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omg dear it was absolutely fantastic.i must say this the first chapter that i felt both of them are clear from tgeir heart that they both love each other.it was beautiful but painful.i had little hope that may be it was not radha who stole that order.but yarr why radha.jalal will not forgive her .he trusts her soo much.he will be heart broken after knowing jalals intentions.and if radha knows that it was adham who has harmed moti then why the hell she wants to kill jalal.yarr i cant even imagine how jalal wil react after knowing her betrayal.and jodha crying before surya it is really really beautiful the way you have written it.i can feel her pain clearly.you are true villian here darling why are you making them suffer soo much dear.i enjoyed suryas character also.i was almost having a heart attack thinking that guard will say about radha and jodhas confusion to shehansha.may be you are planning something big with that.it was cute and heart touching revelation about abdul and reva.and jalal and abdul convo is also very beautifully done.i dont think radha came for another betrayl.she is tooo emotional right now for another betrayal or may be ready i dont know.but please yarr dont make things between them tooo worse than already they are.i dont think shehansha will let radha go beacuse i dont want him to let her go.and i dont want radha to further betray shehansha.thank you very much for the chapter.loved it and enjoyed it thouroughly.you know actually i cant read too dark or tooo emotional scenes.i always prefer lighter ones .but in your stories even if it is too strong also i can take it.you know it goes in a flow.i am watching chandra nandindi dear but i cant get myself to like lead characters rightnow let us see may be eventually we may like it. thank you for the update once again dear.take care.p
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