OS: || The Beautiful Bride || - Page 4

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

wasn't sure if the OS is mature or not...so thought to read the comments first...😛😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

I always give discretion at the top if the os or chapter contains any mature content. You know I was writing for another part of that same os and came to see this os. when I started reading I was amazed on reading jalal's description.😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

oh it was a very nice concept dear⭐️⭐️

The spectacles on jalal's face remembered me my os which I have written 4-5 days back😛

jodha made fun of him in front of everyone but see how time changes. Though she was thinking that he loved her due to her beauty but in Love look doesn't matter and so he proved. He stood with her when she lost her beauty as he was in love with Her,not with her beauty.

Sometimes we hurt a person with our actions and words, though intentionally or unintentionally, but when that thing get back to us then we realized our mistake.

Adham was a jerk .sadly,such men exist in our society but jo fighted back with jalal's support.👏

Loved this os dear❤️ n very nicely written!!😊

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

After I completed replying?😡😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

I always give discretion at the top if the os or chapter contains any mature content. You know I was writing for another part of that same os and came to see this os. when I started reading I was amazed on reading jalal's description.😆

Originally posted by: SWARNA99

Congratulations for your first os. ...

It's just perfect. ..

Thanks a lot!😳

Through your os , you have portrayed the problems , humiliation of any acid victim ...Such an unfortunate incident definitely shatters the self confidence.

Yes. It is very pathetic!😭

Jalal is amazing here. ...His love and support for jodha is unconditional. ...

Liked the unity of students against such an inhuman crime. ...

It should happen in every field.⭐️

Loved the whole story. ...

Their journey from college life...to top scientists. ...and then to marriage was lovely. ...

Thank you so much for loving it.😃

Indeed a very beautiful beginning and an amazing end.

Glad that you liked it.😳

Keep up the good work.

Thanks for pm.

Your welcome.
⭐️

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Ohkay...will take care from the next time. 😊

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Maybe this story is too sad for me because I have always imagined Jodha and Jalal to be a fairy-tale couple. Anything less looks odd! 😆

But reality is this!