sofa of central hall where the mirza is waiting for them... But on the way of there Jodha loosen the grip on jalal's shoulder and speak it out, "jalal I want to go in to the room... And without waiting the response of jalal going towards their room... Jalal follow her to the room... She fall her self on bed like lifeless stone... And jalal is on the varge of crying watching the drastic change in his darling sweet bubbly cute Jodha's behavior... As if he is gonna loose her...

AT NIGHT,

Jalal tost and turn on the one side of bed and here Jodha is sleeping like on the another corner of bed as Jodha didn't allowed jalal to touch herself since morning... But the sleep is far away from Jodha's eyes only tears are there inside those beautiful doe shaped eyes...

Jalal come near to Jodha's side without disturbing her and hug her from behind... As he feel so peace in his heart by hugging his dearest wife... But here on other side Jodha not respond back neither negatively nor positively... She is thing and thing all about maham's talk... She wanted to make jalal safe by any how wether the price is to leave without him... She started to make her mind to leave the villa tomorrow morning... May this way she make his hubby safe... Jalal still hugging her from back and starting struggle from behind to get any response from Jodha either positive or negative... But she didn't... Jalal speck it out in his sweetest voice...

JALAL : Jodha are you sleeping...??? Plz sweety... plz cry it out your pain... See I am with you here only... Plz (there is mixed emotions in his voice of pain scare and anger too)

(Jodha sense these all emotions of jalal... Feel bad to make him sad...turning back towards him... )

(JODHA Hugging him from front... But not ready to speak out any things... )

IN THE MORNING,

Jodha still in jalal's Arms but not sleep for single minutes from yesterday night... As sun rays disturb jalal's sleep the first thing he see in the morning is the sad become pel color face of his wife... Make him cupped Jodha's face...

JALAL : (Taking her face in between his hand ) sweety didn't you slept yesterday night...

(Jodha still didn't reply and few words come out from her mouth after hearing jalal's question... Which make jalal's world up side down... )

JODHA : I am leaving this villa today... Going back to moti's home...

(saying this Jodha break the hug and going to take a quick sawer and coming back to bathroom started to pack her necessary stuff...BUT holding her hand jalal ask her... )

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JALAL : And which thing make you these nonsense stupid decision... Didn't you thing about me just once... What I am going to do without you in my life...

(Jodha without respond back to his question going towards the door with her stuff... Making jalal pulling his own hair in frustration...)

JALAL : JODHA STOPE THERE... (in his heavy voice coming toward her... Pin her between the door AND his muscular body) ammy need you Jodha ... All the members her in villa need you you can't leave them like this... They all need your support your health your wealth... Plz don't make any decisions in your frustration Jodha plz think about just once more time ... And if you then need to go then you are not going alone I am with you my jodhu...

JODHA : NO jalal you can't... Plz you can't leave your family for sake of me... Plz they need you Plz...

JALAL : And what about me they need me I know but waht about my choice that i need only you and you my jodhu... Plz don't leave me like this...

JODHA : No jalal I don't face
ammy... What I am giving the answer of her question where about our baby... No I can't jalal plz let me go... Plz (freeing her self from jalal's grip she turn toward door...)

(jalal again stop her and planted a soft, sweet kiss on her bare shoulder to make her understand what she is going to miss...)

JODHA : No jalal plz stop to making the way to stop me it's not working on me... (And go from there)

OUT SIDE THE VILLA,

Jodha waiting for taxi as jalal come in front of her in his BMW "Sit in side right now Jodha" ordering jalal open the door for her... "no I don't need the lift jalal plz go back to villa" turning the face away from jalal Jodha try to being rude to him...

(as other side both surly awear of each other behaviour)

"You come in side the car by own or should I carry you inside " jalal come out side from car
" You can't do this Mr. Khan "as she speaks out in the span of time she is in the jalal's arms...

Jalal make to sit her on seat of the car saying " don't you become so smart Mrs. Khan don't use your pea sized brain so much ok... Just sit here either I have to Locked you here" coming towards driver seat and started to drove the car...

" You didn't need to carry me I am not a kid any more " making her lips in pout

" yup you are kid in front of me I know... If you are not then why this all drama meant for haan... " making the atmosphere in car little good and make Jodha's mind divert jalal challenged...

" I am not kid " stop on the way to speak her facial expressions changed into sad from pouty face... All the past days memories started to flash in her mind...

"Not again sweety plz... Don't blame your self you are not the reason" stopping the car on side of road he started to pacify her taking her in his warmly hug ...


AT MOTI'S HOME,

"Oh.. My my look who is come... Oh my God jodhu you... How can the most busy person in the world come at my home...? " moti welcomed them by as usual her dramatic way...

" hey..!!! Wait but why jalal carrying so much luggage with you... Is you both going to honeymoon for second round... " moti questioned them trying to pulling their lags.

" Nothing like that my drama queen... Don't you welcomed us inside the home...?? " trying to convert mot's mind yo avoid the giving reason behind being there at her home at this time.

" uhhh... Yup come inside plz" welcomed them in moti go to the kitchen.

"uhhh.. OK darling I am going to Khan industry for some work, and don't worry I will come back soon ok.. " planting a soft kiss on Jodha's lips jalal take a leave from her.

" Hey..!!! Where is jalal going... Stop jalal... " as moti come out from kitchen with glass of water for them but watching jalal to go shout to make him stop.

" Moti don't stop him, he is going for some work to Khan industry " Jodha make a sound in low tone..

" Hey Jodha...!! Baby is every thing is ok na, I mean all are OK between you both na..??? " questioning to Jodha moti sit beside to Jodha on sofa.

" Yup moti, every is all right baby don't worry.. "replied Jodha in low tone.

AT NIGHT,

At night jalal back to moti's home early them usual time and directly goes to the kitchen assuming that both besties are there only...

" Jodhu plz can you come out with me for few minutes I wanted to talk to you.. " saying jalal go out from kitchen and I followed him as obedient student.

" Uhhh.. Is you tell to moti about all the things that we are coming here to stay with her...?? " Putting his warm hand on my shoulder question me.

" On Jaan..!!! I didn't still, actually didn't find the word to speak it out "
I put my head near to his heart which is most safe place where I feel so peace and safe.

" Let's come in side guys the dinner is ready to eat, come soon. " saying moti go back to the dining table to serve the food in plates.

AT DINING TABLE,

We both look each other by corner of our eyes try to find opportunity to speak out actual reason behind here about us.

" Uhhh.. Moti..!!!!! I am full now baby plz don't give me more rice now.. "saying I leave the dining table taking my plate to the kitchen,and directly goes to the guest room.

" Jalal is every thing is ok na between you and jodhu... Plz guys there is no need to hide any thing from me.. Plz from both of you some one have to speak it out... And I know jodhu is not going to tell me anything so plz can you speak out jalal... " as i leaves the dining table moti questioned to jalal in frustration.

" Uhhh.. Yup moti actually I was also finding the way to tell you the reason behind coming here. "jalal speck it out make to stop moti further saying actually scolding him like he was little kid.

As all the things clear on moti's pea sized brain he adviced her, "plz moti you are the first and last hope to make Jodha speck it out that why she make this harsh decision to leave the villa. "

" I promise jalal, don't you take tension I will ask her tomorrow when she is in good mood. "placing her cold hand moti give promise to him that she surely helped him.

"Uhhh... Till then good night moti." wishing good night to her jalal come to me

Knocking on the door jalal come inside the guest room but seeing me in deep sleep come slowly beside me and sleep hugging me from back... Uhhh the warm hug I was miss from last past few months... I slid my self little towards him to fell him fully... Actually I was enjoying being in hug of my dearest hubby.

AT LATE NIGHT,

At the time jalal started to struggle from back to make me more closer to Him I turn back towards him as I saw the most handsome, sweet, unresistabal face of my hubby dear... Taking advantage of he is in deep sleep I planted the soft pick on his desirable lips Yup the most desirable part of his face and the process of kissing his lip turn into thine line of smile the smile which I missed the most... But wait, what..!!!! He is smiling that's mean he is not sleeping... I take my lips back from his..

"Uhhh jodhu baby it's feel so cool when your lips on mine why you take it out... " Making funny expressions he pulled me more in him and this time his grip on me is harder then before... Which I was enjoying thoroughly... We slept at late night in eachother Arms which make us lazy to not walked up before 9... When the sun Ray come inside the room and fell on jalal's half naked upper body make me blush in my sleep actually in my dreams also I was thinking about him only.

But the knock on door make us come back to life that we were in moti's place.

"Jalal, my dear hubby plz walk up moti is knocking on door continuously plz at least leave me so I open the door and ask to her what would happen... " trying to make jalal walk up and free my self from his protective arms I speck it out.

" hmmm, yup moti what happened baby, why you continuously knocking the door...? " opening the door I questioned her.

" Nothing baby just walk up you both as breakfast is ready come soon and join me OK... " very calmly inviting us for breakfast moti go down stairs giving privacy to us get ready for breakfast.

Having breakfast in hell silence jalal take a leave form both of us to the Khan industry...

AT NOON,

Assuming that I am in good mood moti started to asking me the reason behind at her home and all.

I was telling her the whole conversation between me and maham from the day I got to know the devil plane of maham.

"Hey...!!!!! Jodhu my baby don't you worry ok nothing is gonna be bad happened to you neither jalal okk so be calm ok baby I am here with you... " specifying me moti take me in her warm hug..

After the day knowing all the crap in our life moti didn't allowed us to go back to villa we started to live at her home... Jalal is also very comfortable to go at office for work from moti's home.

AND OF JODHA'S DAIRY

"Why jodhu my darling why you didn't tell me just once about the devil plan of maham... You should tell me jodhu... I will not let you do leave the villa because the fear of loosing me... " closing the Jodha's dairy jalal started to complain to Jodha in his thoughts.

" And what if something happened to you and I have to live with regret to loose you because of my own stupid decisions to telling you truth... Is I am able to live one more day without in this world... Haan tell me is this possible... I would like to die or leave you rather then seeing you die in front of me baby... I can't afford to loose you so I make mind to leave you... " step in side the bedroom jo come near the study table and cupping jalal's face try to make him understand how much he meant for her...

" Huuu. Now no more fear Jodha we are going to our villa back today no one can dare to touch me or my family... I make her life out of hell if she even make eyes on you or my little princesses... " Jalal assuring to make her ready to go back at villa...

After coming back at villa jalal clearly declared maham is shifted to her old home where she used to stay after the death of uncle and worn her too if she lay her eyes on Khan villa again he him self didn't know what the hell he is gonna do... But if it is then he make sure her life out of hell... Maham have no other options and come with her all stuff and without saying any single words going from villa...

All are so much happy seeing jo ja and babies come back to villa and jodha is more then happy coming back to home again around the safe people whom she love more then her self...

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Note : So here I end this beautiful journey of our all time favorite akdha hope you all... Plz guys do hit the like button and leave your valuable comments below... Will waiting for your response and special requests to silent readers plz guys do tell me at least at the and if story if you like it or not...
LOVE YOU ALL... MUHHHA

#hemu
Edited by Rajat_loverr - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Congratulations sweetie 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantastic chapter n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update
you end this story soon
you don't tell about jo second baby
he is alive or dead
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago


Unres dear
Amazing chappy Hemu
OMG maham is behind this
Poor jo n jalal
She hid the baby
Jalal got to know the truth n thrown out her
Finally jo n jalal n their babies came back to their house
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P



Unres dear
Amazing chappy Hemu
OMG maham is behind this
Poor jo n jalal
She hid the baby
Jalal got to know the truth n thrown out her
Finally jo n jalal n their babies came back to their house


Thanks for pm Hemu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Actually I didn't read this story but now I read the last chapter without even knowing what happened before and I would say that I have to read this story so as soon as I will have time I will for sure read it all...

Anyway this chappy is so incredible I really loved the way you wrote it from the first part were he was stopping her till the last were everyone came happy and they live in the villa and start a new part of their life I really imagined everything happened as you were giving every single detail fully...

Now to be honest I didn't understand what was going on as I still didn't read the chapters but in general I liked the chapter a lottt...

Lastly I want to say that I will sure reply again when I will read it fullyyy...

BTW thanks for the PM sweetieee
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey dear

Why u just finish such a beautiful story😭😭😭

I was expecting many more chapter of this story.

Coming to the chapter, it was beautifully written especially Jodha radha part. Hated maham how a mother can be so cruel on her son and a new born baby.😡

Finally maham is thrown from the villa and Jo JA are back to villa with the baby.👏

Thanks for the pm

And update your other stories too.

Edited by --Vrinda-- - 8 years ago

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