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Posted: 9 years ago
I got to remember some old incidents when I read ur comment.. so I blushed..
Hahaha.. 😳
Stupid husband.. this line reminded me something..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

I got to remember some old incidents when I read ur comment.. so I blushed..
Hahaha.. 😳
Stupid husband.. this line reminded me something..😳

oh what's it??Tell me in pm😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments...
Sorry for late update..
I will give two updates now only..
Love u all..
Happy woman's day

CHAPTER 37.1:

Jalal reaches to jodha house by night..

Jodha also knows he will come..& she is waiting for him..

Maina & Bhar was surprised with his sudden visiting.. they didn't expect him.. that to suddenly.. without any information..but they are happy.. welcomes jalal..

Salim is very happy.. poor soul missed his father..

Jodha was in her bedroom.. she didn't came out.

Jalal searching for jodha..

Maina understand jalal.. & says.
ur wife is in her bedroom... I think she is angry with u.. jalal she is very dull from past 1 week.. she didn't talked with anyone.. always saying wants to stay alone.. but from noon she is happy very happy.. smiling happily.. I think u maked her happy.. but I must admit jalal she missed u a lot..

Jalal was happy with maina words..& hugs maina & says thanks aunty.. I know I know.. she is angry.. I am there to cool her..
I will go to her.. or else again shows her angry.. show me her room..

Maina: oh jalal.. how sweet of u.. but first time as a son in law u came.. at least let me give arthi & sweet to u...

Jalal: aunty better u give arthi tomorrow for both of us..give me the sweet urgent.. I wanted to see my Sonu.. 1 week is really tough for me..

Jodha listens all this.. blush like a idiot.. she wants to run & hug him.. don't know y but she wants to hug him..to feel the warmth of his hug..

Maina puts kumkum on jalal forehead..& gaves sweet & Bhar also feeds jalal..

Bhar: I am sorry jalal. Plz forgive me..for that aweful day. holds his hands..

Jalal: uncle plz forget it.. thanks for giving ur daughter to me.. & I am sorry for what I did for jodha..bends his head down..
Touches Bhar & maina feet..

Bhar: lifts jalal from shoulders... Plz..forget all.. don't touch our feet beta.. it's not good.. son in law should not touch our feet... in our tradition bride father washes groom legs.. u are like a god to us.. we should treat son in law with respect.. but I did crime... I shouldn't do this to u..

Jalal: hugs Bhar.. Will u plz forget that uncle.. Plz..I deserve it uncle.. in fact I deserve more..but by gods Grace u forgived me.. & I am still waiting for forgiveness uncle... & plz that chapter is over for us.. forget it.. now show me my wife room.. I really want to freshen up.. I came directly from the office...

Bhar chuckles hearing him..ok.ok.. maina.. I will show to jalal..u prepare food...

Jalal Went inside of the jodha room...

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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 37.2:

Jodha is waiting for jalal...
Jalal came to jodha bedroom..he is standing at the door & looking at her..jodha look at him..

Both look at each other..

Both got tears in eyes... but both hides their tears...
An awkward silence is there between them... Both don't know how to start a discussion...Both wants to hug each other.. but don't have dare to do that..

Jodha tried to get up from bed..

Jalal: no jodha.. Plz sit..goes near her.. sits beside her..& asks..how are u feeling now??

Jodha:.better.. how are u jalal??
She wants to say I miss u jalal..but she didn't..

Jalal: not fine jodha.. I missed u like hell.. missing is a very small word to express.. y u went jodha?? Don't u have freedom with me?? Can't u share ur problem with me??..Y u lied to me jodha?? luckily I asked salim.. y u did that jodha?? Did I told u that u r burden for me? Jodha I told u so many times.. u are mine...only mine ..my responsibility.. I don't like misunderstanding between us.. Plz come back.. I miss u a lot jodha...

Jodha: it's ok.. jalal.. I don't want to be the reason for u & ur mother break up.. Plz.. don't fight with her.. forget it jalal..Plz go freshen up...
( she was happy with jalal return..but still she lost the freedom with him again..last 1 week is horrible for her.. she determined to stay away from jalal as much as she can... to avoid further problems)

Jalal: u will talk with me right?? Plz..

Jodha: yeah... thinks I can't stay away from u... I wanted to talk with u.. spend with u only..but...

Jalal: jodha.. where are u lost??

Jodha: nothing nothing.. go plz..

Jalal goes to freshen up..

Jalal pov:

Sonu.. won't u trust me?? Plz.. talk with me like before.. I can feel the difference.. but I will get back u jodha.. whatever I will make u smile again.. it's my promise to u..

End of pov.

Maina calls for dinner..

Jalal wants to help jodha but jodha refused..

Jodha: I am fine jalal.. I can walk.. I am not handicapped.. just 2 more weeks.. say thanks to aunty.. this walker really helped me a lot.. moves to dining area..

Jalal wants to grab & scream on her & kiss her like there is no tomorrow for her cold behavior.. ..he is getting angry on her.. but he composed himself

At the dining table..

All are talking.. but jodha was silent.. she is observing jalal..

Even jalal know that she is observing him.. he too observed her but without her knowledge..

Dinner completed..

Maina told jodha to share bedroom with jalal.. she know they are not having husband & wife relation..

Maina: jodha.. whatever u want to do, do it in ur home.. but this is my home.. jalal is my son in law.. so respect him.. Plz.. for our sake..

Jodha nods.. goes to her room..

Jalal is sitting on the chair.. working on the laptop..

Jodha goes & sleeps on the bed..

After 10 minutes..

Jalal closed his laptop..

Goes near jodha & gives medicine to her..

She takes it calmly..

Jalal again goes & sits on chair.. closes his eyes..

Jodha waits for 10 more minutes..
But he didn't Said a single word..

Jodha: jalal jalal..

Jalal: yeah..jodha.. tell me.. do u want anything..

Jodha: nothing.. won't u sleep??

Jalal: yeah.. I will sleep... I will go to salim room after 30 minutes.. all will sleep in 30 minutes then I will go..

Jodha: no need.. u can sleep here..

Jalal: where floor?? I want to sleep but u know its not good if I sleep on floor.. aunty may feel bad..if u want me to sleep then I will..

Jodha: no... no jalal..

Jalal: then???

Jodha: sleep on the bed.. we can share the bed..


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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 37.1:
he he jalal was so desperate to meet jodha but she has to maintain her arrogance and anger so she didn't come out but enjoying his restlessness and eagerness to meet her😆
I love this jo❤️😆

Finally bharmal and maina accepted him wholeheartedly and he's their family now. Jalal is now getting that respect from them which a son-in-law deserves.😊 I liked this chapter and the trio scene because they were so comfortable with each other😃

CHAPTER 37.2:

so he reached her room😛 Believe me I was so excited while reading this part😆
they were feeling awkward as both knew that they felt the same way without each other but couldn't say in words. He was waiting for her CONFESSION but I think he has to wait more for it. She's not going to confess so easily jalal😆

Jalal felt the difference in her behaviour though she was happy to see him and I understood why she behaved like that.
I love this "Chup chup k ek doosre ko dekhna"😆
Because when we remember these things in future.. it gives a reason to have a good laugh and discerning from where we have started and how far we have come now.❤️
Now jalal is getting upset with her and showing his tantrums.. though not openly but she could feel his cold behaviour.He was ready to sleep on floor on her wish but at the same time he told her his wish too that he don't want to sleep on a floor.
FINALLY
They will share the bed now😃😆
I'm damn sure all his anger will be vanished and there's no way that he would leave this golden chance to sleep with her on a same bed.😉😆



Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
kartikaJA thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome chapoy Di...
Thank god bharmal n maina expected ja whole heartly...
Listening ja talk jo is blusing...
Wow.. They sharing a bed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Owesome chappy yaar..you know i don't have a word to describe it really fabulous update...i just happy for duo...interesting precape that they are going to share a bed...egerly waiting for next update please not make us wait for long
happy woman's day!...
Love you so much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapters Lakshmi
Love it a lot
And why you always will stop this story?
We love it darling. And please keep it up
Thanks for the pm too dear
Waiting for next part :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chappies akka
Jo should open up na
Jalal's gesture towards his in laws is so nice
Update soon
I'm eagerly waiting for confession

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