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CHAPTER 58.1:
Jodha thinks... what should I have to do now.. should I go out & check...Hmmm...
Ok.. I will go & see...
Slowly opens the door..comes out.. goes to balcony.. but no jalal.. she search in all bedrooms but no jalal..
Thinks.. oh god.. where he went.??
While searching calls for him jalal jalal...where are u??
Finally she comes to their bedroom...
There he is pretending as sleeping.. he fully covered himself with the sheets...
Jodha gets angry.. goes near jalal.. drags the sheet from him...
Jodha: I am searching for u in the whole house.. & u here sleeping happily..get down from my bed.. u hate me right.. get out from my room..
Jalal drags her hand.. she landed on him..
Kisses on her lips passionately...
Jodha tried to hit him.. & tried to get out from his hug...but all in vain.. she is very tiny in front of well built jalal...
Finally he left her lips after a good kiss...but didn't left her waist..
Jodha: I hate u.. idiot stupid bad boy.. leave me...
Jalal: I am sorry.. I didn't meant that.. I hate when u suffer because of me.. I know how much it hurts.. I got angry because u took pain for me. I am so sorry baby.. I didn't meant to said that Sonu...plz.. I am so sorry.. left her waist..u don't need my permission Sonu.. I already told u live like urself...but u took pain because of me.. that's y I got angry...
Jodha:.she melted with his confession.. but still pretending as angry..& says.. still.. u shouldn't say like that.. u know how bad I felt.. moreover I didn't feel pain.. I want tattoo from long time.. it is for my happiness.. it's not for u.. ok.. I hate u.. u scolded me..
Jalal: cups her face..I know y u did that, for whom u took pain.. but I am sorry baby.. plz.. u know me right. I can't see u in pain.. I am very very sorry.. give me my punishment.. I will take it.. but plz.. talk with me..
Jodha: with crying... don't u like it??
Jalal lifts her t-shirt & kisses on the tattoo.. it's so beautiful.. I loved it..
Jodha: u said u hate it...
Jalal wipes her tears.. no baby.. I love it.. I hate the way u choose to express ur love to me...I know u loves me endlessly but this is not the way baby.. u suffered because of me.. its not required Sonu.. don't cry plz... I can't see tears in ur eyes...
Jodha:. I want to do it.. if u don't want I will take it off..
Jalal: no need.. already u gone through soo much pain.. no removing nothing.. I loved it.. plz baby.. I am sorry..
Jodha: are u sure??
Jalal: yes.. but I will also make tattoo.. how about that??
Jodha: no need.. I don't want u too take that pain
Jalal: exactly same for me.. u can take it for me.. y can't I??
Jodha : no need.. plz.. don't make me cry again.. I still have to give punishment to u..
Jalal: I will take it as a punishment.. what u say??
Jodha: aaa... with angry.. don't irritate me.. get out from my bed.. go & sleep in living room..
Jalal: WHAT???
jodha: yes.. that is ur punishment..
Go now...that to for 1 week..
Jalal:.oh no.. plz.. I can't.. I already missed u for 1 week... no more missing.. I don't get sleep without u... plz.. I want u now..
Jodha: no way.. I gave surprise.. u hate that.. so go away from me...
Jalal: sonuuu...plz.. I loved it.. I will make tattoo with ur name.. plz.. come to me...plz my baby.. my sweet darling.. my bujji... plz..
Jodha melts with his sweet words.. but didn't admit his victory..& no need for tattoo... go away from here..
Jalal: bad girl.. I am going.. gets up from his place..
Goes near door.. looks at her with pleading looks...
But stubborn girl.. didn't melt...
But naughty jalal.. locks the door & came on top of her suddenly..
Starts kissing her...
How can she stop him that too after 1 week gap...
Jodha equally participates in the kiss..
Soon their dresses are thrown on the floor..jalal didn't leave any spot on her body.. he lost his control over him..
Both are drenched in a sweat making hot passionate love...
Jalal felt blessed with her depth of love.. he kissed smoothly on her tattoo... & says...Sonu.. u are the best thing that happened in my life.. never leave me.. plz don't take pain for me.. I hate to see u in pain.. I love u soo much...
Jodha: promise me that u won't make tattoo for me.. plz.. it hurts jalal.. but I remembered u, so I felt less pain...but u can't tolerate it..plz.. promise on me..
Jalal: but I wanted to.. u did for me.. I also wanted to..plz.. don't stop me..
Jodha: Abba...plz.. jalal..
Jalal: Sonu.. leave that topic now.. we will discuss it later.. u are tired.. I think I am little wild on u today..sorry baby.. come sleep...
Jodha:.Hmmm... yeah.. but I love that to jalal... I want more wild... hides her face in his chest..blushes badly...
Jalal: really.. Hmmm.. I think we can start one more round then..
Jodha:. Oh no.. let me sleep..I am tired..& tomorrow we have office..
Jalal:. Hahaha...ok ok.. sleep baby.. kisses her again..
Holds her ear & both sleeps happily after a week..
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