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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really beautiful!😳😃

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Part 2 FIRST DATE...

After discussing his plan of his first date with his newly wedded wife cum girlfriend Jalal returned to their room n found Jodha was sitting in front of dressing table n combing her beautiful long black wet hair n she looked like a fresh beautiful flower who took his breath away n he was looking her without blink n jodha cought his staring session through mirror n smile but her smile bring him back from his dreamy world n he looked into her eyes in mirror, they shared eyelock but after sometime jodha turned her face in other direction to avoid his intense gaze, Jalal smile at her act n with naughty smirk he came near her n stand just behind her, he bend n put his head on her shoulder n while looking at her in mirror he whispered '' good morning my beautiful wife cum girlfriend" jodha looked him in mirror n with smile she said '' Good morning". Jalal smiled back n said '' in this pink saree n wet hair u r looking like a fresh pink rose with dew drops" his complement made jodha's cheeks as red as tomatoes she blushed hard, Jalal gv her romantic smile n said '' now u r looking a two colour rose combination of pink n red he winked n jodha lowered her eyes in shyness...

Now Jalal kneeled down n sit infront of her with smile he said '' look at me jodha i wnt to discuss something very important wid u" Jodha raised her eyes n looked into his eyes n in serious tone said '' is there some problem that u want to discuss with me "

'' yes jodha there r something very important which i want to discuss with you but i dn't knw from where i start" said Jalal in same serious tone with fake worried face. Jodha hold his hand in panic n said '' plz Jalal tell me what's the matter is everything all right" looked him to answer n found him looking her with dreamy eyes, she called his name but no response n she again called him but little louder n this time Jalal came out frm his dream world n looked away in embarrassment, jodha smiled n asked him what happened n Jalal looked her n he fumbled '' wo woh u first time hold my hand and called my name na, toh after listening my name in ur melodious voice n feelling ur touch on my hand i was feeling like in heaven" he told in romantic tone with dreamy eyes n jodha blushed hard n looked here n there in nervousness. JALAL smile n to make her comfortable again '' off oh jodha see u make me forget our important discussion, now stop ur blushing n without wasting more time listen me carefully" he said in serious tone jodha looked him in anger '' what i m wasting time haan for ur kind information Mr. Jalal its u who wasting time with ur talk" she pout cutely, Jalal looked her n thought '' ya khuda its very difficult for me to nt kiss these pouted lips plz gv me strength to control" he closed his eyes n took deep breath to control n again looked jodha n said '' ohk ohk baba it was my fault i m sorry plz don't be angry n nw common forget all this lets start discuss our first date plan." jodha looked him '' so this is ur big n serious problem which u want to discuss with me" she said shaking her head in disbelief , Jalal grinning '' aur kya today is our first date n wht is more important than this for us i want make this date most memorable for both of us n as i told u last night from now it is not about my life my feelings my desires or my pleasure, it is ours coz we r now one so we should decide together about this too na" he said with lots of love, Jodha looked him n smile n they planned together their first date with lots of enthusiasm but after discussing all thing Jalal feel jodha want to say something to him he hold her hand said '' jodha u want to say something to me plz don't hesitate tell me what u want to say" jodha thought '' how he always read my mind" she smile n said '' u knw Jalal since we came Mumbai i always visit shidhi vinayak mandir before starting new n important work like exams n all, toh i want to go for bappa's darshan with you before start our new life new relationship, i want his blessing for our life n love " she looked into in his eyes with love n hope in her eyes. Jalal put his hand on her cheek n with same love in his eyes he said '' off course jodha we will go shidhi vinayak first but why u dn't tell me this before? " jodha smile n said '' coz of our different religons i feel nervous to asked u to visit temple with me" she lowered her face, Jalal raised her face from her chin '' yes this truth that we follow different religons but i respect all religons n trying to adept all positive n good qualities of every religon n coz of this ur religon is nt new for me i knw many things abt ur religon n even i visited shidhi vinayak n other temples before, i request u jodha plz never hesitate to ask somthing coz of our religon difference or any other thing" he said in determined tone n jodha node her head in yes he smile n said '' good girl n one more thing as i hv no problem to follow ur religon n practice ur customs, this does not mean u also practice our customs or follow my religon if u dnt like toh just say no to everyone" jodha smile n put her hand on his hand on her cheek n squeeze it gently n said '' like u Jalal i also respect all religons n always trying to collect new information abt different religons n for ur surprise i also visited hazi ali dargaah like shidhi vinayak so i hv no problem to follow ur religon n practice ur customs " Jalal looked her with love n both lost in eachother eyes n slowly slowly they start moving their faces closer to eachother n their lips just about touch when someone entered in their room like tornado..

''Mamu jaan mamu jaan nani jaan calling u for breakfast" Rahim said while throwing himself in jalal's arms n Jalal lift him n make him sit on his lap '' Good morning chemp we will go for breakfast but first meet your new friend" he said towards looking jodha n rahim looked jodha in shocked n in surprised n he whispered in jalal's ears '' Mamu jaan yeh toh pari hai, yeh yanha kaise aayi" [ uncle she is angel, hw she came here] Jalal chuckled n looked jodha who looking them with confuse expression n jalal smile n said '' yes rahim she is pari bt nw she is ur mami jaan n new friend n frm nw she always live with us here in our home coz rahim is good boy na so God gift u this beautiful angle as ur friend." Rahim jumped frm his lap n hold jodha's hand n said '' is that true pari ?" jodha smiled n cupped his face n said '' yes rahim i m ur new friend n i live with u always" n rahim hugged her immediately n said '' thank u pari" jodha smile n looked Jalal who looking her with emotional, jodha broke hug n asked '' u r welocome rahim but why r u calling me pari i m nt pari my name is jodha " rahim looked Jalal n said '' mamu jaan told me when i saw ur pic in his phone that u r pari his pari " jodha looked Jalal in amusement n asked rahim '' ohk rahim tell what else he was said about me'' n b4 rahim answered Jalal stopped him n lift him in his arms n said '' oh chemp u forget nani jaan send u here for calling us for breakfast " he forward his hand to jodha '' come lets go for breakfast ammijaan will waiting for us'' he told jodha smile n said '' u n rahim go n hv ur breakfast I'll eat n drink somthing after bappa's darshan" Jalal gv her understanding look n said '' ohk u wait for 5 min i'll be right back after infrom ammijaan n we will together hv our brunch after bappa's darshan" jodha nodded with smile, Jalal goes towards door but b4 going out frm room he turned n called jodha n jodha looked him n asked frm eyes ''what? " he smiled n said '' which is ur favourite flower jodha?" jodha answered '' white n red roses " Jalal smiled '' till today morning i liked the same but nw my favourite flower is JODHA" he said with love in his eyes n naughty smirk on his face n jodha blushed heavily n lowered her eyelashes in shyness...

JALAL n jodha went to shidhi vinayak temple n they prayed there n asked bappa's blessing for their new life,for their happiness n for their togetherness n after that they went to Hazi ali dargaah n offered flower chaadar n did sajada after finishing prayer they tied thread together n wished God to protect their love n their relationship...

After praying in hazi ali dargaah they went to eat jodha's favourite paav bhaaji frm her favorite place bombay paav bhaaji stall though being a hygienic freak Jalal never ate roadside food but for jodha's happiness he first time eat paav bhaaji frm roadside stall n when he looked jodha eating her paav bhaaji with happy he feel content n jodha's smile make that paav bhaaji more tastier for him after eating paav bhaaji in their brunch they came back home n after little chit chat with family they went to their room n took rest for sometime before going out for their first dinner date in the evening Jalal prepared everything to make their date very special for jodha...

In the evening Jalal gv one gift box to jodha n asked her to be ready for their dinner date n he went to mirza room for changing his cloths. After he left jodha opened her gift n find beautiful emerald green colour halter neck gown with diamond n pearls embroidery on neck with matching pair of diamond n pearl earring n bracelet...JODHA loved his gift n she feels happy, Jalal wear black suit with emerald green shirt n he looked dashing n handsome as always. Jalal n other family members waiting for jodha in hall when they heard footsteps on stairs n they looked towards stairs n saw jodha who looked absolutely ravishing n beautiful in that emerald green gown n in matching earring she left her wavy long black hair open put light n perfect makeup n gloss on her lips. She looked simple yet elegant. Jodha came down n joined other family members n all praise her for her beauty n Jalal once again forget to breathe after looking his beautiful wife in his gift he never imagined jodha looked that beautiful in that gown. After taking hamida's blessing they walked out to their car Jalal opened car door for her n she got seated n Jalal went to his side of the car n got in. He started the car and drove off towards their destination n after one hour journey they reached their destination mumbai's famous restaurant of a five star hotel. Jalal got out of the car and went over and opened jodha's door and offered his hand to assist her in getting out. He forward car keys to gate keeper for parking. They started to walk towards restaurant Jalal grabbed her hand and their fingers interlaced. They walked very close holding their hands tightly. Jalal looked down in jodha's eyes n jodha smiled so prettily, there was a sparkle in her eyes that made her look rediant at that moment Jalal totally lost himself in those beautiful eyes...

They entered in the restaurant and warmly greeted by the manager. Their table was ready for candle light dinner. Manager held the chair for jodha and put napkin in her lap, he came to Jalal's side and did the same for him. First manger came with some special soft drink n said '' your appetizers will be ready in a few minutes. Enjoy this special drink of our restaurant while you wait."

Jodh was enjoying being courted and treated like a special lady. After sometime manager brought their appetizers which were paneer tikka one of jodha's favourite jodha looked Jalal n smiled. They start eating n jodha finds paneer tikka very tasty and she just ate them with pleasure. Next they served them their special tandoori vegetables dishes which jodha liked very much. They were both smiling and having a good time eating n after finishing appetizers they wait for sometime n after that manager brought main course meal which had all jodha's favourite dishes. Jodha's eyes stare wide open at the food and how it was presented. She looked over at Jalal and asked '' how to u knw abt my all favourite dishes" Jalal smiled n said '' that i will tell u later now just enjoy dinner." jodha smiled n nodded n they continued to enjoy their meal. The table was bathed in candlelight and light from ceiling lights. It was a very romantic atmosphere.

Jodha laid her hand across the table n Jalal reached over and clasped her hand gently jodha looked down at their hands and looked up into his eyes. She whispered softly, '' This is the best time have i ever had. I never believed that someone would treat me so well and so special. Thank you, i will remember our this first dinner date ever for as long as I live." '' sweetie, i am glad you liked this date, you have brought new light into my life and i will also remember this night till my last breath." Jalal spoke in a hushed tone. Jodha squeezed his hand and a tear of joy running down her face n Jalal captured that tear keep it in his pocket near his heart. They finished their dinner with rabri in desert n evryone see the happiness and joy radiating from their faces. Jodha looked Jalal and tear of joy and happiness were flowing down her face. Jalal truly succeed in making their first dinner date special for both of them. Jodha hold his hand squeezing it hard, Jalal looked into her eyes and saw happiness but also a peaceful calm emotions in her eyes the tension n hesitation that was always there was gone. She was finally at ease with herself and with him. Somthing wonderful had happened between them. Jalal asked her, '' would you like to have dance with me?" jodha smiled n nodded then he holded her hand went to dance floor n danced slowly on soft romantic number Jalal hold her frm waist n she rest her head on his chest they lost in eachother completely while dancing...


They thanked restaurant manger for their wonderful service n walked to the car with holding eachother arms. Jalal opened the door for jodha but for his surprise she stood on her tiptoes and kissed on his cheek n immediately went inside the car jalal went around to the other side and got in n saw blushing jodha with lowered head Jalal smriked n lift her face n looked at her lips n with love n hope he asked her permission frm his eyes n jodha shyly node Jalal smiled n bent and softly touched her lips with his. They kissed softly n gently till they needed air to breathe. They looked eachother with lots of love n emotions in their eyes n with sweet smile on their faces they started to drive towards their home...

P.S. Sorry for every writing n grammatical mistakes n plz hit like button n gv ur valuable comments n if you find this update boring toh i m ready for all juttas n chappal...


Edited by jiya.k - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: jiya.k



Waiting for unress payal... 😉

oops😛 I haven't read yet.
I will read both parts tonight and then I"ll comment dear!! 😊
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: jiya.k



Thanks a lot shagun...
I m glad u liked this os...
Haha love you dear nw come 🤗 gv me my biggg hug...


Love you too di...🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing OS ..dear...i love it...
waiting for part 2...update soon..please

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