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Posted: 9 years ago
Diii , kaise ho aap n my kiddos ? 😆
Such a cutieee chappter ! Lovelyy !
Such a perfect package Jalal is ! 😉
Oh shyy Jo in the morning n bold Jo at night 🤣 !
Whatt a deadly combo for Jalal 🤣 !
Waiting fr nxt one !
Update soon !
Loveee u 🤗 !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Ja getting naughty
Jo couldn't stop her blushing
Loved their cute romance
continue soon and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter di n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome chptrs dear
loved it
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u all for the lovely comments..
This will be last mature content chapter.. I am so sorry.. I can't write anymore.. it's not in my cup..
Sorry for that..

One more thing should I continue story or should I stop this..
Because it reached 50+ chapters. So I am feeling u people may feel bore if I drag this more.. what all say..
Plz give honest comments.. I can take it..
Thank u all for ur endless support..
Love u all.

CHAPTER 52:

Soon both started their journey..

Both are enjoying to the fullest..
Jalal didn't leaves her a second..
Jodha enjoying soo much with the beautiful greenery of Kerala & they took some pictures in waterfalls..

It was a complete & beautiful journey for both of them..

They had food in road side dhaba..
They requested the cab driver to give the keys to them.
They gave rest to cab driver..
Jalal drives for sometime.. & jodha for sometime..

After sometime they gave the keys to driver..

Jalal holding her waist..

Jodha: I never drive in hill station.. it's so beautiful na.. I loved this.. Driving here.. oh god. I am so excited...

Jalal: r u happy??

Jodha: more than u imagine..I am sooo happy..hugs him.. & again looks outside to Njoy the weather..

Jalal is happy looking at her happy..

Jodha suddenly watches a marriage group is going in front of their car.. lot of ladies dressed up in pattu sarees & lot of ornaments.. some ladies are holding flowers & diya plate... groom & bride are walking in hand in hand.. groom is telling something to bride.. & she is blushing...

Jalal looks at her..

Jodha: marriage is the best thing that happens in everybody life na...

Jalal: hmmm...yeah..

Jodha: I went to my cousin marriage.. 3 days function.. I was full excited for her marriage.. making a girl as bride , marriage & reception.. at the end first night.. me & my cousins pulled her leg a lot at her first night.. smiles..

Jalal: I am sorry..

Jodha looks at him.. & says.. y sorry??:

Jalal: our marriage didn't happen like that.. that's y..

Jodha: Ayyo.. jalal.. it's all not required.. May be my marriage is not happened like that but I got a lovely husband.. which is very important.. I know jalal nobody loves me more than u..
I am happy.. I will be happy until u are with me..cups his face..
I love u jalal.. u are the best thing that happened in my life.. Today I am smiling because of u.. don't be sorry..

Jalal: side hugs her..
I love u too Sonu..

Jodha:u know jalal after my cousin marriage only I got to know that we have that custom of first night.. I mean decorating room & keeping a muhurtam for it.. & all..white Saree & white dress.. hahaha..
I used to assume that it is only in movies.. But it is there in reality also..

Jalal: smiles.. we are Brahmins Sonu.. we have more customs.. I saw all in Abdul Bhai wedding.. sad thing is mom ordered me to decorate the room for them..

Jodha: oh god.. u did?? Hahaha..

Jalal: hmmm.. I don't have another option.. me & mann( jalal another brother) & karthik did.. But it is 8 years back Sonu..

Jodha laughs loudly.. poor hubby I must say.. u should call the flower decorater na..

Jalal: yep.. I suggested that to mom.. But she is very adamant to agree that.. she started her lecture how can a guy enter to their room & decorating & all..

Jodha: but u are also guy..

Jalal: I said that also.. mom said u are kid.. brother can help to another brother.. again lecture.. ufff...

Jodha laughs loudly.. poor hubby...

Jalal loved to see her smiling..

Jodha: but that whole scene was too funny & lovely too.. our customs.. don't say.. u people have more.. thank god.. I am escaped..

Jalal: hmmm.. May be.. But mom is very particular in cusstoms.. u know about her na..

Jodha: I know I know..

Both enjoying the ride again..

By evening they reached to hotel..


CHAPTER 52.1:

They check in hotel..

By the time they reached it is very cold..
They went in January.. chill winter..

Jodha started shivering already.. she wear jacket but still shivering..

They had their evening snacks in the room itself..

Jodha: chalo let's go out..

Jalal: jodha we will go in the morning.. u already feeling cold..

Jodha: no we will go.. plz.. besides if I get cold u are there to help me.. chalo plz..

Jalal: uff.. chalo..

Both goes out.. stroll in the gardens.. & greenary of munnar...

They eat road side food.. jalal don't like it but jodha loves it.. for jodha he will do anything..

While returning to hotel suddenly raining started..

Both are drenched in rain fully..jalal is drooling over her wet body.. But he tried to cover her from rain & others views also.. finally after sometime they reached to hotel..

Jodha directly went to change the dress..

Jalal is waiting for her...

Soon jodha came out..wearing shorts

Now it's jodha turn to look at her husband body..

Jalal looked at her & smirks goes to changing..

He came out just in towel..

He was just awestruck looking at her.. she is wearing his shirt...
First 3 buttons open..

Placing her hand on her hip & looks at him.. like what ???

Jalal comes near her.. & says. I thought u were shivering..

Jodha: yes I am.. that's y I am wearing this jalal.. to save me from cold..

Jalal: I don't think u need this.. I am there to save u from cold..

Jodha: then save me..

Jalal moves deadly close to her..

Jodha steps back.. But jalal drags her to him.. holds her waist tightly..
& says.. y u are going back Mrs jalal..r u scared..

Jodha: I am not..

Jalal: really.. then show me u are not scared..

Jodha reduce the little distance between them & starts kissing him..

Jalal sneaks his hands inside her shirt.. unclips the hook of her b*a..
Jodha can sense it but still she didn't stopped her kissing..

Jalal slowly brings his hands to her br***t .. starts squeezing them.. jodha starts moaning...

Kissing his manly chest..
She tried to take out his towel..
But jalal stopped her with his hand & impatient girl..

Jodha: yes I am.. starts kissing again..his neck & his ni***es..

Jalal slowly started taking her shirt buttons..

Jodha: stops kissing & asks..now who is impatient?? Placed her hand in her hip..

Jalal: this is not fair.. I am bare.. But u are in my shirt.. & I want that shirt.. I want to wear it..tried to take it out..

Jodha: push his hands & says..wear some another.. it is my favorite black..

Jalal:again tries to take it out..says.. black is my favorite also. That's y I have more black shirts..give me my shirt..

Jodha: no way.. pushes him..runs

Jalal: Sonu.. give me before I catch u..

Jodha: first u catch me.. runs to head side of bed..

Jalal: I won't be merciful if I catch u.. I am damn sure u can't walk tomorrow..

Jodha: aha... let's see.. first catch me..

Jalal:.ok.. till a moment back I thought I would move gently but now no where to stop me.. it's time to bear jalal punishment.. Mrs jalal.. moves to catch her..

Jodha like a kid runs to save her in the room..

Both made a room like less than a dustbin.. with their chasing..

Finally jalal catches her...pins her to the wall with her shoulders..

Jalal: what will u say now??

Jodha: u cheated me..

Jalal: no.. I didn't.. u are the one started this..now save urself from me..

Jodha: if u do anything I will shout...

Jalal: ok then shout.. nobody will come.. if anybody will come they will go silently.. u are mine..my property.. I can do anything..

Jodha: no u can't.. I will complain to hotel management..

Jalal: what will u complian?? Like My husband wants his shirt or he kissed me or he is going to...

Jodha puts her lips on him..

Both kiss like there is no tomorrow.. biting nibbling.. their tongues fighting for dominance...

Jalal slowly started his work on buttons..Finally he succeeded.. removed all buttons..

Jodha stops kissing.. says.. again cheating...

Jalal:. No I didn't.. u are the one started Kissing.. I did my job.. he moves his hands on her br***t & starts massaging..

Jodha moans jalalll.. hmmm..

Jalal finally removes shirt from her throws it away...

Jodha completely surrendered to him..

He removes her b*a also throws away...starts sucking her br***t.. bites her ni***es.. he works on her other b****t with his hand..

Jodha pushes him more into her.. Finally she also succeeded in removing his towel..

But her bad luck.. jalal in boxers..

Jodha: jalalll.. moans loudly... she can't take torcher anymore..

Jalal lifts her in his hands & places her on the bed..

Came on top of her..

Sits on her thighs..kisses on her belly.. sucks it..

He slowly removes her shorts.. throw away.. starts kissing her womanhood through pa***e...his hands rubbing her thighs...

Jodha can't take this anymore..
Jalal plz..

Like jalal jodha don't have much patience..

Jalal make her a roll.. under him..

He started kissing her butts..

Jodha suddenly feel pleasure..
Moans loudly.. hmmm. Jalal... ha...

Jalal little down her pa****e.. starts kissing her butts & smooching them... his hands are working in her va***a.. in out in out..

Jodha turns to face him.. I can't take it. Plz.. come inside me..

Jalal smiles at her & come up & starts kissing her lips..

Jodha participated equally.. he successfully removes her pa***s & his boxers while kissing..

Jalal suddenly enters her without prior notice...
Jodha stops kissing with his sudden movement..holds his shoulder tightly...

Jalal starts kissing her to adjust with his pace...

Soon jodha adjusted & moans louder..

Jodha: hmmm. Jalal.. aha.. ahhh..

Jalal increases his speed.. Soon both reached to climax & he rest his head on her br***st..
on this chilly winter they are sweating with their hot s*x..

A satisfactory smile kept on both lips..

Jodha caresses his hair...

Jalal: I love u Sonu.. sorry if I am rough on u..

Jodha: no baby.. U are not.. I know u just threat me but u never hurt me.. I love u too Chinnu...

Jalal kisses her forehead.. sleep baby..U must be tired..moves from her..

Jalal: wait. I will give my shirt to u..
Wear it or else u will get cold..tried to get down to bring it..

But Jodha stops him.. if u are with me y should I need that.. hug me tightly.. I won't feel cold..

Jalal hugs her more tightly.. holds her ear & both sleeps happily...





Edited by lakshmi1403 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res 😉first time I reserved for any stories to comment first 😃 its because payal has disappeared today, so got da chance[LoL]

fabulous update lakshmi, loved nd enjoyed a lot while reading😊 it was like a honeymoon of real couple told by themselves😉

it was lovely to hear jo's cousin's marriage experience nd her wish for such kind of marriage. but it is reality too as she herself tells, what matters for a girl is not marriage rituals r grandeur r relatives' involvement, but a good understanding loving partner😊


jalal's experience of decorating his brother's first night room was so funny🤣

da most romantic part was jo ja wandering nd love making scene in Munnar 😳
thank u for da pm nd update da next part😊
Edited by sonnet87 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapters akka hot n passionate Update soon akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
both enjoy their honeymoon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates sissy 😃 Aww BIG HUG to you 🤗 Love you hehe 😆
Chapter 52
Awesome update sissy 😃 Hehe jodha didi 😆 Ap bhi na
Ahem ahem 🥱 Sissy aage comment nhi ho sakti kiunki woh woh 52 . 1 wala part maine read nhi kia 😊 hehe 😆
Missing u sissy Kabhi toh reply dia kro
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow dii awesome updats..
soo hot

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