Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123)

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Mavaddat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: Mavaddat
res
unress...
wow di both parts are awesome blossom...
chapter is not boring di... I love the way you describe feelings of our leads, their confusion and all..
both were still in their la la land ... JODHA and JALAL both get relaxed in their solace but poor them... unable to point it out why they feel that way... no worry JODHA and JALAL avika di will soon make you realize your feelings towards each other 😆 m I right di? 😛
bit di did time don't take long gap to update please ... now coming to noor's part ... o god she is so scared of that bitch and she was also the way too harsh on little soul ... is this the way to treat children when she get hurt ... my little kuchi Ku... she is so brave and sensible... how she handle her dadijaan not wanting her to get disturbed by seeing this wound ... so she hid her pain and act as if she is brave ... admire the bonding of granny and granddaughter... me and my dadi also share this type of bonding but now she is no more 😔
MAHAM and her evil mind with her crocodile tears...
JODHA and JALAL share the pain with each other ... JALAL shared the pain that he was hiding from world behind his charming smile and JODHA also shared her pain ... but jalal regret after seeing JODHA in tears he feels pain in his heart but still don't understand y... di please soon make them realize their feelings...
Both are sailing on same ship but one choose positivity of life whilst the other darkness...good to know that somewhere he understand y he got attracted towards JODHA because of her positivity and he wants that light in his life also he know that JODHA is the one who will give that light...
thanks for pm di
lovely update
update soon
sorry for not commenting on other chapters before ... but all I can say u r an incredible writer... I was busy with exams and all stuff that's y didn't comment ... sorry for that di...
love you

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#843

Nice chapter Avika😃
Jalal and Jodha both clouded by each others thoughts
Noor, poor child is so much scared of that Maham
No one knows how Maham treats this little one😡
Jalal finds the mask and bracelet girl too..

Best part was where Jalal and Jodha shared their pain with each other, though Jalal sought the darker side while Jo looked at the grighter side. Now Jalal knows what about Jodha attracts him more than her beauty

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.AkDhian.

@.AkDhian.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#844

Akka🤗

I was so happy that you updated the next chappy today😃

I thought Ch 8 would continue from their hug..but it didn't😆Anyways loved both the parts so much❤️❤️

So,Abdul guessed it right.Jalal-Abdul part was nice😉😆 I'm happy that Jalal found peace finally.Poor guy is all alone drowned in hatred and agony😭

Both Jo and Ja are confused with their strange feelings😉You wrote their reverie beautifully👏

I feel Maham is behind the accident of Jalal's di🤔Kuch toh gadbad hai,Daya😆 Feeling bad for Noor😭 I just hate Maham😡😡

Jallu found out who is the mystery girl and wants to return the bracelet being a gentleman😆😆He got a perfect chance to talk to her😉

Canteen convo was funny.Moti thought Surya is the tattoo man..hope she doesn't fix Jo's marriage with him in her excitement😆

Jo used to exhibit her hatred openly for Jalal and now she doesn't even want to face him😆But Jalal is Jalal..how can he leave her😉

Now the part I loved the most is Jo-Ja convo in college grounds.Absolutely brilliant👏.As you said,the duo who had never shared any normal conversation opened up and shared their past.That shows the special connect they feel for each other.You wrote everything wonderfully👍🏼

They both were sailing in the same boat ...but one choosed the brighter side of life while the other choosed darkness for himself .

While one was living a happy contented life , the other was sulking day and night in agony .

So well said.It's our attitude towards our life that makes all the difference.I hope Jalal patches up with Hamida.As Jo said,she can't be blamed.She is equally suffering the loss

You left us thoughtful with the last part.Is the patient Jalal's di?He said they didn't find her body.I'm curious to know abt the doctor and patientI wish Jalal's di is alive if not for him,at least for the sake of Noor.

Want to read more about JJ and how their relationship progressesJo was about to call him Jallad..but Jalal seems to be enjoying it😆

Thanks for the amazing updates and PM😊

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#845

super chapy...they have taken a tiny step towards their future.update soon ...thanks for pm.

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#846

awesome update
can't wait for next update
update soon

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#847

Res akka
Will unres in the noon with a long one 😉

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#848

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
res akka for A

unres akka

amazing chappy akka

everything is good

poor noor

maham is stupid

moti shouldn't make any stupid decisions plzzz

confused jo 😕

eagerly waiting to read next one

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

unres akka
amazing chappy akka
everything is good
poor noor
maham is stupid
moti shouldn't make any stupid decisions plzzz
confused jo 😕
eagerly waiting to read next one

thanks for pm akka

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Jasmine Grewal

@jasminegrewal98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#850

Beautiful update loved it!! Jodha and Jalal have started to develop more feelings for each other after the hug, and now Jalal also knows Jodha is the "bracelet girl"!

Just loved the convo between them, the lines describing Jodha's positive outlook compared to Jalal's negative one was perfect, now I hope Jalal and Hamida's relationship mends and Jodha and Jalal will begin to become closer

Omg Maham is such a witch poor Noor...but I feel the end part Maham wanted to leave early to see that patient which I feel is Salima! Guess we will have to see lol do update soon😃

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