THE LAST MISTAKE...THREAD 2.. New link on pg155 - Page 84

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

u said u will give 2 chappis yesterday
😭

She will give 3 updates today😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dii
ohh jo was hell nervous that's why she was commanding jalal 😆
jalal forgot everything after seeing jodha in saree she was looking ravishing and jalal thought that he's in some dreamland 🤣
finally she said I LOVE U to him ❤️
eager to know jalal's reaction
thanku for pm
continue soon
love u
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u for the lovely comments...
I will give 3 updates as I promised..
Love u all..
Thank u all..

CHAPTER 40.1:

Jodha: I LOVE U TOO JALAL..

hugs him tightly..

Jalal: yeah.. ok.. hugs her.. but WHAT?? He breaks the hug.. holds her shoulders.. what did u said?

Jodha: I love u too Jalal..try to hugs him again.. she is tooo shy to say...
But he is not allowing her..
Jalal: jodha.. did u Said?? Is it true.?? Say it again jodha..plz is it true??

Jodha: looks into his eyes.. & cups his face.. & says.. yes.. I love u too..

Jalal grabs her & hugs her tightly..
He is getting tears in his eyes.. happy tears..

After 2 minutes.. jalal breaks the hug..
Kneels down in front of her..

Jalal: Sonu.. it's time for my apology which u truly deserved from me.. I want the whole entire world to know that I did mistake.. my mistake is not a small one.. I broke ur heart , ur trust on Me.. but still u loved me.. I even don't deserve to stand in front of u.. but u accepted my love.. I am promising u Sonu.. that will be the LAST MISTAKE in my life.. Ur life in miserable because of me.. whenever u need me I am not there for u..I destroyed u completely..but U raise up my blood & u left everything for our son.. small sorry is not enough for my crime.. but still I am saying I AM SORRY.. truly.. I am promising u today I will never do any mistakes in ur life.. I will be with u till my last breath.. I will never leave u again.. live like urself.. don't change anything for me.. I will never touch u if u don't like it.. but don't leave me plz.. stay with me.. I TRULY MADLY LOVE U SONU..
Thanks for coming in my life.. thanks for making me a father..
Thanks for accepting my love..
Thanks for forgiving me..
Bends his head down..


Jodha get tears with this..
She kneel down in front of him..

Cups his face.. & says jalal.. let's forget it.. & I love u too Chinnu..
Kisses him on his forehead..

Jalal hugs her tightly..& cries..

Jodha didn't stopped him.. let him cry as much as he can.. he bear the guilt in his heart for 4 years.. today he opened up.. for the world he is a strong man but inside he is broken man.. to others he is handsome man but he disgusted himself.. hates himself to the core..

Jodha: jalal cry how much u can.. remove the guilt from ur heart.. but later we should never discuss this again.. jodha holdes him tightly.. to give support..
He always there for her whenever she need.. but for jalal nobody is there to share his pain.. he always hides his pain.. but today he can't able to stop it..

Jodha understood him & gave support to him..

Jalal cried & cried... he let out his pain today.. he can't able to bear it..he can't bear this anymore... he hugged jodha tightly..& let out his pain in her warmth..
After a good cry.. he settled..

Jalal: thank u jodha...breaks the hug..

Jodha:.Hmmm..ok.. with serious...

Jalal can feel it.. y serious?? Just now u confessed. Wait u didn't said I love u.. U said I love u too.. U are really adamant to admit jodha... but I love that in u.. pulls her cheeks...smiles...

Jodha: yep... y should I say first?? U first proposed me.. I gave the answer.. of course little late...One more thing I hate when someone pull my cheeks.. Don't do that..better kiss them but not pulling.. second still u are calling me as jodha..

Jalal: smiles hearing her..yep.. little late... 4 years.. chuckles..& so my Sonu wants kiss..

Jodha: yeah.. no no no.. I didn't mean it..

Jalal: chuckles...don't worry.. I won't kiss u without ur permission..
Side hugs her...

Jodha: that's my jalal..let's have dinner.. I am feeling hungry...

Jalal: ok.. gets up..
Gives his hand to her...
Jodha takes it.

Both gets up to have dinner..

Precap:
Kiss...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.. jalal's reaction was so funny😆
Poor husband couldn't believe that she really said that
but I loved when he asked her to say again and the way she cupped his face was ❤️

Each word of jalal was so heart touching.. No doubt he's the best husband any girl can get😃
I really loved that instead of dancing he got emotional and opened up in front of jodha.. He still realized his mistake and jo supported him. She let him cry because she too understood his pain.
This was the best part for me in this chapter laksh.😊

and after that.. Not so stupid husband realized that what she had said.. 😆 "I love you too"

Yeah she was adamant and it's the right of every girl to have such attitude😆 haina??

Don't do that..better kiss them but not pulling..
>>> Couldn't she hold her tongue in front of him,specially in such situations??😆

I won't kiss u without ur permission..
>>> Aww he's so sweet.. but Frankly,I don't like such sweet and good boys.

Don't make such situations in future laksh that jo has to seduce him 😆

It was a lovely chapter dear.. I so enjoyed reading it👏



Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow..superb...in all sense jo supported ja today...giving shoulder to cry take out his guilt...ja confession was emotional still heart touching...loved it laksh... waiting for next chapi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww jalal he is so happy soul at this moment
Jodha accepted his love yayyy
More than jalal im happy😆
He is guilty and apologised once again and jodha helped him to get out of his guilt .
Loved the update dear
Precap sounds hmmm
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update sissy 😃
So finally jodha didi ne bhi love you bol dia 😆
dreamland se niklo jalal bhai
continue soon
thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update sissy 😃
Jalal bhai don't cry na
Jodha didi 😆
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc chappy finally jo sayss ... updatee
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update
Finally Jo confessed her love to ja
Poor JA confused that it's was his dream or real
Jo's arrangements was awesome
Waiting for our ja's reaction
Update soon akka

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