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Note-> My dear lovely folks it is my 28th Chapter of this ff. I hope you all will like and love it... So enjoying reading 😃

Chapter-28

{ kanchan was continuously flying above one camp... Which was located middle of all camps... and ya it was jodha's plan... according to jodha's plan...kanchan would go and find out real position of Bhagvaan daas and others princes of amer... Flaying over on right camp was a hidden signal to jodha and her rescue team about right place of Bhagvaan daas and others... So they can escape to them easily... Other side maan singh and his men were continuously attacking on mugaliya camp

And mugal soldiers... Sariffuddin and his minister were trying to find out right side where the attacker were possible to hid... sudden sariffuddin saw few covered alive heads so he ordered his soldiers to silently following him... but poor man what he could know that it was all preplanned but when he got know it had already very late... sariffuddin and his soldiers silently reached to near maan singh and his soldiers... ... And as they about to attack them maan singh and his soldiers attacked on them... Fight started... Both were not ready to loose war for each other... other side as sound of swords was reached to jodha's ear... she understood that it was time to finished her work for what he was came to there... she silently moved toward camp in which Bhagvaan daas and others were hostage... in this process some mugal attacked on jodha... But who could stop to "Jungli pagal Sherani"... she gave them death from her sword easily... she swiftly entered in camp... She found her all brothers in very bad condition... They all were beaten up brutally... Their eyes and faces swollen... Seeing condition of her brothers, jodha rushed toward them...}

Jodha( swiftly cupping bhagvaan daas's face in worried tone)-> " what is this Bhaisaa... (looking toward her others brothers) you all are..."

{But she could not complete her sentence and her throat chocked with tears her soft heart could not bear bad condition of her brothers... Other side seeing jodha front of them bhagvaan daas Khangaar singh and others shocked like hell...}

Bhagvaan daas (shockingly)-> " jodha ... what are you doing here...?

{Other side jodha was busy to freeing them... When her work completed... she swiftly stood up...}

Jodha ( in worried tone)-> " Bhaisaa I will tell you everything but not here... we have to leave this place as soon otherwise our plan will get fail... because maan singh will can to handle mugal soldier any more... So please lets go with me..."

{ hearing maan singh's name from jodha's mouth all could not believe that their little sister and son was came for their rescue... all five person swiftly walked out from mugal camp... Bhagvaan daas wanted to go for supporting maan singh in his fight but seeing his bad condition jodha stopped him and sent him with other two brothers... Khangaar singh went with her to helping her in this war... other side all mugals attacked on maan singh in unity... so it was very hard to maan singh to fighting with them... sudden jodha and Khangaar singh came to his rescue... both jumped on mugal soldier like mad lion and lioness... Seeing them maan singh and his soldiers again got their lost energy... Seeing khangaar singh with jodha, Maan singh understood that their mission had completed... Other side seeing freed Khangaar singh shariffudding got biggest shock of his life... Now his mind had understood all situation... but now he could not do much more then fighting for his safety... jodha saw shariffiddin... Seeing his face, jodha's eyes filled up with high anger... she jumped on him like wounded tigress... Her sudden attack shocked shariffuddin like hell... jodha did not give him one single chance to prepare himself for her attack... Jodha was continuously attacking him like skillful warrior... shariffuddin was trying his best to giving to her payback but he was not getting any chance to back attack on jodha...sudden jodha hit hardly his face... And now he could not bear this attack and felled down on the ground in few seconds unconsciousness took him in its lap...}

{ Amer Fort}

{ shariffuddin started to opened his eyes slowly -slowly... but for few second his eyes could not able to see anything... But next what his eyes saw enough to giving cold shiver in his spine... Raja bharmal was standing front of him with his trustable minister... a winning smile was playing on his lips... For Cunning person like sharifuddin , it was not a big thing to understand that now situation had changed and now he was prisoner of amer... }

{Agra fort}

{ diwane khas)

" shahensha ka equvaal buland ho... shahensha one mugal soldier want to meet you... he is telling that it's very important..." Said politely mugal guard to his shahensha.

Jalal ( in majesty style )-> " send him..."

{ mugal soldier entered in court... His eyes red and puffy like he have not been sleeping like two and three days... his dress was messed and contained some sting of blood... seeing his condition all presented people including jalal got shock...}

Mugal soldier (bow down his head front of jalal)-> " Shahensha ka equbaal..."

Jalal( firmly)-> " what happened with you?... Why are you looking like made person? And you appointed in shariffuddin's army then what are you doing here... and tell me what you want to say...?"

{Seeing jalal's good memory all presented peoples do not so surprised... because all knew that jalal had sharp and great memory... he was remembered every single soldier's name and face from his army...}

Mugal Soldier ( in fumbling voice)-> " Shahe...shahensha vo shariffuddin sahab..."

Jalal( in anger)-> " vo what... tell me what happened to shariffuddin...

Mugal soldier (shivering because of fear)-> " vo shahensha... Shariffuddin sahab had caught by amer..."

Jalal( in full of shock)-> " whattt"

{ all court members and begums looked toward him with high shock... including jalal all were not digesting this news... because all knew that shariffuddin had caged all amer brave princes so it will be very easy to make amer surrender front of mugal... but sudden this news...}

Jalal( in high rage)-> " tell me clearly what happened and how shariffuddin ended in amer's arms... Tell me everything right now..."

{ mugal soldier told to jalal everything what happened that night... Hearing whole incident now anger of jalal had crossed its limit... he could not believe that a small state had dare not only freeing its princes but also they kidnapped one of the best and reputable minister of mugaliya saltanat...indirectly amer challenged jalal... And jalal was not a person who could bear it... Jalal stood up from his throne in anger... His eyes became hot red... He wanted to burn whole amer in his anger...}

Jalal ( shouted in anger)-> adgah sahab start all preparation now... Now I am going to the war field... Amer will has to pay for its audacity..."

{ Saying it... jalal stormed out from divane khash ... He was directly going to his room... but bakshi banu stopped him in way...}

Bakshi( in tearing voice)-> " bhaijaan what happened to my husband... He is alright na... my maid told that he had caught by amer..."

{ saying it, Bakshi broke out in heavy tears... Seeing his beloved sister's condition... Jalal felt pain in his dead heart...}

Jalal( putting his hand on bakshi's head)-> " don't worry I will not let happening to your husband so don't cry and go to your room for take some rest...}

{ saying it, jalal walked to for his chamber swiftly... this night would be not so easy both agara and amer... One side whole amer was so happy and feeling proud on its brave princess and prince... other side after this incident agara was feeling insulted and all set to ready to take revenge... Jodha and jalal both were standing on window looking full moon}

Jalal( looking toward jodha's earring)-> " you know jaan... Amer dared to challenge your jalal but don't worry jaan your jalal will handle everything... Because no one can beat me in war...( a evil smirk played on his lips) now amer will have to bear my wrath... And you know what it will not be so easy for amer..."

Jodha( caressing her belly softly)-> " you both know... indirectly I have challenged your Baapusaa... And I know him... he will not bear it ... and surely pay back to amer... I always wanted to him beside me in very condition of my life... Today see what fate played dirty game with me now I am standing against your father...( with tear) why jalal... why... Why did you do this with me... I truly loved you na then why did you break my heart like this type that now it has forgotten to feel any emotion... how could you do this with you children..."

{ saying it she tightly closed her eyes...}

Jodha( in painful voice)-> " I HATE YOU JALAL... I HATE YOU"

Jalal( holding earring near to his heart)-> " I LOVE YOU JAAN... I LOVE YOU..."

{ two heart... wounded and painful... But who knew that this pain would make their relation more strong and powerful... who knew that... These two broken hearts would be make history and their pain would be register in history book forever and every moment of their life was making a mile stone for lover of next generation. They would be cause of unity of two different religion... two different thoughts and two different lifestyle... But before it... Their love has to pass out this painful moments...}

" Jodha...jodha...jodha..." yelled furious friend.

{ jodha took deep breath with closed eyes because she knew what would happen in next moment... moti came to near her with high anger and turned her toward her...}

Moti( in anger)-> " how can you do this jodha...how can you... You know na you are pregnant with two innocent life and you went to rescue your brother willingly... if anything bad happened with you or your child then..."

Jodha( putting hand on moti's mouth)-> sss... Don't say it loudly moti... if anyone will hear it then... everything will destroy moti..."

Moti ( this time in slow voice)-> " and what I want to do understand you that... if because of your carelessness anyone will get know about your pregnancy then..."

Jodha(in worried tone)-> " no...no...no moti... Don't say like this... I can't let to know anyone in amer about my pregnancy...otherwise..."

Moti ( in calm tone)-> " and what I am saying jodha... when you found near Yamuna river to you brothers in unconsciousness... Then I know how I managed to stop to raj vaidhani ji to telling anything about your pregnancy to Raja sahab and rani sahiba... I am in fear jodha... what will happen when your stomach will start to visible..."

Jodha( in sad voice)-> " I have decided what I will do in that situation..."

{ hearing her moti looked her with curious eyes...}

Moti( curiousness)-> " what..."

Jodha( took deep but sad full breath)-> " I will leave amer forever and will give to birth my children where nobody will recognize me and my children..."

{ hearing jodha moti's mouth opned in "o" shape.}

Moti( shooking her head in disappointment)-> " what are you saying... you want to leave amer...no...no..no jodha I am still telling you please... please get rid of these unwanted chil..."

"Motiii" yelled a furious mother

Jodha( with red eyes)-> " how dare you to calling my children unwanted ha... They are my kids... my life... I know their father cheated me... but its not mean that I do not want it... they are symbol of my love... My pure love... I know jalal did not love me... he had only lust for my body...( in tearing voice ) but I loved him... Truly... truly loved him...( caressing her belly) I know he will never ever come to me nor those moments will ever come to my life... But they are last thing of those beautiful memories... (Wiping her tears) I love my kids deeply moti and I can't bear even one harsh words for my children so next time please carefully..."

Moti( regretfully)-> " I am sorry jodha... I did not want to hurt you but what can I do... always thinking about jalal and his fake love for you... my mind always loose temper... please forgive me... next time I will be surely careful for my words...(knelt down on earth) I am also want to beg sorry from you my children... Trust me baby Maasi ma( sisiter of mother ) truly...truly love you and praying to god for your good health and life... But you know na your maasi ma love to your mother too..."

{ seeing her childhood friend's antic...jodha could not hold herself and a innocent smile appeared on her beautiful face... She hugged moti tightly...}

{ Agra fort}

{ morning time}

{ jalal's chamber}

{ jalal was preparing for his journey to amer... after all done...}

Jalal( firmly)-> "takaliya( leave me alone)"

{ hearing their shahensha's order all maids silently walked out from there... jalal looked toward his sword and a evil smile appeared on his lips...}

Jalal(lifting his sword)-> " I AM COMING AMER... I AM COMING..."

{ saying it, evil expressions on his faces got darker...}

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Edited by swriter - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update.
jodha pregnent with twins.
jalal going for war with amer.
Edited by shalu1786 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update. Jo win the war so now jalal will be their soon in front of her.jo love her children like her stand for them..well written separation part and their feelings.
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Posted: 9 years ago
i love it...update again sooonn...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update janaki. ...
Jalal waiting for his wife nd love her a lot...
But jodha has lost complete trust on jalal...
Wow d way jodha plan worked was superb. ...
Nd jodha moti talk was bit emotional. ...
Update soon. ... nd thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Jaldi se jodha aur jalal ko ek kaar doo...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update janaki
Loved jodha's fighting skills and wow she won the war against shariffudin with the help of maansingh .
She is carrying twins that's good
Jalal is now starting for Amer
Jajo faceoff is on the way
Waiting for next part
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ufff jodha darenees wooow ... jalal cmng to amer.. jalal jodha face off when hppn im waiting for it...
Plz updateee sooonnn 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wonderful update dear
So here too our Jo is a lioness n I love DAT a lot
I thought d babies r nomre but thank god dey r alive n jalal ll be on cloud nine while coming in face to face wid his jaan n his unborn twins
He want to take revenge frm amer
But jallu miyya u can't do anything like DAT
Thanks for pm dear
Update soon
Bdw can I knw ur name ???
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Janki
Wow.. Jo pregnant with twins.
And cheapuddin 😆 great job Jo...
Can't wait for JoJa meet again..
Thanks for the pm buddy
Continue it soon :)

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