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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini


Actually, I just read... the part when Hamida was thinking and saw Radha as his begum... that is why U felt that way... Actually, It's mistake... It should be concubine... blooper😆

Ohhh ok.. 😆

Omg... I love it... and proud too on myself.😆 😃 I read it yesterday after reading UR comment... yaar I didn't remember a bit even... after reading I recalled😲 me future Alzheimer patient...

How could you forget Bhavu? Chalo, now you know what a star you are!!! 😛

No even after story😆 ... He doesn't remember anything... he was drugged heavily by a dancer, she wanted to seduce him so she can be part of Harem. As soon as he drank it..he felt suffocation so he walked out of the tent... and after that, he doesn't remember what happened😕.

Don't tell me the mystery.😡. I want to read it for myself... I was still wondering what'd happened 🤔

Thanks dear.. planning to read a few more tonight... 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Bhavini,
I started reading RKG nd could not stop reading. Wow.. You are such a fab writer. I literally have fallen in love with RKG .Your style of written is so engrossing and captivating that I can visualize the Jalal and Radha you have depicted. You are simply the best writer and this is an awesome story.

The characters get under your skin and you can feel their emotions. I hope some day you publish your book. Everyone will go crazy. Like some one said your writing has improved tremendously and the last chapter is just mind blowing. But please update soon.

I like the way you have sketched each character. Jalal , though dark at times is transparent and honest with Radha. That is what I like about him.

Radha is also straight forward and too frank, fearless, brave but mysterious. and in way is lying to Jalal all the while hiding her own identity. Frankly I love both the characters equally. Both have different layers and you bring out those layers so beautifully. I especially liked Jalal in the last chapter, where he was helpless, possessive, obsessed

Would hve written pages in your praise if only time permitted me.. Love you Bhavini and your extraordinary creation. Keep it up.

Just cant wait for the next chapter... The story is so interesting now that just .. want to keep on reading .. Plzz update as soon s possible.. Kudos to you. what a great piece of work..!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Bhavini!
Many thanks! It is very interesting to read your novel, but your answers to read with the same great interest and this is another great pleasure! For me, this is a further understanding of the plot and is very interesting is how the author sees! Especially interesting recent answers for sharmacatty, KanJmaskis, Ashvneet2399.


Very old song "Kings Can Do Everything" (1978). About King Louis, who wanted to marry a shepherdess.
"...But the came running neighbors-kings ,
and to the altar Louis went completely with other girl,
in her clan were all kings,
but if saw someone a portrait of Princess,
he wouldn't be envy to Louis" ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqvaQqyd3-Y

"Kings Can Do Everything - But marrying for love can't one King",
except Jalal... 😃


Edited by alffim - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neesha119

Hi Bhavini,

I started reading RKG nd could not stop reading. Wow.. You are such a fab writer. I literally have fallen in love with RKG .Your style of written is so engrossing and captivating that I can visualize the Jalal and Radha you have depicted. You are simply the best writer and this is an awesome story.

The characters get under your skin and you can feel their emotions. I hope some day you publish your book. Everyone will go crazy. Like some one said your writing has improved tremendously and the last chapter is just mind blowing. But please update soon.

I like the way you have sketched each character. Jalal , though dark at times is transparent and honest with Radha. That is what I like about him.

Radha is also straight forward and too frank, fearless, brave but mysterious. and in way is lying to Jalal all the while hiding her own identity. Frankly I love both the characters equally. Both have different layers and you bring out those layers so beautifully. I especially liked Jalal in the last chapter, where he was helpless, possessive, obsessed

Would hve written pages in your praise if only time permitted me.. Love you Bhavini and your extraordinary creation. Keep it up.

Just cant wait for the next chapter... The story is so interesting now that just .. want to keep on reading .. Plzz update as soon s possible.. Kudos to you. what a great piece of work..!!!

Thank U Neesha 🤗 Welcome to RKG... seems like ur first comment... thank U so much... I will reply soon.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alffim

Dear Bhavini!
Many thanks! It is very interesting to read your novel, but your answers to read with the same great interest and this is another great pleasure! For me, this is a further understanding of the plot and is very interesting is how the author sees! Especially interesting recent answers for sharmacatty, KanJmaskis, Ashvneet2399.


Very old song "Kings Can Do Everything" (1978). About King Louis, who wanted to marry a shepherdess.
"...But the came running neighbors-kings ,
and to the altar Louis went completely with other girl,
in her clan were all kings,
but if saw someone a portrait of Princess,
he wouldn't be envy to Louis" ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqvaQqyd3-Y

"Kings Can Do Everything - But marrying for love can't one King",
except Jalal... 😃


Hey Zaana... I will listen to song tonigh
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Posted: 9 years ago
Edited by KanJmaskis - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey bhavi di
How r u
Lots of hugs
🤗🤗

Coming to the chapter,
First of all a big jaadu ki jhappi for a long chappy.
Two thumbs up👍🏼👍🏼 for ur amazing effort.
Enjoyed it to the fullest.


Hamida bano is an affectionate mother,
but some decisions taken by her has still left some bitterness in jalal.😕
which is obvious also.
Feel bad for both of them.😭

And the rest part of chapter was my favoryt😃😃😃.
Full of jallu jodha🥳🥳🥳
It was rollercoaster ride of emotions.
Ab radha aur kitne nakhre dikhayegi yaar.
Maan bhi jao😳
But l think jaalu deserved that treatment for behaving badly with her😛
Both are fools in love😆.

And a special mention to your writing di
U r simply superb ,spellbound by the way u write each and evry line,
every dialogues are so so apt and bteathtaking.
Hats off.
You r a champ⭐️

Precap:l am scared😡

My answers to your questions
1.Lo kar lo baat, di you are amazing writer(l know l don't need to tell this😳,par phir bhi)

The way u have shaped ur story is jus exceptional.
Nothing to alter in it.

2.the pace the story ummm...
is slow or l sud say it is required to develop the atoot bandhan😳😆 between our akdha.
Sabra ka phal akdha hota hai.😆

But plz thodi si speed badha do na😃,every1 wants their
Lovestory to be completed soon.

3.l like evry1 except rukaiya😡. Urghhh... l hate her.
Anddd l lov jalal (baat ghuma phira ke jalal pe aa hi gayi😳)
Reasons:-
-Irresistible😉
-Ardent,passionate ,stubborn lover😳

And last but not the least thank u so much for the pm.😛






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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter
thank u very much for the pm
the story line and the way of you wrute is just superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update Bhavini 👏 I thoroughly enjoyed while reading. I always think I can never love any other chapter than this while reading each time, but u always prove me wrong nd I'm happy for it. Because we 'll get wonderful updates from u😳 I always have been loving urs way of writing nd RKG & IS IT HAVE OR LOVE 😃


I loved da way radha nd jalal face each other, after both going through jealousy, nd pain. u have beautifully put into words da struggle of choosing between their responsibilities nd love/passion for each other. sometimes I wonder how u have created such wonderful lovers like radha nd jalal. Because both have so many things in common like short temper, jealousy,stubborn, passion, caring nd most of all their secrets😉 I'm really curious to know how jalal 'll react to know radha's real identity nd her mission.

I loved da passionate moments between them😳 Both have uncontrollable love nd passion for each other, still can't accept or confess before each other. Stubborn lovers, when we 'll get to see them united 😭 many things r there which r obstacles for their love mostly their own ego. Still it 'll be lovely to see this journey till then.

The matter most confounded me is da character of Hamida. In all da stories nd even in da serial she is a kind hearted woman. But here, I feel she is acting more as da MM of sultanat than a mother. she clearly said in previous chapter jalal can't marry radha as she belongs to da working class. Can't she see da love in jalal for radha. when da real da real identity of radha gets disclose nd if she agrees jalal marrying her, then she a real hypocrite. So I'm curious too on how u 'll shape her character nd her relationship with jalal.

On other side jalal declared he wants to discuss some personal matters with maham. If that's about him nd radha relationship, then no wonder he is close to maham than Hamida.

Update da next part soon, cannot wait to see how jalal-radha love story 'll progress😊 love u for giving such wonderful stories for us🤗
Edited by sonnet87 - 9 years ago

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