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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Precap konchem confuse
And plzzz update akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its too much didu..
Update dena ka irada bhi hai ya nahi 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry sorry girls... I am late again...
Thank u dears for the wonderful support...
Love u all...
Muahhh...


CHAPTER 58:

Both are enjoying to the core..

Two months passed in a jiff...

One fine day in the office..

In the meeting room..

New project is going to start..
Jodha & jalal are in same project..

Along with Jodha & jalal few other employees are present in the meeting..

Jalal is doing presentation.. he did very well... he finished the presentation..

Jalal: so.. it's going to be fun guys..we are going to take few members from Chennai & Gurgaon locations... in Gurgaon already trained candidates are there.. but in Chennai we need to select few more.. they need training session also.. so I think one of us has to go Chennai...

Siri: ( some employee) :how about u going there.. u are leading it jalal so it's better if u go there.. & moreover u can check the migration issues also..

Jalal: looks at jodha.. hmmm.. yep..u are correct...but we will wrap this now.. I will inform about it later... I have important meeting now.. so catch u later guys...

All greet jalal & goes to their respective places..

Jodha: will meet at cafeteria..Goes from there..

Jalal goes to cafeteria..

Both settled on a corner table..

Jodha:.what u are thinking jalal.. I think u have to go Chennai.. as per the requirement it's mandatory jalal..

Jalal: but it takes atleast 3-5 days Sonu.. I can't leave u alone in the home.. i know I have to go.. I already got the mail from samir ( jalal head)... but I don't want to go..

Jodha:. Jalal.. it's just a matter of 3 days. So don't worry.. I will be ok..I will ask mom to come...ok..Plz..

Jalal: I am scared to leave u Sonu.. I still remember last time..I went to Chennai u met with accident..u even didn't inform me..

Jodha: I won't touch bike.. if anything happened to me I will call u ok.. Plz..

Jalal:.are u sure Sonu??

Jodha: yes baby..
Jalal: then Promise me that u will call me.. be careful ok..

Jodha:.yes.. I Will take care.. u keep a reply mail to samir...ok.

Jalal:. Yep...I want u also come with me...

Jodha: jalal u know na.. u are going to Chennai.. I am ur substitute here... I can't put leave now.. moreover I have loads of work..

Jalal:.yeah yeah I know.. that's y I hate this job.. I want to give leave to u but I can't approve the leave.. very sad.. I am going to miss u...

Jodhu: when u have to leave??

Jalal: after two days...

Jodha: ok.. I will ask mom to come home ok.

Jalal:. That's better actually..

After two days jalal went to Chennai.. jodha mother came to stay with her..

Daily they are taking in phone & face time... Both missing each other very badly...

Jalal thought to come back after 3 days but work not yet finished so he has to stay for 2 more days..

Here jodha is missing him very badly.. jalal is missing jodha to the hell...Both didn't sleep properly...


On 4 th day.. in the office..

Few of her friends in the office are discussing something..

Jodha joined them..

They are discussing about permanent tattoo..

Jodha get interested with that..

She likes tattoo soo much.. but never got a chance to make it..
She wants it now..

Jodha thinks.. I will surprise jalal with tattoo.. yep. I will do it..

Jodha asks radha to come with her to the tattoo studio... radha already had tatto.. she know good tattoo parlour in Hyderabad..

Radha:. Jodha r u sure?? U want tattoo.. it hurts a lot jodha...Plz...

Jodha:.I want it radha.. Plz.. take me there..

Radha: did u inform jalal.. or else he gonna kill me..

Jodha:. Hmmm... no.. but plz..keep it as a surprise..Plz plz..Plz.. Plz..

Radha:. He will kill me..if he knows I am the one who take u to the tattoo parlour..

Jodha: will u come or shall I go alone?? Sounds like threatening..

Radha:.ufff... stubborn girl.. chalo but must tell to ur husband that I am not the one who encouraged u.. or else jalal will eat me alive...

Jodha: muahhh...thanks darling.. chalo lets go..
Both goes to tattoo studio..

In the tattoo studio..

The guy in the parlour : which design u want madam ??

Jodha:.I want my husband name..& where the pain will be less..

Guy: on the shoulder u feel little less pain.. select design madam..I will put the ur hubby name in that design..

Jodha select a design.. two butterflies & few leafs... in the middle jalal name will come..

Jodha: radha is it hurts much...

Radha:.shall we go back.. Plz jodha.. I am getting tension..

Jodha:.no I want it.. that's it.. u plz Carry on..

The guy draw the design on jodha right shoulder..
Prepares everything for tattoo..

He just put a needle jodha shouts making the guy stop his work..

Jodha:. Oh god.. it's hurting...

Guy:.in starting u will feel madam.. later pain will be less..

Radha:.Jodhu plz.. lets go.. u are getting pain na.. Plz.. leave it..is it required??

Jodha:.no I want it.. to the guy.. give me two minutes.. ok.

Jodha closed her eyes & thinks.. Jodhu chill.. it's for jalal.. so bear it.. he bear his guilty for 4 years.. its just a tattoo ok. Cool.. take deep breath.. ok.. relax chill..

Guy:.should I madam??

Jodha opens her eyes.. yes now..

The guy started again his work.

Strange jodha didn't make a noise..
She is smiling..

Guy: madam.. I think u imagined ur hubby.. I must say he is lucky..
Jodha smiled at him...

Jodha is in pain but she can bear it.. she was decided strongly to do that. Moreover She is so stubborn...

Radha:.yes.. stubborn lady.. chalo at least relax now.. have this chocolate... it will divert ur mind from pain.. ( it's true.. they give chocolate to divert the pain)

Soon tattoo finished.. it came so beautifully...

Guy: take care madam.. use this cream.. u will feel pain for 2 days.. After that it will reduce..in 1 week it completely heals...

Jodha:.thank u...

Jodha went to home.. maina looks at tattoo scolds jodha..

Maina:. Is it required Jodhu..that much pain??

Jodha:.anything for my jalal... didn't give much answer to maina.. because She is getting pain very badly...
Goes to salim room..

Salim:.what is this mumma??

Jodha: this is tattoo salim.. hmm.. this small butterfly is u, big butterfy is me... how is it??

Salim:.then where is dad??

Jodha: right here.. his name.. look.. how beautiful the name is..
JALAL...

Salim:.wow.. cool mumma.. I loved it.. can I kiss it..

Jodha: yes.. but not on the tattoo.. below tattoo u can.. ok.. we should not touch now... After 3 days u can kiss on it ok..

Salim : yes mumma... kisses her hand.. love u mumma..

Jodha: me too salim...mumma will sleep for a while ok.. u play with ammama...

Jodha sleeps for a while..
Pain is increasing... by night jodha got a fever..but didn't tell to jalal..
She didn't went to office next day.. she did work from the home..

Like this two days gone...
Jodha still feeling the pain.. but much better..jalal also busy in work.. both got little time to talk in phone..

Jalal came back to Hyderabad..

He is happy.. finally after 6 days he is going to home.. he is missing his wife very badly...

Jalal reached home in the night by 8:00 pm...

Maina went back to her home in the morning..

Jalal: knocks the door..

Jodha opens it...
Both hugs each other..

Jodha: I missed u.. very badly..

Jalal: me tooo...

Soon salim came & jump in jalal arms...

Trio hugs...

jalal gives gifts to salim which he bought from Chennai..

Trio finished dinner.. salim slept in his room...

Jalal is doing some work in the laptop in their bedroom..

Jodha cleaned kitchen & came to jalal..

Jodha: again.. work.. moves laptop from him.. & sits on his lap..

Jalal holds her waist kisses her neck.. no baby.. just a mail.. ok leave it.. I miss u Sonu.. u know I didn't get sleep properly.. what happened to u.. u look so pale.. are u fine?? Did u got fever??

Jodha: how do u know that??

Jalal: I know.. my Sonu missed me.. u didn't talk properly with me last 2 days.. just look at ur face.. come sleep baby..

Jodha: I am better now jalal...

Jalal:.really.. holds her shoulder...

Jodha wince in Pain..

Jodha: aaa...

Jalal:what happened Sonu...r u ok?? Did u fell down?? Why u screamed in pain?? anything happened??? Show me now.. tried to lift her t-shirt hands..

Jodha stops him.. nothing nothing.. I am fine..

Jalal: Sonu.. don't act.. I know something happened.. show me right now..

Jodha:hmmm...actually...

Jalal: yeah tell me... shall we go to the doctor??

Jodha: no.. close ur eyes.. I will show u something...

Jalal: what?? Y??

Jodha: do it..plz..

Jalal: ok.. closes his eyes..

Jodha lifts her hands up & shows tattoo to him.. now open...

Jalal opens & gets shock..

Jalal:.jodhaaa... what's this??

Jodha:. It's a tattoo... don't u know that buddu..

Jalal gets tears... touches it...& says.. jodha is it required???
I know u loves me a lot.. but y this tattoo.. I know how much it hurts..
Y u did this jodha... more than u it is hurting me a lot.. I can understand ur love Sonu.. it is not the way to express ur love towards me.. it hurts me jodha... y u did this???

( jalal calls jodha as jodha when he was angry.. he always calls her as Sonu only... )

Turns his face to other side...

Jodha was shocked with his sudden angry.. she didn't expect his scoldings..she didn't said anything Turns other side & sleeps...( pretending)

Jalal goes out of the room.. & sits in the swing...

Jodha pov:
What he think of himself.. ha.. I hate u Mr jalal. I did for u.. u are scolding me.. I won't talk with u.. u have to say sorry to me. I hate u..

End of pov.

Waits for him for 20 more minutes.. but he didn't come back..
Impatient girl went to swing to call him..

Jodha: jalal jalal..

Jalal: yes jodha..

Jodha: what jodha?? So that means u are angry...
Y angry ?? What's my mistake??

Jalal: who the hell told u to make tattoo??

Jodha: its my personal wish..

Jalal: I am ur personal.. u have to take my permission before doing that...

Jodha: I want to surprise u.. & I don't need ur permission... with angry...

Jalal: hell with ur surprise.. I hate this kind of surprises.. I just don't like it.. better u go & sleep.. good night...I hate it... with harsh..

Jodha got tears with his words.. she ran to her room.. & closes the door...

After few minutes...

Jalal was thinking.. oh god.. what i said in angry..I hate it.. o my god..
I hate it. I hate myself.. but I can't hate her.. she is my life.. How can I scold her...

Jalal goes to their room.. knocks the door...
Sonu Sonu plz.. open the door..

But stubborn lady didn't open..

Jalal again knocks..
But no response..

Jalal: I am sorry..plz. open now. I want to talk with u.. plz.. plz...

Jodha: I don't have anything to talk with u.. u hate me right.. good night.. forget about me..

Jalal: if u don't open the door.. I am going to break it...

Jodha: ok.. break it...

Jalal: plz Sonu...plz.. plz..plz...

Jodha didn't respond..

Jalal knock for few more times & stops knocking..

Jodha thinks.. what he went away.. how can he went away like that.. he need to knock right.. she waited for 5 more minutes.. he need to pacify me right.. why he is not calling me.. no knocking no sound in the home..

Precap:how jalal going to pacify his Sonu...😲

Ps:.anybody wants best tattoo studio in Hyderabad I will give the address.. pm me if anyone wants.. 😊😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
How is your health Akka???
Awesome chappy Akka
Poor jo she did that tattoo for him and he scolded her and she was bearing pain also
Precap is interesting
Update soon Akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Jo want to give Ja a surprise..
poor Jo ...she love Ja so much...as i remember...she was so scared when doctor did scan her broken leg...now she can bear pain for him..
Ja get angry with Jo..
please help him pacify his Sonu...?

Edited by CindyTruong - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u updated after a long time..
Awsome chappy Lakshu Di..
All are going well...
Jo is threating Radha..
Wowo Jo made a tatoo for ja..
I know kitna pain hota hai.. Poor jo..
Ja is scolded so much Jo...
Ja is never angry this much...
Jo didnt open the door..
Fas gaya bechara pati..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dii
jodha got a tattoo...she was so happy 😃 thinking that she would surprise jalal but all her happiness went in vain
He got angry on her 😡
poor jodha
but he realised that he was really harsh on her and went to apologise..but its not so easy to manofy ur miffed wife 😆
Thanku for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
jodha made tattoo to surprise jalal
but jalal was angry because he can't see her sonu in pain
waiting for next update
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update lakshmi akka...
joja miss each other so much...
jalal dont want to go becoz he is scared hw will jodha be...
poor jodha got d tattoo done for jalal nd design is cute... but got scolded by maina nd jalal...
radha was so scared of jalal if he comes to knw she went with jodha for d tattoo...
what did jalal do nw...
waiting for next part akka...
wh ru feeling nw akka?
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter Akka
Jodha has tattooed his name on her shoulder even though its quite painful
But quite upset with jalal
Atleast he should understand her Na
Kitne pyar se karvayi hai
N even he said I hate it
Huhhh !!! Kitna dard hua hoga use
Anyway update chapter very soon
Waiting

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