Akdha ff - her saviour chapter 4 updated on pg 14

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Renuka Chaudhary

@aina111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Plzzz update dear

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TANYA

@tanyaraglak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Hello frnds!! After a long time ...

I don't know how is the chappy but I have just written for uhh all

So plzz comment

Chapter 4

Hamida-jalal ..don't lose your hope . we will surely find our Jo

Ja then get up n says -u r right ammi ...now I will find MY KIDDO for sure

Then he goes in search for Jo n was driving his car to search her

Suddenly he stops his car in front of a park n comes out

He sees a girl sleeping on the bench

He goes there n gets shocked to see her face

She was jodha but in a very bad condition

Messy hair,high fever,tear marks on cheeks n she was murmuring Jalal's name

Seeing her in this condition there were tears in his eyes

Jalal lifts her n take her to hospital

Hospital

Ja comes running taking Jo in her arms

He shouts-where the hell is doctor.

Dr.Sharma -calm down Mr.khan

Nurse take her

Ja-i also want to come with her

Doc-no Mr.khan ..uhh can't come

Ja-please doctor

After some time

Doc-i have already warned you that her conditions is critical.. If she fall ill again n again then it is dangerous for her

Ja-sry doctor.. Its all my fault

Doc-mr. Khan uhh have to be strong... She is under a great shock..she is frightened... In this condition she needs your support..uhh have to find the cause of getting frightened

Ja-now I will always remain with her

Doc goes from there n suddenly jalal phone rings

It was Abdul

Abdul-jalal ..I have got all info about jo

Ja- abdul r uhh serious

Ab-yes butt

Ja-but what?

Ab-its very painful.. I can't tell u on phone

Ja-so come in xyz hospital..I want to know it now

Ab-ok jalal

After few minutes

Abdul comes

Ja-abdul come in room 13 where Jo is admitted

Ab-what happened to Jo

Ja-long story

Then they reached there

Jalal caresses Jo 's head kisses her on her forehead

Ab-so just sit ..I will tell you a very painful story of an innocent soul

Jodha mehta is the daughter of deepesh mehta n savita mehta...Australia richest family

She was an angel for her family

One day a man sees her n gets attracted to her beauty

His name was arjun goel..underworld don

Jodha's parent tried to shield her but they were unsuccessful n they died saving her but their trustworthy maid saved jodha n bring her to India

But arjun came to India n is now chasing Jo

So in short Jo is in danger

Jalal was shocked

His kiddo has toh bear so much pain

Ja-now I will not leave uhh arjun

Uhh have caused so much pain to my kiddo

Uhh are gone

Precap-i don't know ..socha nhi

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

awesome update
totally love it
but very small chapter
so jo was saving her self from don lover
know jalal know all things about jodha
and it is intro to read how jalal save her
waiting for next update
please update soon