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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely chapter dii!
jo is so fast..😆
their first kiss...

nice one!
thanx for the pm..😃
update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum
amazing
jo kissed jalal
bechara jalal.. itna zada shock laga ki react hi ni kar paya 🤣
oo lala
hot kiss
loved it dii
update asap

my like button is not working
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

Hey everyone i want to ask you all one question "what is meaning of res?"
you all commenting in PR's but i don't know it's meaning please tell me

Res means reserved sweety...
First we read then if we don't have time to comment then we will just comment as res..that means that place is reserved for our comment...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments...
I am clubbing two chapters in one.. hope u all like it...
It is a longgg one.. I hope...
Thank u all.
Love u all..


CHAPTER 42:

Jodha rest her head on bed headboard..checking mails in her phone..

Jalal comes & sit beside her.. takes mobile from her hand.. & says...
Can I ask u something??

Jodha: yeah tell me.. Mr jalal..

Jalal: so what makes u confess suddenly.. that to after fight with me.. is it because radha?? U are jealous because of her.. won't u??

Jodha: jealous my foot..I am not.. y should I jealous??

Jalal: really?? I think u are jealous.. now I understood.. u again & again asking about her ..u don't like her Much.. accept it jodha.. u are jealous..

Jodha: no jalal.. I am not.. I just asked u.. I am getting sleeping.. good night..

Jalal: really..?? U know just now I talk with my sister.. she told me that u are jealous.. u are really stupid Sonu.. how can I love her.. when I have beautiful wife with me..

Jodha: don't act.. u hug her lot of times..I saw.. is it required to hug her?? U can talk her but u should maintain distance na..?I have phone , she had my number.. she can call to me.. but she always calls to u..look jalal I am not jealous.& .. ur sister is really.. is she friend to me or u?? U are gone Vaishu..

Jalal laughs loudly..

Jodha just stares at him. He is so cute laughing like that..

Jalal stops after sometime..
& says this is called as jealous.. & stop staring at me.. I want to kiss u again if u look at me Like this..

Jodha embarrassed.. gets shy with his words..but soon start argument
.

Jodha: no.. I am not jealous..

Jalal: ok.. u are not jealous.. but u are stupid to think like that..ok.. laughs again.

Jodha also joins him..
Both are happy..

Jalal:ok sleep now..

Jodha: good night jalal.. sleeps..

Jalal: says good night & sleeps on other side..

After 10 minutes...

Jodha: seems some body forgot something..

Jalal: what?? Me??

Jodha: daily u will give kiss to me.. won't u give??

Jalal: how do u know( he knows that already but just acting) with surprise expression...

Jodha: don't act mr jalal.. u know already that I know this thing.. no need to wait for 1 more hour to give good night kiss.. u can give now & sleep...

Jalal: smiles.. we both know Sonu.. but actually I forgot.. I mean it habituated for me na.. After u sleep only I used to give.. today also I am thinking same.. &.comes near her..

Jodha closes her eyes to feel him..

Jalal Gives kiss on her forehead & cheeks..
Stops at lips..
Jodha opens her eyes y he is not giving..

Jalal looks at her eyes for permission..
Jodha nods her & close her eyes..

Jalal: open ur eyes.. look into me.. don't hide them from Me..

Jodha opens looks at him..

Jalal kissed her gently.. jodha participated equally..

The kiss itself clears to jodha..
He was promising to be with her.. never do mistakes in her life..

Jalal breaks the kiss.. & kiss her forehead again says..good night Sonu..
Takes her hand into his..

Both sleeps



CHAPTER 43:

In the morning.. by 8:00am

Jodha wakes up..jalal still sleeping holding her hand tightly..

Jodha kiss his forehead & says.. good morning hubby.. removes her hand from his grip..& goes to freshen up..

After an hour jalal wakes up..looks at empty bed.. smiles remembering yesterday's events..

Jalal pov:
Oh god.. still I didn't believe.. this all is true.. it happened..it's not dream.. I thought that u won't confess in this life.. but u did..radha my buddy thanks to u.. because of u only she confessed.. if I know this already I will tell radha to join early in our company.. but fine.. finally my Sonu accepted me.. that's a great news.. hmm.. where is she..music is coming.. that means she is cooking.. seems u up long back.. Sonu u changed me completely.. look at me.. good boy bangaya jodha ka boy.. jodhajalal.. u took mine.. wake up early.. where I am sleeping still... I want to sleep for some more time.. yep. Ur dialogue 5 more minutes... smiles himself...

Jalal jalal..
End of pov..

Jodha: jalal jalal.. get up.. time is 9.. let's have breakfast.. get up..

Jalal:jodha 5 minutes plz..

Jodha: don't play my trick on me.. I know 5 minutes means 30 minutes.. now get up.. we need to go Amma house.. we have to bring salim back..

Jalal gets up.. drags jodha to sit..

Jalal: ok we will go.. I am missing my son.. I want to give this beautiful news to my son , aunty & uncle..

Jodha: all knows about it..

Jalal: hmmm.I think u told to everyone.. finally I got to know.. but it's ok.. finally u confessed..u are mine.. now lets tell them about ur adventurous kiss.. midnight 1 am.. on the road.. good idea na.. hmmm..what u say?Winks at her.

Jodha: jalalll... u are really shameless.. Will u discuss this with them.. leave me.. u sleep.. I will go & have breakfast..

Jalal: smiles... just kidding jodha.. but tell me one thing.. how come this idea came to ur brain..

Jodha: actually it was my dream once upon when I was studying intermediate we went to vacation.. we are traveling in the midnight. All are sleeping.. u know about me na.. not getting sleeping looking outside.. suddenly I found one couple kissing on the Main road.. I just loved it.. that day I decided when I want to kiss my man I wanted do that... so I did.. to my luck.. u. slept.. I took u there..seems u didn't liked it..with pout face..

Jalal: no I didn't liked it.. but I loved it.. thanks to that couple.. they made my day.. & u know I have to thank one more person..

Jodha: who??

Jalal: my girlfriend.. radha...

Jodha: jalalll... gets up angrily..

Jalal: ok.. ok.. sorry.. but really u are jealous..I loved it Sonu...

Jodha: but I hate u..

Jalal gets up from bed & comes towards her..

Jodha goes back.. finally she hits the wall..

Jalal locks her.. he puts his hands both sides..

Jodha feels shy.. & jalal plz..leave me..

Jalal: say it I love u..

Jodha: no way.. I hate u.. u are teasing me..

Jalal: u are jealous.. I know.. accept it ... or else I will kiss u again..

Jodha: ok.. I don't hate u.. I kept tea on the stove plz. Leave me.. or else u have to face silent jodha.. which is very tough for u.. is it ok??

Jalal: no plz.. leaves her.. it's better don't say..but plz don't be silent..
Removes his hands..

Jodha: that's better.. come soon.. let's have breakfast..

Finally jalal freshen up... both have breakfast & goes to jodha house to bring back salim..

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing updates
really loved it
both went to get salim back😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
love is in the air.😃
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res...
As usual a lovely n romantic chappy.. 👏
Love to see this side of jo 😉
Day by day both are coming closely 😆 😆
All scenes are funny.. 😆
Edited by ANJIJHA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum
goodnight kiss was really good
hehe
jalal teased her on radha
🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful chappies akka
thanks for two updates
pov is nice
good night kiss n everything is beautiful
update soon akka
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing chptrs dear
loved it


thnks for pm

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