AKDHA SS : JUST FOR YOU.........UPDATED on pg. 33

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SHOT 4

After reaching to the cake shop he gives the bill of cake to the shopkeeper which he specially ordered for this special day only... For his beloved jodhu

AT JODHA 'S APARTMENT...

MOTI : plz... Yr Jodha come on na... It's your birthday today... Plz let's go somewhere else and have some fun dear... Plzzz (with a puppy face)

Seeing her friend' s sad cum puppy face Jodha finally give up and ready to go with her to celebrate her birthday... (with heavy heart... And lots of sadness in it...)

JODHA : OK... But we have to back before 10...

MOTI : (smirk) OK baba we will come back... At 10...ok

FLASH BACK,,

MOTI reach to jalal's mension after hearing the whole event which Jodha told her. That what rukaiya said to her on phone.. ... Because she definitely sure that something wrong is going on... So ... She goes to the jalal's mension... She enter in the mension...

MOTI: (angrily) where the hell is your jalal sahb

ONE SERVENT : shab is in his room, mam but who are you.? ... Wait here i will inform him...

MOTI : (angrily) no it's no necessary... . I will go and directly talk to him (goes to jalal's room)

When she push the door a little hear a sound of sob... She decided to go back... But hear a some voice... And go near to the door again...

JALA : (sob... Sob... And and break the glass mirror... As his hand is full of blood.. But who cares... He only care about his love which is secret by all... Only he knows how much he love her..) why Jodha... why,... You do this to me why... If you tell me that you love some one then I will not come between two of you... But that day you rejected my proposal to saying that you have fear off accepting my proposal... And today you are committed with someone else.. Why... Jodhu... Why...???

MOTI : (hearing that put her hand on her mouth not believing that what the hell was going on... Jodha committed with someone else... But no she knew very well that it is wrong information which jalal had.. But from who he got this news... So she decided to talk with jalal right now... And slightly knock on a door) may I come in???

[COLOR=magenta]JALA : (composed him self) ya come in...

MOTI : hii, jalal I moti Jodha 's friend..

JALAL : now what she wants... Why she send you to me.. Why... Ha...?

MOTI : Jalal... Relax... Plz calm down... Let me tell you one thing Jodha is not send me... I my self come here... To know the truth...

JALAL : truth... What... Truth..?

MOTI : ya the truth which you don't know... OK just tell me who say you that Jodha is committed to someone else...?

JALAL : rukaiya... Why????

MOTI : ohhh... Now I know how you got this wrong info...

JALAL : what moti I don't get you what you know?? Plz tell me clearly...

MOTI : but how can you believe rukaiya?? Very easily?

JALAL : tell the whole story to moti that, "how he gave a number of Jodha to ruk talk to her as a friend of him and ask the feeling of her towards him" and she told me that, when she ask Jodha about me then Jodha tell her the truth that, "she not love me.. She love someone... How moti... How can she do wit me like that

Mean she directly told me that she love someone then I am not come between them at all... But at that day I proposed her she lies to me... And rejected my proposal... Why... Moti.. Why... (lone tear escep from his face)

MOTI : (she put her hand on jalal's shoulder to give support to him) jalal it's not true.. But the truth is that ki... Usdin rukaiya ne Jodha ko phone pe a kaha tha ki vo tumhari gf bol rahi hai and usne Jodha se a bhi kaha ki vo tumshe dur hi rhe to accha hoga... Aisa tumne ushe kehneko kaha hai... But fhir bhi Jodha nahi mani ushne rukaiya she pucha ki jalal kaha hai..? To usne kaha ki tum ussher bat nahi karna chahte or tum ne hi ushe Aisa kehneko kaha hai...

JALAL : (as his eyes full of tear) what... Moti.. You are right.. (smile a little) is that true that Jodhu... My Jodhu is not committed with someone else... My Jodhu is only belongs to me only... Plz moti tell me... It true na...

MOTI : yes jalal it's true that Jodha is not committed to someone but she loves you a lot and having a fear... To accept it... So we have to assure her that nothing is happened to you and you are not leaving her like her beloved one Do it...

JALAL : (having a broad, big, smile on his face) let's go then moti... It's time to assure my beloved Jodhu that I will never leave her... Never... Neve...

MOTI : (happily) what's the plan is jalal??

Jalal told her whole plan and give a hifi to her...

FLASH BACK END,,

JODHA : moti... Moti... Moti... Where are you gone... Party me kho gai kya??

MOTI : (smile) no... Wo...
Me...nothing just think about party... Let ready for party...
(give a biggg gift box to Jodha) which jalal give to moti for Jodha... As a gift to her beloved Jodhu

JODHA : what is this moti...?

MOTI : it's a gift of Yor birthday Jodhu... Now tack it and go ready for party...

JODHA : OK...

Jodha goes to bed room...
And take unwrapped the huge box In front of her and got surprised to seeing si many thinks in it...

Jodha take a quick bath and come out in her towal... Fully watery hair... Looking not less than any Princess...

She tid her her hair in another towal and take out a beautiful dress from box and Wear it...
(pic of Jodha's dress)

Then she take out a little jewellery box and totally surprised to see such a delicate diamond neck please and matching earring...she wear them...
(pic of jewellery)

Then she find out little box in it a diamond ring and bracelet it there... She wear them also...
(pic of ring and bracelet)

Then she find out another box which contain beautiful diamond anklet in it... And Wear them too...
(pic of anklet)

Then Jodha find a big make up box in it... But she apply only light lipstick and kajal...

Then she find a shose box in which the most beautiful sendal is there... She also wear it...
(pic of sendal)

After ready Jodha come out from bed room... As she come out... Moti's mouth dropped out in sock Cum surprise... As if she see the fairy come from the heaven to in front of her...

JODHA : moti... Moti... Moti... Moti... Where are you lost... You don't want to go to the party... BTW you give me a such a beautiful, awesome give.. Thanks for it (hug her)

MOTI : (me ... Give this gift.? .. No jodhu... It's his choice.. Which suits you a lot... How much he loves you jodhu...) OK... It's my pleasure dear... But you look... Umm.umm..no...you look like a princess dear... Ya that's a right word... You look like a princess in this dress...

JODHA : thanks moti... Let's give for a party...

Both leave for party..

DONE GUYS HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT
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