Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123) - Page 41

Originally posted by: SWARNA99

Fabulous update dear. ...

Thank u so much swarna 😊

Loved the first part where Jalal saves the dignity of the poor girl. ...Undoubtedly jodha was impressed by him.

Yes she was really impressed by him 😉

College conversations were lovely. ...

Rukaiya is same. ...wandering with her chamchis. ...

She can never change 😆

Thanks for pm ..

Please continue soon. .

Originally posted by: kartikaJA

awesome update

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

Superb chapter buddy👏

Thank u so much dear 😊
Jo was impressed by unknown tatooed boy helping the poor girl
But her first impression about Jalal was bad

Hahaha lets see how the story unfolds 😉
Moti is a darling, she cares for Jo a lot and even Jo does the same

Yes they both r adorable
Uff this Ruks has to be there to show her develish skills😡
What will happen next as Ruks is all ready to do ragging of Moti
She will successfully rag them
Interesting end of the chappy, will await next..
Thanks for the PM 😊

Originally posted by: GERUA

fantastic update

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Hey it was a awesome one avika Akka

Thank u so much bangaram 😊
Well jodha n jalal have setup der love without knowing eachother

Yes they fell for each other without actually knowing who they look like 😆
Wah !!! U have written the college life quite well

Its quite common right 😉
Hmm...jalal is even impressed by her personality

He is not impressed ,he is intrigued 😉
Indeed itni beautiful hai

No doubt in that 😉
Moti papam
Innocent AA ye angle nunchi
Oka tight slap ichela rayandi Akka next chapter lo

Hahaha nenu ala cheyalenu bangaram ,hmm chance dorikite chudaam 😉😆
Will be waiting for next one
But b4 give the update for Ek vivah ese bhi

Ur wish granted 😉

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Lovely chappy Avika Didu..
I loved it..

Thank u so much anjali ,im glad u liked it dear
Moti said jo just call me Moti..

Hahaha she doesnt want to emvarass herself in front of others na ,isiliye 😳
Moti is looking for jo ka dulha...

Typical bhabhi 😆
Ja n his gang raking raging..

Ragging and all happens in college right
Beech main hi kyu chor diya diduu..

Kitna bada chap chahiye anji ??
Pls update ASAP.. Cant wait to read further..

Will update soon dear ,pakka 😊

Originally posted by: divyadaya13

Wow! It was simply superb😳

Originally posted by: swetiii

wow..
jalal helped that poor girl whom the boys were teasing
so cute
He really impressed the feirce lady with his act haina 😉
wow
basketball captain
he won
Why did he drench that girl
Hmm u will get the answers in coming updates muski 😉
ahem ahem
the liking is mutual among jj

Ofcourse why not 😎 afterall they r meant for each other 😉
hehe
update asap diii

Will update soon muskaan

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Aww what a fantastic chptr yar..

Thank u so much divya 😊
jalal ne hero wali entry mari nd bacchi ki help ki..suprb..hey tattoo mast tha ha..

Hero hai toh hero jaisi entry hi marega na 😉😆 thanks dear happy that u liked the tatoo
moti she is such a darling ha..basketball ahhaa amazing..eagels..wow..

Hmm moti is a sweet girl ,no doubt
jodha k thoughts about jalal..he should be jallad..hehe

Hmm this same Jallad will make his way to her heart one day divya ,wait and watch 😉
arrogant..Richie rich..haha..

Hahaha he indeed is 😆
sbki ankhen jo p..tune mari entriyann to dil m baji gantiyaan..nd its obvious..bcz its our jodha..

Wow perfect song divya .
ragging..wow seniors v/s juniors..jalal is lattoo on jo when saw her..oyee hoyeee.y reshmi zulfe..beautiful

Ragging is common in colleges right 😉
ruq..arrogant girl..

She is 🤢
zarur kuch karegii y moti k sath..thn hamari tigress jodha aayegii..

Sahi pakda 😉😆
damm xcited for nxt chptr..cont soon..truly enjoyed it

Aww im glad u enjoyed the update dear

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

res

UNRESS 😳

🤗🤗

Mouli bangaram 🤗

Yeh hide and seek game btw JJ kab tak chalane wali aap 😆 Till how many chapters ?

Hide and seek game will continue till i want to 😆

You have created interesting situations btw them ... Boy with a tatto nd a girl with a bracelet 😛 And i am enjoying this 😳

Hmm im glad bangaram that u found it interesting ,and i will make sure u enjoy in future too 😳

When Jalal did something good Jo was unable to see his face .. When he did something wrong .. she will see him ... the spoilt brat is visible to her not the rich handsome boy with golden heart 😉

Its a typical hate to love story bangaram thats why she could see only his spoilt brat side now , later she will witness his soft side too 😉

I think this tattoo guy will steal her heart and win over the collage champion 😆

Hahaha hope so 😉😆

Jo n moti met reva on her first day at collage ... loved moti yaar ..for what she said haha no written statement on only unmarried girls can drool over handsome guys😉😆

Hahaha she was right ...wasnt she 😉??? 😆

Our collage hero was impressed by our fiery girl

Hmm he has a lot of attitude bangaram ,he was definetly impressed but lets see if he acknowledge it 😆

Mouli really loved the way u described the beggar girl cndition on the road .. i felt it real... we see situations like that in our daily life

Aww thanks ra,im happy that u liked this scene ,u know first i thought it will be too dramatic but then i thought we come across such scenes in our daily life too right ,thats why i included it in my story 😳

Jalal saved the poor girl . AWESOME SCENE 👏

Jalal the saviour kada and his this act impresed someone special close to him 😉

Ending scene Moti was target for devil ruks 😡

Hmm papam kada

Who is going to save her Our hero or heroine or else she defend herself

Hero kadu heroine 😉

Update soon 😳

Will update soon ra