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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
Congo for ur first story kavya 🤗 🥳
nice CS
everyone is hot and sexy in ur story 😉 😆
curious to know about joja's secret..
Update the first chappy soon
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Thanks kajal

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#142

Originally posted by: piya58
Goood CS dr ... update chappies soon

Thanks priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Nice CS Kavya di...Update soon...⭐️😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-
Nice CS Kavya di...Update soon...⭐️😃

I'ii update soon Shagun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Congrats fr your first dear .

Lovely prologue n CS . Continue soon .

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Anjali Jha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Congo for ur new story dear...👍🏼
Lovely n fabulous prologue n cs..
I liked it very much..
Pls update soon n also try to update regularly 😉
Next time pls pm meme 😳

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Congrats fr your first dear .
Lovely prologue n CS . Continue soon .
Thanks fr the pm.

thanks dear

i will update it asap

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Kavya

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#148

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA
Congo for ur new story dear...👍🏼
Lovely n fabulous prologue n cs..
I liked it very much..
Pls update soon n also try to update regularly 😉
Next time pls pm meme 😳

thanks buddy

i will update asap n pm for u also

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Chapter 1

A beautiful morning in Mumbai.Sun rays fell on a beautiful girl who is sleeping in her room on her bed peacefully disturbing her.she pulled the blanket to escape from them but she got up from bed becoz her brothers r calling her. Sujamal"Pari wake up princess it's morning" n Maan too. Pari got up n went to washroom.She became fresh n wore her ocean blue anakali suit.She was looking very cute in her suit.On seeing her brothers she wished them good morning. Pari"Bhai I'm going to mall today evening". Sujamal told ok n he went to office n Maan went to college.

A handsome guy after his gym work n went to washroom n came out n wore his black suit in which he is looking dashing n hot as ever.He is none other than our Jalal. He went downstairs n sat on dinning table where his family members r waiting for him for breakfast. Bakshi Salima n Rahim told Jalal they need to go to mall. He told fine but Bakshi said"All the family members should come bhaijaan as we need to do shopping for coming wedding of Puphi's daughter". He told ok i would come. Then they went for their respective works.

After a series of job trails Pari came home very tired n ate her lunch n slept for some time. As she needed to go to mall for shopping.

IN THE EVENING

Pari woke up in the evening n became fresh. Then she went to mall with her neighbour Priya. All the members of Mughal family also for the mall. All the ladies were doing their shopping in their section.Mean while Jalal completed his shopping n went to grab a coffee.He got his coffee n was coming his family while someone bumped into him making hot coffee falling on his favourite shirt.He was hell angry on the person who was none other than Pari. She got scared n asked him in the shivering tone"I'm sorry Mr. ... I didn't see u " Jalal after listening to melodious voice of the person he saw the breathtaking beauty in front of him.He was spellbound by her beauty.He look at a woman who bump into him and the moment he see her, the moment he looking into her eyes his heart stop beating, he never find such beautiful creature like her, she have tan exotic skins, brown eyes like doe eyes so warm and innocent, read lips she wearing no lips but her lips very red and looks soft too, her long hairs let loose cover her back, she is wearing not too short flower skirt and pink t-shirt, she look very beautiful, young and fresh " mister . . are you ok ? " she ask with worry and concern.

Hear her voice he is back to reality " oooh . . I'm ok . .dont worry . . . just feel little bit hot " said Jalal, he seen the fear and concern in her eyes and he want to make her relax,Pari feel her heart beating soo fast, he never met a man who look soo handsome, he had white skin, his eyes very sharp and she feel nervous when he keep looking at her, he had dimple on his cheeks and beside his eyes, he have high jaw like he is from royalty, and he smell good and she feel very shy when he keep looking at her.

" once again . . I'm soo sorry mister . . there are too much in my mind so I didn't pay attention to where I'm going " she said with apologic face.

Then Jalal pacified Pri saying he is ok n problem with the spilling of coffee. Jalal wonder with her beauty if she is some kind an angel that God send to earth, and what make beautiful angel like like her leave heaven and walk among human. Then they parted their ways. His family members saw the coffee on his shirt n asked about it n he said"It's nothing".

Jalal was continuously thinking about the angel he saw n decided to meet her once again.He felt disappointed that he didn't ask her name.Same condition with Pari also she was also not able forget the handsome guy.With this thought both dozed off in to sleep.

So first chappy is finally updated.Sorry for any spelling mistakes.

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Edited by Kavya_P - 8 years ago

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

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Yahooo im first 😆 i rarely get a chance to comment first thats why this excitement 😆

Back to story 😉

Nice start ra ,jalal and jodha have such a nice family .

Wow they met each other in the first chap itself

Thats so sweet and wait whats happening here ?? I mean she spilled cofee on his shirt and instead of shouting and all jalal miya is lost in her beauty .😉

Same goes with jodha ,she was smitten by his dashing persona .

And now they are desperate for their second meeting 😳

Looking forward for the next chapter

Update next part soon

Thanks for pm

Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago