OS: || The Beautiful Bride || - Page 3

Originally posted by: eshalli

Superb chapyy dear
Thxxx 4r pm

Originally posted by: sr0560982

awsm os di...!😊😊 beautifully written 👏👏really a heart touching story. luved it soo much😃😃

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

oh it was a very nice concept dear⭐️⭐️

The spectacles on jalal's face remembered me my os which I have written 4-5 days back😛

jodha made fun of him in front of everyone but see how time changes. Though she was thinking that he loved her due to her beauty but in Love look doesn't matter and so he proved. He stood with her when she lost her beauty as he was in love with Her,not with her beauty.

Sometimes we hurt a person with our actions and words, though intentionally or unintentionally, but when that thing get back to us then we realized our mistake.

Adham was a jerk .sadly,such men exist in our society but jo fighted back with jalal's support.👏

Loved this os dear❤️ n very nicely written!!😊

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Payal, I too got reminded of your OS...that Jalal was also very shy and conscious kinds na... I had read in someone's comment...😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

wow shagun.. u read the comments on my thread but not os😆

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Stuti dii... this is a marvelous piece of writing. Perhaps the most touching one you ever wrote. It was too emotional! Heart-wrenching! 💔

Thank you so much for all your complementing words. I have written this one directly from heart without any planning and all. Perhaps for that only... And the topic itself is very heart-wrenching!

You know what, I am extremely bad at handling sad stories. You moved me truly with this... 😭😭😭

I feel I am comfortable to write sad-stories much.😆Have to try a funny one now.😃

I never thought that this is going to take such a sadistic turn. I was like maybe Jalal is going to come save her. But...😭

That would have made Jalal hero, but the story is not about that!The real life is quite different!😭

I was hoping you would do everything all right at least in the very end.

Have not I done that?😃Does facial beauty actually hold any value?

But your Jalal deserves a big hug...🤗 This is the kind of love I imagine, is true love. Love which is beyond physical appearance, love which sees through a person. Your Jalal is a sweety-pie! ❤️

Yes! ❤️

I felt so bad for him at his first proposal. Chalo but my Jo was at least understanding enough to make him understand. 😳

poor Jodha had got much excited with the proposal and over-reacted in the presence of friends.😆

But how you contrasted the first proposal to the marriage one was excellent. The way he says, "Am I not smart enough to walk with you yet?" Uff...that was sooo touching on his part. He does not want her to be sad or think low of herself even for a second. How cutely he said that, so as to remove all her hesitation! 😳 Loved the way she hugged him. She's so lucky to have him! ❤️

You have explained it so beautifully!👏⭐️

Loved the determined Jalal also with the principal, in front of the families, and in all his talks with Jo after the attack. And the unity of the students against crime! ⭐️

All the students should get united against the crime like this only.

And my Jo... what did you do to her! 😭😭😭 She was such a cute, lively girl...the contrast is so striking! Every sad story is after my Jo only. 😡

Only her facial beauty has been harmed. She has not changed... she is a scholar, lives her life fully, often goes to drink vodka with BF after work😆 , and travels the whole world even after being physically challenged. And more on she is one of the greatest scientists.⭐️

Loved the way Jalal called her the most beautiful woman ever! Uff...he's such an encouraging person. Jo is so lucky to have a life companion like him. It's true if you are snatched something, you get an even better thing in return! 😳

Right you are!😳

And I loved the way he reacted to all the people's gazes in the restaurant. And also the way he never sympathizes with her, instead always makes her realize that she has her own amazing identity! ⭐️😳⭐️

Yes.⭐️⭐️

But I wish all was normal. I wish Jo wasn't a sympathizing object for all.

She is not. She is an asset actually. Her names come on the front pages of newspaper-not as an acid victim, but as the youngest and greatest scientist. The incidents of restaurants and all will happen, but this is not the final!⭐️

I so wish the end was truly happy. Though true happiness is what Jo finally got! 😳

Yes. They will be the most successful and lovely couple!😳

Lastly, I think acid attack is the gravest of crimes. The attackers should also be poured with acid. I want them to realize what it feels like. Killing someone only removes that person from the earth, but acid attacks destroy the left life of the victim. Acid attackers aren't humans, they're devils. Why don't they just ban the use of acids? And moreover, there's practically no strict punishment for the attackers. Maximum is 7-8 years of jail, and then, just live freely and enjoy. 🤢😡🤢

I am agreed with you toto! What an unbearable pain the victims bears aahhh!😭😭 First of all the usage of acid should be licensed...

In our law system the convicts do not get a least punishment actually!!😡 Only the innocent peoples suffer!🤢

Kudos to you for taking up such a cause in this OS! ⭐️

Thank you😳

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Edited my comment on page 1.