RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 74

Originally posted by: pandrangijyothi

Don't do this to us di.. 😡 Eagerly waiting..Pls update di...😭

Originally posted by: harini1482002

But sissy , waiting always makes everything sweeter 😉

Originally posted by: harini1482002

It was a nice update and I'm looking forward to reading more of this . But I'm sorry I'm feeling a bit dreadful to even guess what's going to happen . I want to be honest di , you're one of the best writers in the forum and your plots are always believable and realistic , also quite good . And more importantly , I think it's the way you pour emotions into it and the way you develop the plot gradually and steadily . RKG is sort of my personal favourite for fantasies , and I always imagined jodha dramatically making it known that she's a princess ( that won't be , of course ) . Not like I want that , but I don't want to think about the drift that will come between them when the truth is known , that jodha was never ' Radha ' and she deliberately betrayed him . I don't like the fact that jodha is going to betray him , I guess I want her to confess to Jalal, though I know he won't be able to trust her , but at least then she wouldn't have betrayed him and he would know she trusted him . And di , if you don't make her confess , please soften the blow na . Since I have read both your stories and found all the chapters in both emotionally touching , I know I will cry buckets when you write about the drift ( many would , I guess . ) .

I perfectly understand their mood swings ( and their on and off relationship ) and I surely see from their point of view how they feel for each other's action . But I don't like it that Jalal can be dominating as he pleases and not Jodha . Sure she is courageous , for her time but I think I like my heroines strong , determined and unbreakable. Jodha is courageous , untame and wild , willfull, stubborn , humble and kindhearted . She's got all that is necessary be a heroine . But I felt she lost all those qualities when she was with Jalal. She never gave him a real chance ;and he didn't treat her well either . And I also didn't like it that she was answering quietly and respectingly to hamida ammi and salima Begum ( though I guess I understand that's what any sensible person would do ) .

And lastly , I'm not a big fan when it comes to love triangles but I perfectly understand it is important for the jealousy part and even then I'm not really anticipating reading more about jodha and surya. And from the last bit of the chapter , I get it that jodha is going to consider ( but then , who won't ? ) but I'm worried how surya will end up feeling because she will get his hopes high and suddenly it will be Jalal again...

But anyway di , will be waiting for your next update and sorry if anything I have written above offends you , they weren't meant to . You're without doubt better than many novel writers and I guess what I written is my own personal feelings about the story and they probably don't match what others think of it . Hope you find time to update soon 😊