THE LAST MISTAKE...THREAD 2.. New link on pg155 - Page 86

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mamtasingla thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
link button is not working..sorry for that
update soon
sharmacatty thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA


Hee Di.. I am repeating ur words because i am supporting u...
Aap mujhse bhi angry ho gayi 😭 😭
Mujhse fever hai tab bhi main roj check karti hu ki lakshu Di ne update kiya hai ki nahi.. Aur mujhse bura lagta tha ki unhone update hi nahi kiya isliye i am supporting u..


😭 😭


Oh I had my other stupid reasons. I was not actually angry on her😆
Plz comment on her beautiful story. She was busy dear. and why would I get angry on u?? 😆
You're not well. Take care dear😊 Btw What's ur name??


PS: I would like u to call me Payal dear. NO " di" Please.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update didu..
Ay first jalal could not believe what he heard 😆 but when jo said it again n again then he believed 😃
he again apologised to her and cried in her warmth 😭 he let out all the pain n guilt that he had buried indide him for 4 years..
Finally they are happily married couple ❤️
continue soon
thanku for pm
love u
take care
Edited by chaudhary_kajal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty


Oh I had my other stupid reasons. I was not actually angry on her😆
Plz comment on her beautiful story. She was busy dear. and why would I get angry on u?? 😆
You're not well. Take care dear😊 Btw What's ur name??


PS: I would like u to call me Payal dear. NO " di" Please.

Oh dear.. I am so sorry.. I was busy in my celebrations..
I will update now regularly...
Plz comment dear. Take care...
Get well soon...

Payal aap tho didi ban gaya.
Payal di...
Kaisa ho...

Hahahah😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Oh dear.. I am so sorry.. I was busy in my celebrations..
I will update now regularly...
Plz comment dear. Take care...
Get well soon...

Payal aap tho didi ban gaya.
Payal di...
Kaisa ho...

Hahahah😆

ha ha everyday my new sis born here on IF. Now I can't take this any more😆
I am feeling like I am the only one mature member here and all other's are younger to me😭
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

ha ha everyday my new sis born here on IF. Now I can't take this any more😆
I am feeling like I am the only one mature member here and all other's are younger to me😭

Hahahah...
Even I am didi to lot of members..
No problem payu... we both are not sisters. We are friends...
But we are lucky to have lot of sisters.
If gave me a small family.
Thank u all my lovely sisters...
Love u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u for the lovely comments...
Love u all..
If u people want one more update now give jaldi jaldi comments...
So I will update again by night...
Waiting waiting...
Thank u all..


CHAPTER 40.2:

Jalal takes her to the dining table..

Jodha served him..

Jalal wants to feed jodha first time which he never did.. he was thinking.. If she takes it as wrong sign.. oh no.. let it be like this..
Mixing his rice but didn't started eating..

Jodha observed him.. & says.. jalal do u want something?? U can say no problem..

Jalal: hmm.. If u don't mind should I feed u one morsel??

Jodha: u are thinking for that small thing?? U know what I hate eating myself.. if u feed me daily I will eat happily...

Jalal: really should I??

Jodha opens her mouth..

Jalal feeds her happily..
Jodha ate happily...

Both are eating silently.. just enjoying the moment..

Both completed their dinner..

Sits on the swing.. on different sides.. lot of distance is there between them..

Till yesterday jalal used to talk much & even jodha.. but today seems both have no words to say.. pindrop silence is there.. Both wants to talk but don't know how to start a discussion...only the swing is making noise...

Jodha tried to break the silence..

Jodha: jalal how is office today..??

Jalal:.Hmmm..actually it's not good... y u didn't pick my call.. I was so mad at myself.. I am so so...

But jalal didn't finished his words..

Bell rang...
At late hours ..
11pm...

Jodha: now..who came??

Jalal completely forgot about roses & chocolates which he ordered for jodha..

Jalal: can u go check it Sonu??

Jodha : ok..

Jalal thinks what if it is not delivery boy.. calls for jodha..
Jodha wait let me see first who is that..

Jodha: what?? I didn't get u..

Jalal: ufff.. come with me..

Both goes to near door
Jalal looks from peephole & conforms that it is delivery boy..

Jalal: ok jodha u can open now..

Jodha: is anything happened to u?? R u fine?? U can open the door na?? Y u are asking me to open that to at this late hours?? & do u know who is it? U saw from peephole na?? Can't u open??

The delivery boy keep on ringing the bell..

Jalal: ufff.. long speech..trust me Sonu..
Goes to swing again. & sits..

Jodha opens the door..

D.b: Mrs jalal ??

Jodha: yes..

D.b: madam this is for u.. From Mr jalal..
Here is ur msg..
Gives her chocolates , roses & msg card...

Jodha : thank u..
Opens the msg card..

My love I am so sorry.. I should not scream at u.. plz forgive me jodha... I can't able to concentrate on anything.. u keep on revolving in my mind.. I am really sorry..my day was very sad.. now plz give me ur smile..plz plz..
love u jodha..
Always ur stupid husband...

Jodha feels emotional & she didn't expect this.. a lone tear escape from her eyes..Goes near to jalal..
Hugs him..
Jodha: I am sorry.. I don't know u will take my silence as this much serious..
Jalal breaks the hug..& says
Without ur smile my day will be very bad jodha.. when u happy automatically I am happy.. if u want to scream at me then do it.. but don't be silent..

Jodha kisses him on her forehead & cheeks.. closes her eyes to relish the moment...

Jodha herself don't know y she did that..

Poor jalal was just awestruck.. he didn't expect her to kiss him..
He was in a dreamland...

Jodha wants to run away to hide her shy..steps back..

But jalal holds her hand & grab her from waist..& says.. jodha look at me..

Jodha feeling nervous & happy shy.. all at a time. She never felt this feeling before.. she can feel jalal breath on her face.. he is deadly close to her.. few inches apart.. she is feeling thousands of butterflies are dancing in stomach..
She was sure this called love.. one mere touch of his make her go jelly.. he holds her tightly or else she may fall..to prevent falling she holds his shoulders..& she slowly lift her eyes to face him..

Jalal: suddenly y u are uncomfortable?? Is it about kiss..??

Jodha: no no..not the kiss jalal..

Jalal: then u are comfortable with kissing?? Winks at her

Jodha: oh no.. I am not I am not..

Jalal: haha.. smiles.. I am just Kidding.. tell me.. seems u are really uncomfortable... what's the matter??

Jodha: actually can I change my dress.. I can't handle Saree more than this.. I don't know how to drape.. I took help from amma through phone.. it didn't came not so good.. shall I??

Jalal: chuckles..yep u can..but listen sonu nothing is changed between us.. U are same jodha.. i am same jalal. Who loves u more & more.. U can talk to me like before.. intact we can stay more comfortable with each other.. ok..
Jodha just nodes..

Jalal:do u like them??

Jodha: what??

Jalal: roses & chocolates??

Jodha: no.. I love them..

Jalal: thank u Sonu.. actually I forgot about them.. but came on perfect time.. ok..but shall we go out??

Jodha: now?? Are u sure?? u don't like late nights na..??

Jalal: hmm.. yeah.. U like night outs much.. i love u.. ur favorite is mine.. let's celebrate our first day as lovers.. what say?? Lets say first date..

Jodha: really?? Actually we already done lot of dates..

Jalal: hmm.. are we??

Jodha bites her tongue.. I mean I mean..

Jalal chuckles.. ok ok.. I understood..chalo let's go..

Jodha: Jalal I need to change first..

Jalal: ok.. go..

Jodha: leave me.. then only I can go..

Jalal gave kiss on her forehead & says.. Sonu u made my day.. after our marriage first time u wear this mangalasutra.. vermilion everything which says I am ur husband.. Sonu can I ask u something??

Jodha: yes.. what??

Jalal: this mangalsutra is so precious for me Sonu..it's my grandmother's.. if u don't mind keep wearing this.. I love it when it is with u.. I know u will never remove my chain.. but if possible try to wear this.. May be occasionally..

Jodha: ok jalal.. I will..

Jalal: u look so pretty & beautiful in Saree.. I love u Sonu..kiss on her cheek..go now..

Jodha: thanks.. Will u leave me now??

Jalal: I don't want to.. but for now I will leave u..

Leaves her..

Jodha goes to changing..


Precap:
Adventurous jodha...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely chapter dear❤️
while reading I was like >>😃😆

I enjoyed this chapter😊 and this jalal is really very sweet😆
Poor stupid husband was awestruck by her kiss.😛
and this jo can't hold her tongue na😆

I too love chocolates re😛

Thanks for the pm!!
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Hahahah...
Even I am didi to lot of members..
No problem payu... we both are not sisters. We are friends...
But we are lucky to have lot of sisters.
If gave me a small family.
Thank u all my lovely sisters...
Love u...

😆
I know but I do have a problem with this😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chappy akka
Roses msg on chocolates is nice
Kiss is unexpected for poor Jalal
Update soon akka

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