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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

that was a good one
but what happened to Jodha
y described ja's feeling really well

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lovespari

@lovespari

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Neetu🤗
awesome...Beautyful OS sweetipie😃
but seriously frst tell me Y U Love to mk me Cry always😒 evn bfr reading i knw it will again going to emotional n see it happnd ...gt tears😭
Ja pain his inner turmoils ...was written very well.U pennd his emotion Beautyfully sweetipie🤗
but m confuse fr one thing ...whtt exctly happn to Jo ...is she died?? or left Ja??? Confuse😕😆
Thank u fr pm😊

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Nice update dear
i just love the lines and the one in which you indicate about anklet is most beautifull
its heart touching
thanks for pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Awesome os neetu...

Ur very good written emotional part. ...

But baby again u have written on jodha jalal separation. ...

D way u told about jalal pain of missing his lady love was superb I could feel d pain but what happened to jodha was she away from him or died ...

Idea of recording was lovely. ...

Thanks for pm neetu...

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priya

@sweety992

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Nyc attempt dr
U do good job dr
A different feellings 😊
Thanku dr

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Neetu darling🤗

Please tell me what have i done to deserve this

Is it revenge coz i kept pestering u to update Broken hearts ...So you break my heart? 😭

Your poetic verse was truly very beautiful ...LOVED it...however its too melancholy😒

I didn't understand what happened to Jodha

I felt my heart breaking when Jalal had sleeping pills😭😕🤢

The whole star crossed lovers theme was Nice

Next time you have to write a story with HAPPY ENDING😡😆

Thanks for writing nd dedicating this OS to me even though you were busy😊

Love you dearie❤️

Edited by shruthikarthik - 9 years ago

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

superb chappy dear interesting nd emotional... really I loved it wat happen to Jo... thxxc 4r pm dear

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Pyaar mein itna dard kyun hota hai???

Kuch lamhe jo kabhi hasaaya karte the, wahi aaj kal aansun kyun de jaate hai???

Log kehte hai Pyaar Khuda ka nawaaza beshkimti tofaa hai, par dil phir bhi kyun isse paakr ro padta hai???

Aksar yeh tanhai mujhse pucha karti hai, yeh Pyaar itna Besahara kyun hai!!!!???

Aur mein bas itna hi keh paati hun-

"Na tum jaano naa hum!!!"

😭

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Lovely Monu ,yet 😭

Way too emotional

The theme of Star crossed is always heart wrenching ,especially Jalal taking pills was way too painful

and His whole description is very dramatic, poetic and emotional

So the end of Jodha and Akbar made this story an eternal one

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
Neetu darling🤗
Please tell me what have i done to deserve this
Is it revenge coz i kept pestering u to update Broken hearts ...So you break my heart? 😭

Your poetic verse was truly very beautiful ...LOVED it...however its too melancholy😒
I didn't understand what happened to Jodha
I felt my heart breaking when Jalal had sleeping pills😭😕🤢
The whole star crossed lovers theme was Nice
Next time you have to write a story with HAPPY ENDING😡😆
Thanks for writing nd dedicating this OS to me even though you were busy😊
Love you dearie❤️

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