@ Deeps,
I read your OS last night and what can I say.. it was lovely.. obviously hit home on many fronts... 🤗
London, Kent, 😉 Holi Mela.. hee hee... I could see a smile on your face as you typed this one.. and the first one on your new lappy!
A new kind of Jodha and a new kind of Jalal...
Loved the start and it almost felt like the beginning of a new story! I wish I could read more...
It would be lovely for you to continue but I know it must be difficult to regularly update 2 stories (or even one for that matter)
I have a doubt though... he's taken a few other girls on his girlfriend??? Cos he seems to be aware of the experience that girls don't like their hair and clothes flying in the air!😉
P.S. Mr.Lashy saw me reading this wall of text at 11 pm last night and asked me what I was doing... when I mentioned someone (I kept the someone a mystery😉) wrote a story for me because it was my birthday, he was astonished...
Thanks dear... 🤗
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