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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#441

thanks for the lovely comments...

If anyone feel bore plz tell me...

I will stop it..

Love u all..

CHAPTER 36.3:

Hamida: this is for u.. jalal is lifting u na.. after u go to ur moms place.. it will helpful for u..

Gaves the walker to jodha..

( metal walker.. old people uses to walk for support)

I hope u liked it..

Jodha: nods.. she suppressed her tears.. shut her eyes tightly to stop tears.. & says. Thank u aunty.. it is very helpful for me..

Bhar wants take her daughter to his home right at the moment..but he waited for jalal...( maina told the convo between Hamida & jodha)

Jodha: Amma.. I want to sleep for some time.. Will u pack my clothes & salim.. We will move in an hour..Plz Amma...

Maina understands jodha situation.. she nods..

Everybody moves to hall ..

Jodha closes her eyes..

She write a letter to jalal..

Jalal

I don't want to go.. but aunty is telling to me that I am burden for u.. am I burden for u jalal?? Thanks for helping me from past two days.. bye jalal.. I miss u.. Plz don't send me jalal... Plz..

But she tears the letter..throws in the dustbin.. she don't want say her pain to anyone.. from past 10 days she started sharing with jalal.. she sometimes behave like old jodha..bubbly lovely fun girl ..but now the single mother jodha is back again.. she don't want to keep the hopes.. she can bear the pain.. the toughest & strong jodha wake up from her dreamland.. she don't want pain again.. wanted to keep distance with jalal.. she know Hamida never accept her.. so its better to stop all this right now..she determined to keep a distance from jalal..

Poor girl don't know herself.. she already started loving jalal...

Soon jalal came.. he directly went to jodha..

Hamida was pissed off with his behavior..

Jalal: jodha jodha.. searches for her.. he listened the tap sound in washroom.. thinks.. hmm..might be in washroom.. but all are outside.. how she went.. oh god?? Is she went alone?? With that leg.. Sonu u are killing me.. bangs door again jodha jodha...

Jodha controlled her tears.. opens the door..

Jodha: what happened?? Y are u knocking again & again..

Jalal:.he didn't observed walker.. u went alone...& looks at her leg..

Jodhaaa??? What is this???

Jodha: walker.. I can't depend on u for small things.. so I told to dad.. he bought for me..

Jalal can feel the difference in her voice..she is not like her.. she didn't see him & didn't allowed him to see her face...

Jalal: I am there na.. y this ?? He tries to hold her..

Jodha jerks him.. no need jalal..

I am leaving to my home now..

Jalal: ur home?? This is ur home jodha.. ( he is getting tears.. but stopped)

Jodha: no this is not my home.. in fact I don't have none.. I am alone.. only my son is there for me.. if u please move.. I want to sit for sometime..

Jalal moves aside.. giving space to her..

Jodha goes near bed & rests her head on bed headboard.. shut her eyes..

Jalal moves to living room..

Jalal: uncle( Bhar) y bought that?? I am there for jodha.. jodha told me that u are taking her to ur home..Y??

Bhar wants to say that it is not him..

But Hamida interrupt..

Hamida: maina & Bhar ji are worried for their daughter.. they don't trust u jalal.. I said to them.. jalal & i can take Care of jodha & salim.. but they are not listening to me.. they wanted to take jodha to home.. even jodha wants to go..after a lot of thinking.. it is good idea only ... this girls na always wants to go their mom & dad place only.. don't u know about ur bhabi.. she is very happy when she goes to her mom's place.. let jodha be happy jalal.. don't think much about it..

Jalal: ok.. mom. As ur wish...

Jodha is also listening their conversation..from bedroom..

Jodha pov:

Jalal u believed her easily.. u didn't ask me again is it true or not.. ?? I hate u.. yes I wanted to go now.. I thought I will miss u.. but no I won't miss u..I hate u..

End of pov..

Bhar , maina, jodha & salim get ready..

Jalal tried to help jodha again but she said no..

Jalal was hurt..more than hurt...

Jalal: uncle & aunty take care of jodha.. bye jodha.. kisses salim...

Salim says bye to all..

Jodha thinks... say once jalal... don't go jodha ani..I will stop for u.plz..say once... I don't want to go.. I will miss u jalal.. cries silently..

Car moves...

Precap:

The letter...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#442

what to say about hamida??

She is such a disgusting woman.. I am getting very angry on her😡

I never felt this much bad for jodha because I can feel she don't want to go.

bubbly lovely fun girl ..but now the single mother jodha is back again..

Loved this line but me:🥺🤢😭

I can very well understand her. She don't want to gert hurt again.. It's very difficult to trust a person or to be precise to our destiny again after suffering so much. She was afraid that at some point she will get hurt again so better not to expect anything and live like before. Not to get attatched with anyone.

But the truth is our heart wants someone to understand us and take care of us when our mind was telling us to stay away from these things.

She knew she is hurting jalal but she was hurt too.

Laksh letter part was so lovely and sad too. I can only say I understood jo very well. When u want to say something to ur beloved but u couldn't. I actually smiled when she tore the letter because I knew she wouldn't say this to jalal now but He will find the letter and bring her back. haina??😛😃

I am waiting for next chapter dear. Update soon plz.😊

PS: I liked jo didn't tell jalal that his mother bought that walker for her but I do hope jalal find out the truth soon.😉

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Hey.. Congrats Goldie🥳🤗

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#444

Oo god this hamid is to much she just cares about jalal nd salim she dont want jodha around her at all...

I really felt bad for jodha nd her pov was also good. ...

Nw she has realised that she cant leave with out jalal...

What is this with separation. ... update soon akka. ...

Nd thanks for pm lakshmi akka. ...

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#445

Hey how r u di and our little cute baby. Sorry di i could not comment on your story regularly. But u know it is simply awesome story. I totaly loved it. Plz update next chapter so soon di

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Nice chappy akka

Poor jo n jalal

Hamida is doing like maham manga

Hope they patch up soon

Congrats for turning into Goldie

Update soon akka today only plz plz

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#447

thankfully jo wrote that letter...i want ja to give nice lesson to hamida...poor souls separated.. eager for next update...continue soon & do pm

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Hey.. Congrats Goldie🥳🤗

Hey hey.. thanks payu...

🤗

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
Oo god this hamid is to much she just cares about jalal nd salim she dont want jodha around her at all...
I really felt bad for jodha nd her pov was also good. ...
Nw she has realised that she cant leave with out jalal...
What is this with separation. ... update soon akka. ...
Nd thanks for pm lakshmi akka. ...

Thanks ra...

She realized but separated...