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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993
Chapter 54.1
Fantastic update
Payal you are great in writing sr and laxmi you too
The way you both write shows love, passion and everything the required to describe these moments beautifully.
Thanks for pm.

Thanks a lot dear😃

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thanks a lot dear😃

You deserve a lot more dear but I'm bit reticent so bear with me😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993

You deserve a lot more dear but I'm bit reticent so bear with me😆

I am happy to read ur comment dear. 😃

Thankew for ur lovely words😊

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Both chapter r fabulous di n thnxx for pm

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome & super hot chptrs dear
loved it

thnks for pm

😊

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Chapter 52.2 nd 53...

Was awesome. ...

Jalal is nt leaving jodha at all...

Haha what will couple come to HM to work hard at night nd sleep in morning I was laughing reading this...

Ever jodha wants what jalal wany but she is nt showing up to his...

There talk about kids was cute. ...

Salim catch jalal read hand ... haha sweet...

Jalal is planning for a surprise for jodha. ...

Oh god... jodha is scolding jalal for loosing his room keys...

Jalal letter was so lovely. ...

Wow jalal wait for jodha surprise ...

Lovely update lakshmi akka. ...

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

Chapter 54...

Superb update lakshmi akka. ...

Jalal is so worried on seeing jodha normal. ...

Nd want to remove all d things. ...

But jodha is to smart she took key with her...

Poor jalal trying to break d door...

Nd way jodha came nd told to jalal was lovely. ...

Nd way he came to room after fresh up was bang on...

I was laughing at his reply. ..

Nd jodha finally told his she id nt regarding that day but feel sad as she did nt see his love side becoz of which jalal could nt see salim birth...

Update soon akka. ...

Nd thanks for pm. ...

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

Chapter 54.1

SR by payal was then it will be amazing nd superb hot... that what I thought before reading nd I was nt at all wrong. ...

It was amazing payal...

U have written there emotions ... there passion desire for each other superbly I just loved it...

Thanks payal for this superb hot part of last mistake...

Edited by 1357raksha - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
Chapter 54.1
SR by payal was then it will be amazing nd superb hot...
>>> Aww raksha 🤗
that what I thought before reading nd I was nt at all wrong. ...
>>> Thank God!!😆

It was amazing payal...
>>> Thankyou so much raksha😃

U have written there emotions ... there passion desire for each other superbly I just loved it...
Thanks payal for this superb hot part of last mistake...
>>> Thanks to you for this lovely comment dear😊

❤️

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#270

well written jj's feeling. jalal's care to give her a gift of memorable moments at their home and make it so special but was too nervous and jo knows it so, take key with her that was lovely part. jo share her feeling of past incident was best thing in her life and her regret to stay away from him was touchy by that she try to pull last string of his guilt. nicely written jo's shyness , jalal's reaction after saw her in saree.

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