Registan Ka Gulab Chapter 13 Thread closed - Page 87

Originally posted by: ketaki1

yup totally...😆

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

I am replying to someone after so long...had literally lost touch with everyone here...babe this is such an amazing chapter...i love how u ppl r continuing with ur stories even i need to do that...i will now that the marriage and all rituals are done..i just cant wait for jalal to find out that radha is jodha..then what will he do to marry her..that i want to know..plz plz update soon..

I absolutely agree on that... At least in the first few chapters, her character shaped up definitely strongly. (But written very poorly)... Once this story winds up then I am going to rewrite entire story.

God don't do that, Bhavu... once its out there for others to read and they've accepted it.. why change it? And I don't see why you must change RRSR!

I still think of when this story plot suddenly came in my mind... and I was not able to hold myself. I was not able to think anything else other than this plot...

I know that feeling... right now my story keeps revolving in my mind... even when I'm feeding the kids 😆

I wanted to portray Radha's character in Jalal's mind in such way that it's justifiable to readers for his attraction towards a maid.

You have gone beyond justifications... 😉

Yaar... Shraddha I wrote in Hindi first😆 and then translate it into English, Tell you the truth😕

This is where I must confess... one of the reasons, I took long to read your story is because Hindi is not a language I am comfortable reading/writing... reading your English sentences is a breeze.. but the long Hindi dialogues take me a very very long time to complete... 😭

First and foremost part of the story is focusing on how they fall in love. Soon his focus will divert to Radha only... hehe😆 poor Jalal...

Awww... but bhavu... the story stays realistic when we get to know the person in their entirety.. it also gives a bit of variety/spice to a storyline... (I'm yet to read the rest - only replying to this sentence) Yes, romance is the main theme.. but action/plotting - all of it makes the story😉

Thank U so much...😳 I have received so many compliments from many readers for this story, but your compliments value a lot more to me just because you are my top most favorite writer...🤗 Every time I have read your writing I have learned from it... U inspired me all the time...

THANK YOU... 😃 and likewise!

Aww... Thank U so much Shraddha... LOVE U❤️ ... AND I love the way u call me BHAVU...😳 Sounds sweet like honey...🤗

Will ONLY call you Bhavu from now on! 😛😛

Originally posted by: lashy

As the story drew me in, I am here for the next couple of chapters...

I absolutely agree on that... At least in the first few chapters, her character shaped up definitely strongly. (But written very poorly)... Once this story winds up then I am going to rewrite entire story.

God don't do that, Bhavu... once its out there for others to read and they've accepted it.. why change it? And I don't see why you must change RRSR!

I will not change the story but edit grammar error and omit hindi dialogues. or add translation.

I still think of when this story plot suddenly came in my mind... and I was not able to hold myself. I was not able to think anything else other than this plot...

I know that feeling... right now my story keeps revolving in my mind... even when I'm feeding the kids 😆

I wanted to portray Radha's character in Jalal's mind in such way that it's justifiable to readers for his attraction towards a maid.

You have gone beyond justifications... 😉

Yaar... Shraddha I wrote in Hindi first😆 and then translate it into English, Tell you the truth😕

This is where I must confess... one of the reasons, I took long to read your story is because Hindi is not a language I am comfortable reading/writing... reading your English sentences is a breeze.. but the long Hindi dialogues take me a very very long time to complete... 😭

I think you have only two chapter to suffer than 95% in English😆.

First and foremost part of the story is focusing on how they fall in love. Soon his focus will divert to Radha only... hehe😆 poor Jalal...

Awww... but bhavu... the story stays realistic when we get to know the person in their entirety.. it also gives a bit of variety/spice to a storyline... (I'm yet to read the rest - only replying to this sentence) Yes, romance is the main theme.. but action/plotting - all of it makes the story😉

See when I started this story my reading was limited to Jodha Akbar story on the forum. I used to read a lot of hindi novels before marriage but after marriage I forget about my reading passion. but I am again hooked on reading... After reading for a year passionately ... I understand more how to write and cover many different possibilities other than romance... also learned how to emphasize on different characters. I feel that I missed out political aspect of the story. but India forum is learning platform so I learn every day here. Probably when I will start third story I will make sure all aspects are covered.

Thank U so much...😳 I have received so many compliments from many readers for this story, but your compliments value a lot more to me just because you are my top most favorite writer...🤗 Every time I have read your writing I have learned from it... U inspired me all the time...

THANK YOU... 😃 and likewise!

Aww... Thank U so much Shraddha... LOVE U❤️ ... AND I love the way u call me BHAVU...😳 Sounds sweet like honey...🤗

Will ONLY call you Bhavu from now on! 😛😛

Feels my sis is calling me 'BHAVU😳'