FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 11 (Chapter37 - 28/05) page1 updated - Page 13

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

That's not fair😆😆

Words will never be sufficient to even begin to express what a work of art you've created this time! And I truly mean it. This chapter is one of the milestone chapters of the whole story. You've no idea (or I guess you do) of what you post.. I mean just how do you do this?? How?? How do you make me fall in love with your writing to this extent of madness? How are you able to create such scenes which I relish like a greedy reader.. I am just not getting enough of it. And reading it again and again and again... and want more and more and more!!

Gosh.. it's been so long that I was left all muddled, gushy, grinning, biting my inner cheeks to control my grins,☺️ laughing out loud like an idiot, and of course wiping my eyes off time to time due to excessive laughter or too much smiling... after I completed reading the update. And though I don't want to say it lest it puts you to seventh sky .. but yeah I was very happy with the length! 😳(ofcourse I will never be satisfied with whatever length you post but this will do for now). The wait was too much ... too damn much.. but it was way more than worth it!👏

The first time I read it, I was rendered so positively messed up for half an hour after completing the reading, totally transported to some fairytale dreamland.. that I didn't know where I was, or what I was doing. I was totally held in the paradise of the two love-birds. I savoured each and every beautiful and warm moment of these two, to no end. And it was such a pain to be snatched back into this boring real world. 😭

You know, such detailed small intricate lovely moments are the ones that satisfy and thrill us at the same time. ❤️They are like drugs.. seriously! You'll give the anti-depressants' companies a run for their money! 🤣

God! How do I even begin praising this chapter? Ofcourse whatever I write wont be able to express my love for this piece but I'll definitely quote my fav moments.. (every moment is my fav though)

- Milk white biceps, haired muscular arms, chiselled planes... She stole glances at the slightly pulled up pants... "How can a man's feet be so virile!! So kissab..."

Dammit ! ☺️ ☺️What are you doing to me Jahnu di? By writing all this? ☺️

- he stylishly tilted head to face her, "by the way which article is it that hooked you to ONE PAGE for twenty minutes?!"

🤣

- "Stay there if it gets too late. And call me after you reach Abdul's home."

"And?" the amused man grinned at her wifely instructions.

"And if you plan to drive back late night, let me know."

"Why? Will you wait for me?" propping against elbow, he darted a teasing smirk but she least cared.

"Mm... " She nodded unabashed. "I'll not get sleep till yo..."

If this is the case now... whats gonna happen after they are married?☺️

- He winked and looked back at the door. The besotted idiot blushed knowing what his exact OBSESSION is. ☺️

- You know, your name is quite popular... ", turning back he gave a quick evil wink to his friend and faced her again, ..Brightly smiling, of course discerning the reasons for her popularity, Jodha shook hands with him.

- I am happy Jalal's parents have a clue of what is going on with Jo and Ja! Yayy.. so happy. And I am sure they'll be more than happy to welcome her as DIL. 😃 😳

- Jo-Samyu's convo brought another set of grins and blushes on my face! My man..sounds so !!! Gosh. ☺️Would have loved if Jalal saw her blushes at that moment and know the reason behind so much blushing.. but doesn't matter.. he gets to see a lot of it often anyways! 😉 ☺️

- OMG! Jo will wear that sari on his bday.. gosh... I am already fainting imagining Jalal's reaction to her..and how as always tedha twisted his delightful reaction will be. ☺️

- I am glad Prithvi and Jo had a warm easy talk. And so glad he got some clues. I am not gonna run behind clues. 😆 giving the decoding job to Kal di, shra di and rose di! 😆 They'll report to me.!!😆😆

- Awww... Jalal changed his order to tea so that Jo wont have to do much work. But she knows her hubb.. oops I mean Jalal too well!! This was such a lovely endearing moment. Ofcourse its such a small gesture but this is what it all the more lovely!

- Point taken Sweetheart! Oh-My-god! ☺️

- One of the best moments of the update - the moment when Jalal comes to know what he is to her..and the scene that followed! LOVED LOVED LOVED it !! Just how beautifully you described his emotions and his amplified love that followed!

- You are the only woman who aroused a physical urge in me in the very first meeting..."

- The Jhumkis you wore on resignation day, I still remember the way they swayed when you nodded to every question of mine. That tops my favorites on you darling. And then the jasmines," he smiled recalling how she fell on him and held his collar, "...they caused an altogether different intoxication. May be it's your fragrance that brought the difference,"

- You said... " he cleared throat against her ear and it sent titillations down her spine. ☺️ 🤣 He's excellent at taking revenges! Sweet revenges.

- Her wishful orbs showed the yearning she felt deep down her heart - yearning to hear him say he had a THING for her from the very first encounter!!

- Loved their banter in gym! 😆 So Jo is caught for her staring session! 🤣 Jalal is the Victim of Scrutiny 🤣

- My heart soars with love and admiration for this woman! The way she holds so much within herself..those priceless precious memories..that pain that the memories will remain memories only and can never come back to life again... and still the lovely lively woman she is! Love her!❤️

- Oh my god... he lifted her with one had.. and so damn close on the treadmill... he's sweating... and her weight is on him! GODDD! ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

- "I know," she confidently avouched, "and I also know I wouldn't hurt as long as you are there!!" Awww...

- "and remember it before getting unnecessarily angry with me. Also remember I'm not going to fib to you anymore. Whatever I say, I mean it!!" 🤣 I love her angry avatar! Jalal was supposed to be angry on her, but seeing her all flared up..instead he asked her to cool down! 🤣 🤣

- The four revelations summed it up all! What beautiful lines.⭐️ ❤️ From a time when they didn't even know each other properly... to now, when they know each other too well! Their relationship has grown so beautifully over the time. And also, that it was always there... just a matter of time that they realised it. ❤️

- "For anklets?" his fingers tangled on the small of her back. Anklets chodo... mai toh fingers on small of the back par hi atak gayi !! Gosh.☺️

- Female fans! 😆 Poor they! Their hearts are gonna be so broken in a while.😆

- ..freed her from his embrace, but only after sending the rebellious lock back to its original position. I just looove when Jalal cant keep his hands off her! ...I just realized the power of exercise when you lifted me with one hand," she cheekily squished his biceps, and neither can't she! 😆

- Bangalore's autumn will turn into Chennai's summer!!" 🤣 🤣 Jalal is sooo hot!!!! ☺️

- My fav part of the update!! THE FULL BODY WORKOUT EXERCISE!!☺️☺️ ROFFFLLL 🤣 🤣 🤣 I just hope Jo gives a thought or two at it.. and decode the exercise... if she doesn't, toh bhi koi problem nahi hai.. she'll eventually get to know soon.. vo bhi immediate practical ke saath! 🤣 I cant even imagine her tomato-ed face when she'll recall all her replies to Jalal..when she gets to know about it. "I'll be a good student.. will be regular.. will do if its doable at home...and not in gyms and all" OH MY GOD! I am ROFLING while typing this. Well.. Jalal is such a good teacher, he'll surely teach her how to do THAT exercise in gym too! ☺️ 🤣

- And last, but not the least, Hmm... Jo is missing han! As I already told you, now that you've showed she might be in danger, I am pretty sure, she's fine! 😆 But lets see whats in store for all of us!

- Love you love you love you sooo much Jahnu di 🤗 🤗... thanks a ton for this amazing amazing chapter! ❤️ It totally busted all my stress and tensions! And I am so blessed to have you, the magical writer, as my friend.☺️ Love you. Muah! 🤗 And now don't delay. Coz you know me... Heee haaa haaa heee! 😈

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

congrats PBD readers😉...finally Jahnvi updated.😲..and Congrats Jahnvi for new thread.😃..wish every chapter u write for this story fills 150+ pages so u can start new thread for new chappy😉😛

anyway, ll read this part when u give teaser for next one so I don't have to wait much thinking what will happen in next chappy😉😆...and comments after that😛

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

giving the decoding job to Kal di, shra di and rose di! 😆 They'll report to me.!!😆😆

Like seriously?

- "For anklets?" his fingers tangled on the small of her back. Anklets chodo... mai toh fingers on small of the back par hi atak gayi !! Gosh.☺️

- Well.. Jalal is such a good teacher, he'll surely teach her how to do THAT exercise in gym too! ☺️ 🤣

If you don't win GM award of the forum, the voters have got it all wrong.😆

Originally posted by: lashy

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