FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 11 (Chapter37 - 28/05) page1 updated - Page 11

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Really jhanvi di?😆

but my ex always says opposite to this di😕😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Ok I was sincerely hoping that u won't read this comment but it's her fault. See she deliberately updated today😆

I will comment on ur update before commenting on PBD😉😆😛

Love ya🤗

The only reason Ja and Jo from PBD world can afford to be so witty is because their author is the queen of wit! Picking out a few examples that plastered a permanent smile on my face as I read those sweet 11000 words of yours last night... 😳

and yes I did reserve it for a time when I knew I had nothing else on my mind... so imagine my delight when this update turned out to be the best medicine for a tiring day! (My comments are for nearly 3 parts btw😉 !)

You're the prey and you're taking pride in the predator!!😆

Not realizing that his cool scratched her cool.

"Flirting?" He looked exaggeratedly shocked. "You got your definitions wrong missy. May I show you what flirting ACTUALLY is?" His darkened eyes hovered on her neck as he began pulling the fabric closer, inch by inch.

FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY... I was screaming on my sofa... the two snails decided to take it a step further... a small leap for Ja Jo a mega leap for PBD readers!!!

Some more mischief like this please ☺️

"I'd rather prefer unfolding it..." He grinned some more. "... while it is on YOU!!"

His fingers traced the contours of her waistline. The untoward tickles made her gasp and jump towards the only possible direction... his broad frame.

Signature Jhanu's Jalal!

"Tell me what it is," the unyielding man probed. "Important or not, I'll decide!!"

Was this a deliberate double-meaning phrase😆 cos I cannot think of anything else that this describes!!!

"A pile of pink roses with two taut..."

So cute the way Jalal took his phone call with her in his arms... just speaks of togetherness!

She felt a newfangled intimacy as she spoke with the first woman of Jalal's life.

One in arms and one on phone"

She sounds just like wifey Mrs. J. Ahmed here...

"Why're you going?" her gaze turned mellow. "Usually they come here na," her fingers clasped the V-neck of his shirt as she inched closer. "As it is you're so tired today..."

Always the case, isn't it?😆

The troubled tossed angrily in couch while the troublemaker leisurely surfed through channels - lazily stretched across the opposite settee.

And really? Jo acts so coy when he comes close.. but her thoughts are worse than the devil's🤣

ooze masculinity...white biceps, haired muscular arms, chiselled planes... kissable feet... wow!

ROFFFLLL Gosh I loved this part... in fact, I love every part when Jalal calls Jo out on whatever sillyness she is upto! 🤣

"by the way which article is it that hooked you to ONE PAGE for twenty minutes?!"

"Which SUBJECT is he really referring to?!!" (Only Jhanu would know!!!)

Loved this some more...

"Stay there if it gets too late. And call me after you reach Abdul's home."

"And?" the amused man grinned at her wifely instructions.

"And if you plan to drive back late night, let me know."

"Why? Will you wait for me?" propping against elbow, he darted a teasing smirk but she least cared.

Could this Chetan character be up to something? But of course, if I've guessed it, it cannot be right

I loved the Jo-Abdul relationship.. its always so cute to watch a beautiful friendly friends-bhabhi angle...😳

And finally the parents are quite sure AND quite happy about it... phew ... one big step crossed already 😆

"Jalal likes Jodha?" Usman's brows furrowed. "Why do you think so?"

"Motherly instincts..."

"With the danger lurking around Jodha, can Jalal ever be peaceful?" 😭

He glimpsed at his smiling wife. "what will Meena do after knowing the truth? Will she accept her?" Please don't tell me this is going to be an issue😭

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congratulations on admitting it now FINALLY!!

I'd say the same too...

This entire update was about camaraderie.. be it Jo - Abdul... Jo-Samyukta... the guys... or Jo-Prithvi... Loved reading it all...

How sweet

"Anything I do for you is not a burden!!"

"And definitely not something as trivial as COFFEE!!"

"Point taken SWEETHEART!!"

Finally, Jalal-sherlock found it out...😎

"Is this what she said?" he gaped numbed. "How divinely she said what HE is to HER!!" His heart swelled with love and his eyes shut to contain the bliss.

(Now no smileys cos this comes from a place beyond smileys, so breathe in and read calmly!)

And then what followed was pure pleasure, passion and play of emotions... not entirely one-sided too... because even if she didn't hear what he was saying, I'm certain her subconscious must have sensed it, felt it... the positive vibes... the intimacy... it was the hottest thing to come out of your precious keypad... Jalal telling her his innermost thoughts while playing with her tresses and blowing just-about kisses... in fact, I can imagine them having the same sort of conversations the first time they are actually together...

My heart actually positively skipped a beat when I read this line..

"You are the only woman who aroused a physical urge in me in the very first meeting..."

A man will only say this to the woman he cherishes most! I am waiting for the day he will actually say it to her when she's awake and I hope you will not disappoint me

(end of no-smiley land!!!! You can wake up now...)

The scene at the gym was very very cute too...but, the part I loved most was this😆

"Your female fans keep eyeing me like this," she imitated Asst. marketing manager's suspicious stares.

"Female fans?" unwinding the strand, Jalal posed an innocent face.

"As if you don't know!! Jodha poked his cheek with index finger.

"I really don't..." he continued feigning innocence, "educate me on this missy. Who're these female fans?"

AND THEN THIS...🤣 😆

"Because..." naughtiness danced at corner of her lips, "I just realized the power of exercise when you lifted me with one hand," she cheekily squished his biceps

"How about going shirtless like Salman khan?"

"If you do that," Jodha didn't think much before retorting. "Bangalore's autumn will turn into Chennai's summer!!"

"You mean... " Jalal tilted his head to her ears level. "I'm so hot?!" His lips evilly twitched seeing her eyes squeeze in realization of her spout.

AND THEN THIS... Damn... I love all sorts of doube-triple-quadraple entendre jokes as long as they come from Jallu miya!🤣🤣🤣

"Oy, don't divert the topic!!" she nudged him. "I asked a question, you've answer or not?" she naively brought the topic back with absolutely no clue of the slyness in it.

"Yes!!" he evilly nodded, thinking of her face if he revealed the answer. "There is one!!"

"Oh, good!!" her hands clasped in innocent joy. "TEACH ME!!"

"What?!!" "He teaching her THAT exercise?!!" The imagination went wild and the grins aggrandized to laughter.

"Why're you laughing?"

"First tell me..." "Why do you want to learn?"

"I'm lazy to try different workouts na,"

"But I doubt if you," "if you'd show enough of interest and seriousness!!"

"Of course, why not?" "If it is DOABLE at HOME, I'll definitely learn!!" Jalal's sides began to hurt as he tried his best to suppress the bubbling laughter. "Its doable at home!!

"So, I swear to practice regularly..You yourself will praise how good a student and how fast a learner I am!!" she flaunted her abilities at a very wrong time making Jalal collapse on the steps.

"Hey, what happened...You're laughing? Tell me the reason, I too will laugh,"

"Laugh?" Jalal blinked eyes to clear the mist. "You'll slash me straight if I say it!!"

Boy... was I waiting to find out what happens next... or if/when Jodha will decipher it for herself... but what followed was😕

"Where are you Jo?" resting back, he closed eyes sending silent prayers for her safety. Anxiety and nervousness slowly got injected into his nerves making several images, albeit unpleasant ones, play behind the shut lids.

Now, is Jodha really in REALLL trouble or has she gone off to do something and fallen in little trouble?🤔

Only Jhanu will know...

And for us to know, we will have to wait 3 months for next update!

Till then, thread spamaaya Namaha!