Originally posted by: melovesja
😛good start of this interesting story like your changed writing 😊
Thank u so much mittal 😊
Apt song and nicely given idea about night club and it's atmosphere.. .
Hope im close to nightclubs atmosphere 😉
moti is nice girl caring for family naughty and in dreamy stage blurt out everything and suja 😳
Hahaha she made her husband embarass in front of Jodha 😆
when she told jo its anywhere written that married women can't drool a handsome man I was laugh out hard 😆 you very well use it.
Im glad i could make u laugh dear .
She dreamet about jo's marriage .suja is caring ,loving and may be shy personality suja and moti😆 but lovely pair.
I always try different pairs mittal and this one is my another craziness 😆
well written coldness between hb and ja . wow ja's character is so different no hot cheeks, respect the girls dignity and kind .
Hmm his past is still haunting his present and hence this coldness .
jalal is effected by past and in much pain which reflects in their relation. symbolic use of darkness to saw his life's pain and he distress himself with music. .
Thats true dear
jo is kind , high regard towards other women ,fiery ., wow at the movie she punch that guy hard .
She is no abla naari mittal 😆
Jo moti were best buddies. like their bonding.
They r really best buddies dear and im happy that u liked their bonding
well describe about college ,match ground and college life. ja's tattoo and jo's bracelet encrypted in each other's mind. ja is attracted towards her and as a team captain and standing on ragging place his image ruin in jo's thought. hann that healthy flerting.
I cant let them fall in love so easily right ,so heres the twist 😆
poor jallu for flick of second she too admire him. first glance and one dreamy and other splitting fire. what a situation . let's see what you have stored for us. Enjoyed it.😛
Im glad u enjoyed it mittal and i will try my best to entertain u guys
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