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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

I am just saying because it's ur personal matter dear..
else it's ur wish if u are comfortable and want to share this with everyone😊

Han akka but It was not like love affairs... but it was some official matter...
When I was in 4th sem i had some serious heath issues... so I couldn't offered my stay in Bangalore... so I had to transfer my college from Bangalore to my home town...
But for this process we student were supposed to consult main clerk of our college... he was such coward... he asked me for 1.5lack for that transfer process... but which was free of cost... but we have to pay small amount as fees... so I denny his demand...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

Han akka but It was not like love affairs... but it was some official matter...

When I was in 4th sem i had some serious heath issues... so I couldn't offered my stay in Bangalore... so I had to transfer my college from Bangalore to my home town...
But for this process we student were supposed to consult main clerk of our college... he was such coward... he asked me for 1.5lack for that transfer process... but which was free of cost... but we have to pay small amount as fees... so I denny his demand...
then??😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
congrats for new thread dear
lovely chptr dear
wow nxt chptr jajo weddinh
update soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb chapter n thnxx for pm di
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: erning_w

Awesome update
Poor for jalal too. we know he has done a big sin. but he's trying with all his efforts too for rectify. even he had also left his family to marry Jodha
I guessing this too for Jalal's family.. if his family not accept Jo easily..
Hope Jalal's family can accept Jo with wholeheartedly

Can't wait for precap :>
Thanks for the pm Lakshmi :))

Thanks Dani.
Yep.. It's really hard time for Jalal.
I will upadte soon buddy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments..
Love u all...
I am writing Telugu style wedding..
Hope u all understand..
If possible I will update again.


CHAPTER 32:

Jalal arranged everything by morning.. his friends helped him.. in home also everything settled.. & for the marriage also... jalal wants to marry her in the temple.. in front of god..

Jodha didn't sleep at all whole night..
In the morning..

Jodha pov:
Where I am going?? For whom I am living.. no parents.. today is my marriage.. in everyone life marriage is the best thing.. it happens only once in a lifetime... it should happen between two hearts not between two persons.. I don't want to do this marriage...still I am doing.. what a life I have.. cries hugging herself...

Jodhu Jodhu...

End of pov..

Vaishu: Jodhu Jodhu...

Jodha can't able to stop her tears & hugs Vaishu & cries...

Vaishu: Jodhu.. believe me after this day u will be happy.. for sure. I know u don't want to do this marriage but I am promising u..one day u will tell to me that u are happy because of this marriage... get ready Jodhu.. take this..

The same cover jalal gaved to Vaishu..
Jalal gaved me this for u..

Jodha: plz..I don't want this.. plz..

Vaishu: plz for my sake..plz...

It's a beautiful cream & peach colour Saree..

Vaishu helped to jodha to drape a Saree...

Jodha looks really beautiful.. simple Saree just two small chains adoring her neck..(one is her & other is jalals)

Jodha tried to remove the jalal chain..
But Vaishu stops her.. no Jodhu..plz don't remove.. it suits u perfectly.. keep it.. plz...

Jodha didn't protest..
Vaishu makes her wear bangles & small Bindi... just lip gloss...jodha don't wear a makeup .. but still looks beautiful.. Vaishu braids her hair.. not so long not short.. she has hair till up to her waist...
Jodha was already in fair colour.. that cream colour made her look more beautiful..

Salim already ready in jeans & white shirt.. he looks sooo cute..
Jodha looks at him & Vaishu..
Vaishu: his father purchased..not me..

Jodha just nodes.. she didn't speak a word...

Vaishu & her parents jodha & salim went to temple..
Jodha called to her mother to inform about her marriage.. maina blessed her through the phone.. after a good talk they hung up..

Jodha prays to god that just to give a good life to her son.& take her to near god soon... she don't want to live..

Jalal already there in the temple with his best buddy karthik & 3 more friends..he is waiting for his family.. he tried to call them but they are not picking his call...

When he was busy in making call he saw jodha doing rounds around Mandir..( pradakshina... I don't know what it call in Hindi ) .. he was mesmerized by her beauty..
She is simple but beautiful.. her face is pale but still looking beautiful.. cream & peach Colour suited her very well... he was happy that she didn't remove his chain..
Jodha also watches him from distance..
The same dress which salim is wearing... white shirt & blue jeans..
He is looking very handsome..happiness was evident in his face.. his face was having some glow. May be it is because of marriage.. already he was 6 feet & fair & handsome.. the white shirt matches with his skin tone.. well maintained perfect exercised body.. if anyone sees him like this they just fell for his charm... but unfortunately he fell for jodha..

Jalal goes near jodha & asks where is salim??

Jodha: he is playing there...points towards him...

Jalal: ok.. I will go near to him... between u look so beautiful...

Jodha didn't respond to his praise.. she just goes from there...

Jalal thinks wrong timing.. goes near to salim..

Both father & son wearing same dress.. anyone can say easily that salim is jalal son..just looking at them...

Jalal family came to the temple.. Hamida saw jalal & salim..

She thinks how come he is like small jalal.. what jalal said is true?? Buy Still she don't believe..
Jalal saw them takes salim with him..
Jalal: mom I am so happy.. u came finally.. meet my son..salim..
Salim she is nanu
( nanamma in Telugu Dadi in Hindi... I use nanu for grandmother. Tatayya for grandfather.. hope u all understands)

Hamida: jalal..he just looks like u.. come here salim..

Salim: nanu?? Means what dad???

Jalal:she is my mother salim.. so u call her as nanu..ok..??

Salim: like mumma is my mother & nanu is ur mother??

Jalal: yes beta.. go to nanu...

Hamida takes salim.. she feels he is really her grandson.. she loves salim.. all pamper salim for a while.. he adjusted with them very well..

Jodha looks at them for a distance.. thinks..thank god..at least salim has family.. hope they love him like this only in future also..

Jalal sees jodha.. calls her..with eyes...

Jodha understood but she don't have dare to go in front of them..

Jalal understood & says to go near vaishu.. by just eyes only he signalled..

Hamida : where is salim mother jalal??

Jalal: mom her name is jodha. & She is ur bahu...so better call her jodha not as salim mother..plz..

Hamida: u are shouting on me for her.. ok.. but still I can't accept her.. where is ur wife?? Sorry soon going to be wife..

Meanwhile karthik calls them for marriage.. priest is calling for marriage..

Jalal & his family move towards the the place where marriage is arranged...

Salim runs to jodha to tell about his new family members..

Salim: mumma mumma do u know..just now I met nanu , tatayya , peddamma & everyone. Come I will introduce them to u..
He drags jodha...

Jalal & jodha exchange looks..

To avoid awkwardness jalal introduces jodha to Hamida..

Jalal: mom this is jodha..

Jodha comes near Hamida & took blessings..
Hamida just blesses..
Didn't Said Any word..

Only silence...pin drop silence..

But thank god priest break the Silence..

Priest :plz come & sit the bride & groom..

He don't know who is bride & groom..because nobody in marriage attire.. so he was confused who is bride & groom..

Jalal comes near jodha & takes her hands moves near sacred fire.. & sits..

Priest start the chantings..

In the middle he ask for bride parents to do kanyadhan...

Jodha gets tears.. on remembering her parents..

Jalal understood her.. but he was helpless to do anything.. he was about to say ...but..

Karthik comes in front &says to priest... her parents didn't came..I am her brother can I do??

Jalal smiles listening his best buddy took jodha side... he was happy...

Even Vaishu parents also ready to do kanyadhan..

Both Vaishu parents & karthik did kanyadhan for jodha to jalal...

At last the moment came...

Jalal tied TALI around jodha neck..

( I am writing a Telugu style wedding.. hope u all know about tali.. I don't know what it is called in Hindi or English... it is a yellow coloured thread.. groom ties around bride neck with 3 knots... if u people don't know I am sorry.)

Hamida brings mangalasutra gaves to jalal.. tells to jalal to tie it..
& he did... it's jalal grandmother mangalsutra.. when she died she told to Hamida to give that to jalal wife..

( mangalasutra is a black beads chain..I hope u all know about it..)

By this jodha became officially Mrs jalal...

Jodha cries silently when he did all this.. she never wished for this marriage...

Jalal observed her..& thinks Sonu u may cry this day but for sure u will smile one day.. sorry Sonu..plz forgive me..

Both jodha & jalal did 7 rounds around sacred fire took wedding vows...

They took blessings from elders

Jodha holds karthik hands & says thank u soo much..

Karthik: u should not be.. I am ur brother.. so be happy always... tell me if this idiot makes u cry..
Jodha just nodes..

Jalal: Oie..this is not fair.. u are my friend.. & taking her side..

Karthik:. from now onwards I am always on jodha side.. don't u dare to hurt my sister...

Jalal: never.. thanks..hugs him..

Karthik: take care of my sister jalal...

Vaishu & her parents , jalal friends bids bye to jalal family..

Jodha cries very badly hugging Vaishu...but Vaishu consoles her.. & wents to her home...

Jalal family moves to his new place...along with jodha & salim...

Precap: jodha New life..
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Posted: 9 years ago
congrats for new thread akka
chappy is nice
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter laksh⭐️⭐️
jalal was happy but jodha couldn't sleep whole night. I can understand her condition and felt sad for her. As every girl has alot of dreams and expectations about her would be husband and wedding.
Correction dear.. Nowdays, wedding doesn't happen only once in everyone's life. It's no has increased to 2-3😆😆 *Just kidding*😉😆

Loved the temple scene dearie😃
Jalal bought same clothes for him and salim. This jalal is so sweet❤️ and as u wrote description of his height and physique I can say he indeed must be handsome also😉😆😛

ha ha "Wrong timing"🤣
His timing is always wrong and he's very impulsive too😆 but atleast he now started understanding her😊

Finally his family came. I am glad that atleast hamida accepted salim wholeheartedly.
Karthik seems a very nice guy and atleast vaishu's parents were there for her though they can't fill the void of her parents but still they came. I liked it so much😃

Eventually "The Last Mistake's " JJ got married❤️
I am so excited for next chapter and jo's new life😆
Thanks for the pm dearie!! Love you so much🤗
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful and amazing story very happy to post two nnext and next surprice thank you for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting fr their wedding ''

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