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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments dears..
Love u all..

Birthday girl kavya.. this is for u..
Happy birthday kavya.. May God bless u always.. be happy..keep smiling..


CHAPTER 37:

Jodha reaches her home..but she was dull.. completely dull... ignoring jalal calls.. she didn't talked with him..even once.. always resting in the bed & thinking about jalal.. she missed jalal very badly.. his teasing.. his continues talks.. his caring.. she missed everything.. she wants to talk with him.. but she was angry on jalal.. he didn't asked to her stay back.. & he believed what his mom says... slowly unknowingly she is falling for jalal..

The case is not different with jalal.. he missed her badly.. he was habituated to stay with her.. missing is a very small word for jalal... he wants to go... but he is waiting for her approval... yes.. he is waiting..

Flashback

Jalal asked salim who bought that walker..
Salim told its Abdul( jalal brother)

Jalal understood everything.. he don't want to shout on her mother in front of all.. so he stayed quite... he wrote a letter to jodha & kept in her laptop bag... to stay her back & asking forgiveness because of his mom..
After jodha went he screamed on Hamida..

Jalal:.mom this is the first & last mistake..if u do again all this.. forget ur son mom.. mom whether u accept or not jodha is my life... if jodha is not there remember u lost ur son also..

Hamida: ok.. jalal.. I am leaving.. I will never come back again.. good bye.. for u ur wife is important.. U are screaming on me because of her.. U are changed completely.. U are not behaving like my son... good bye..
Goes from there..jalal didn't stopped her.. which hurted Hamida a lot..

End of flashback...

Whenever he calls to maina to ask about jodha, maina told jalal that she is working..
Jalal thinking... aunty is saying u are working.. but when u open the laptop u will find my letter.. did u read or not jodha?? I am waiting for ur call.. y u are not responding.. I said sorry also.. still are u angry on me jodha.. I didn't do any mistake jodha..plz come back.. I miss u Sonu...

After 1 week..

Jodha wants to move out from all thoughts... she wants to work for sometime to refresh herself..

She opened the laptop.. she find a letter... opens it...& starts reading...


My love,

Plz don't go..plz.. I can't live without u.. plz I am very sorry.. I know this is all because of my mom.. but I don't want to shout on her in front of all... she is at mistake but she is my mother also.. I can't do that in front of all... but I will talk with my mom for sure.. I am sorry jodha.. plz stay back.. I know u are going for few days but I can't stay away from u.. u are world to me.. even if I loose the job I don't care.. I want to stay with u.. I won't go office again.. I went just for 3 hours lot of things happened.. I am so sorry jodha.. plz.. forgive me.. I am holding my ears.. I will take whatever punishment u will give..but plz come back.. if u want to go really to ur house then I will also stay with u..plz.. I don't like other than me to care u... u know it's my work.. I born only for u.. u are my responsibility.. plz Jodha plz.. forgive this sinner.. plz come back.. I love u Sonu... plz come back.. stay with me.. u promised me that u will never leave me.. so come back.. i am waiting for u...

Urs
Stupid husband...

That's it.. jodha smiled happily after 1 week...
She wants to hug jalal right at the moment..

She called to his mobile...

Jalal was on cloud nine when he see jodha call..but he thought may be it is maina aunty..but still a small hope is there...lifts the call..


Jalal:.jodha...jodha... is it u?

Jodha was happy.. she listened his voice after 1 week... she just nodes..

Jalal:smiles happily.. u called me.. oh god...I know I know u will call me back.. so when are u coming??

Jodha: what me?? I didn't understand anything.. mom told me to call u.. mom told me that u want to talk with me regarding some office work.. so I called u for that only..( controlling her smile)

Jalal: suddenly all his energy drop.. u called me for aunty.. ok.. nothing.. but wait I didn't told anything like that to aunty.. really u called for aunty only...

Jodha: yeah.. & salim told me that u are coming this night..

Jalal: me coming?? Salim??
Thinks ..did I?? No I didn't gave false hopes to him.. is she indirectly asking me to come.. oh god.. really.. I must say u are really adamant to admit.. ok I will play along with u..
& says.. no jodha.. I told salim but I am not coming.. I have work.. so I can't come now..

Jodha : with serious tone.. r u serious jalal.. u are not coming?? After my call... I mean salim is asking u na.. so u should come for him.

Jalal: sorry jodha.. have work.. lets see later.. now bye.. I have urgent work.. bye...

He hungs up phone...
Doing dance again... oh god.. finally after 1 week she called me... let's go jalal... if u make her wait.. she will be angry on u again.. better start now..

He starts to jodha home...

Jodha was really angry on him.. I called u.. & u Said u r busy... I hate u jalal.. don't come.. I will stay with my dad.. I hate u more...




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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh so jalal knew it already that jo was upset and waiting for her..
Laksh I loved the letter dear. I was like ❤️ I could feel that he wrote each word with his heart.❤️❤️

It was soothing,sad and lovely at the same time😊
The starting of letter, MY love.. aww

I think only these words "My love" were enough to erupt her lips in a smile after a week😊 No doubt his letter must had been left a shit eating grin on her face😆

Urs
stupid husband

You are not stupid jalal.. Infact you are the best husband❤️
Ohk then she called and I was skeptical that really jodha will tell him directly that she read the letter. I thought she will be quite hesitant to talk to him regarding this and see she proved me right😆

Jodha: what me?? I didn't understand anything.. mom told me to call u.. mom told me that u want to talk with me regarding some office work.. so I called u for that only..( controlling her smile)

I was smiling like an idiot as it reminded me something like that😆.
Laksh.. This jo is just like me.. Really😉😆

Jalal understood her game. afterall he is not an idiot jo😉 .and he will give her a surprise now😃

wanna see how jo will react on his sudden arrival, Obviously she will be happy but I wanna see how will she hide her excitement and smile in front of jalal as she is angry on him na😛😆

Thanks for the pm!!😊

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
unress
sooo wonderful update dii 👏
finally the mess created by hamida is cleared ..
So jalal was knowing everything from beginning itself but didn't voice coz he didn't want to insult hamida in front of everyone..
But he gave her peace of mind once he was alone with her..
Jodha immediately called jalal after reading his letter 😃 but she didn't wanna show him that she's missing him 😉
Jalal is on cloud nine after receive jo's call..but he also played with her 😉
want to see jo's reaction after seeing jalal ..
Thanku for pm
love u take care
Edited by chaudhary_kajal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for ur lovely gift akka
Such a lovely chappy
Both r really cute
Update soon
And once again thanks for ur gift for me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Owesome chappy dear...thank you for update wow jalal's "love later"...owesome jodha call jalal...i can say both are nice player waiting for next update...update soon dear...love you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice chapter
waiting for next chapter
avika444 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u for the back to bavk updates bangaram
Loved this update
In the begining i was like poor jo but aftr the flash back i was like go jo go and call him
And finally she did
jalal is such na sweet hubby yaar
Loved to see smile on jajo faces
Hehehe he better go fast otgerwise she will deffo change her mind 😆
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
assum
finally after 1 week the sepration will end
they suffered so much
jo still didnt admit
haha
jallu.. tu toh gaya
jo is angry
hehe
update asap dii
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update lakshmi akka. ...
Jodha jalal where missing each other so badly. ...
I really liked both d pov... I thought jalal will find out about jodha latter but no jalal had written a letter to jodha nd waiting for her answer. ...
Wow good jalal shouted on hamida what he did is right. ...
Haha jodha called jalal nd he was on cloud 9...
Wow d way jodha is playing around jalal by taking salim nd mani name was so funny she wants him to come but it should be like he cam on his own nt becoz she called or wants him to be with her...
Smart jalal understand everything nd play back on her...
Waiting to see jodha reaction when jalal come to her parents home. ...
Update soon akka. ...
Nd thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
he he he...this is only over action...ha ha now jo fell in her own trap...lol

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