New Akdha SS...ONE IN SOUL updated last part 3 on page no.13

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ONE IN SOUL -

Jodha was pursuing college degree at one of most reputed college of her small town she loved her studies more than anything in her life n she was one of few fortunate girls whose belonging to those parents for whom education was far more important than an marriage alliance, who were bold and had the courage to wait to allow their daughters to complete their education before marrying them off in that orthodox society of that small town n because of her parents open morden thinking she had a lot of hopes as her parents wished and motivated her to pursue further studies and become a career girl n after her under graduation when jodha told them that she wanted to do MBA and wanted to do part time job whilst educating herself. Her parents continued encourage her n her father bharmal decided to leave that small town for fullfill his only daughter's dreams n they all shifted to mumbai n bharmal got good job in one of top company n jodha got admission in one of the best management college of mumbai...

There life going smoothly n jodha was studying hard to become topper in her college n she dropped the idea of part time job coz her parents convinced her to concentrate only her studies...Jodha loved very much her new life in new city till that day which changed everything her life her priorities her dreams. It was a day of her parents 25th wedding anniversary n bharmal organised a samll dinner party for his office colleagues to celebrate n he also invited owner of his company with his mother n that young entrepreneur accepted his invitation humbly. That day jodha n her mother mainawati were busy whole day in preparing dinner n decorating their house n in evening first jodha helped her mother in her makeup n hair n after that she made herself ready to attend guests who started to arrive on time as expected n jodha started to take care everything from drinks to snacks in while her parents were busy in receiving gifts n wishes n in the last his boss came with his mother n bharmal n mainawati received them happily n after some chitchat all went towards dinning table all ladies sat at one side of table n all men sat on other side of table n after ordered everything to maids jodha came n sit beside her mother who r busy in talking with her husband's boss mother n that graceful lady smile n asked mainawati about jodha mainawati introduced her lovely daughter n that lovely kind lady put her hand on jodha head n gv her blessing n after dinner guests started to leave one by one. when his boss n his mother asked to leave bharmal called jodha n mainawati to see off them till their car n introduced jodha to his boss bharmal sir plz meet my daughter jodha n that young entrepreneur politely said plz bharmal ji call me Jalal i m as young as ur son, he looked jodha n their eyes meet for first time n Jalal feel himself attracted towards jodha even jodha feel somthing in her heart but she cnt name her feeling that time they both greeted eachother n jodha n her parents see off jalal n his mother hamida till their car...

One evening jodha cameback from her college n found her parents waiting her in living room n they looked very happy she came near them n asked what happened. They asked her to sit between them n bharmal put his hand on her head n said i want to gv u one good news my bacchi today is the best day of our lives i cnt believe my daughter going to marry one of the richest business man of this country n jodha looked him surprisingly n bharmal cupped her face n smiled widely n said yes meri bacchi u r going to marry my boss Jalal today he himself asked ur hand for him n u tell me how can i refused him i said yes immediately n mainawati kissed her forehead n happily said mahri laadoo going to become queen n jodha feel her all dreams shattered into pieces coz she only wanted to complete her MBA she never thought about marriage n now suddenly this news her mind stopped working but she controlled herself n in serious tone she told bharmal that she want to pursue her MBA n after that want to work she is nt ready for marriage yet n what about our religon but bharmal again hold her face in between his both hand n in calm n assuring tone he said i knw about ur dreams beta n i cleared everything with Jalal n he has no problem with that u cn continue ur studies after marriage as like as b4 marriage n after completing ur MBA if u want u cn work with him in his company or any other company as per ur wish n for religon he himself said for this marriage there is no need to change ur religon n he make sure everyone in his family n society will respect ur religon, ur beliefs n ur costumes so beta please thinks once more time he is really a gem of person n if i search whole my life i cnt find life partner for u as good as him please don't loose this golden chance n mainawati put her hand on jodha's head n said ur father saying right jodha thinks about it with open mind n gv ur answer tomorrow now come lets have dinner n after dinner jodha went to her bedroom. After changed into her nightdress she went near window n while looking moon she thoughts about this marriage purposal of jalal n image of jalal flashed infront of her eyes n her heart felt same feeling again n she thought...
JODHA - i never loved anyone or never attracted to anyone but i believe in love may be he is the one whom God choose for me n as he has no problem with my studies n career or i have no grounds to reject him n my parents liked him n they always support me going against society n family for me they left everything just for fulfilling my dreams n never asked anything from me n even today they gv me choice to accept or reject this purposal but hw cn i marry a stranger whom i meet or should i say saw once i dnt knw him hw cn i but i felt something for him when i saw him first which i never felt for anyone hey kanha plz help me plz shw me right path plz khanha plz n she thought every aspect of this marriage purposal again n again n in the last for her parents happiness n for that unknown feeling which she feel for Jalal she made herself ready to accept his marriage purposal n next day on breakfast table she announced her decision n made bharmal n maina happiest parents in the world..

Bharmal gv this news to Jalal n his family n they decided wedding date after one week n engagement after two days all were busy in arrangements n Jalal n jodha dn't found any chance to talk they meet alone just once before their engagement in jodha's room on jalal's request to meet her coz he want to knw b4 their engagement that she said yes to this marriage without any pressure of her parents n jodha assured him that she accepted this alliance without any pressure n her assurance made Jalal happy n relieved but b4 they talked further maina n hamida called them for engagement n after one week they got married but in between all ceremonies jodha's brain was buzzing with fear of the marring to unknown person fear of being alone in a new family n she was sad about leaving her home her parents n she was scared about the new life which she was going to lead but b4 leaving her house her married cousin sisters n some elderly women of her family gv her various advices for happy married life they told her that arranged marriages are short of tricky affair. They are a gamble that both the groom n bride play, which either results in new love stories or has a devastating effects on their lives n u r the one who about to find out which way ur marriage would head so beta give ur 100% efforts to this marriage n make it successful n jodha just node her head like an obedient student but one of her cousin advice her to please her husband on the first night without care her emotional outburst or mental trauma coz guy doesn't care you will be his property and unsuspecting toy to fullfill all his desires so jodha dear like a good girl u should respect ur husband commands. Any wish of his must be fulfilled,even if u aren't in the mood n that conversation with her cousin scared her to death n marriage suddenly became a nightmare for her n she thought i didn't want to be tagged as someone's property. No that is not what i had imagined my life to be will Jalal really treat me like his property n toy to satisfy his desires n physical needs no no he is a good man but i don't know him he still is a stranger for me how can i say he is different from other men oh khanha plz help me n with all these thoughts n fear of her new life n her first night she entered in her new house with her husband n after some rituals n teasing session from jalal's siblings salima (elder sister of jalalsingle mother of rahim), bakshi n mirza(younger brother n sister of jalal), other cousins n friends hamida asked bakshi n other girls to take jodha in jalal's room...

Jodha was sitting nervously on the edge of the bed decorated with rose petals n her mind was filled with thousands of questions. After sometime Jalal came inside n his every step which bringing him closer to jodha make jodha more nervous her heart start beating very fast, she clenched bedsheet with her hand tightly n closed her eyes in fear. Jodha he called her softly but rather in a nervous tone, jodha opened her eyes n looked up to n realise that he was as nervous as her. He smiled n slowly came n sat next to her n asked her to changed into somthing comfortable n get away with her heavy dress n jewellery jodha feeled concern in his voice but without looking him she went to bathroom n changed into comfortable night dress when she came out from bathroom found Jalal also changed into night dress n sitting on the edge of the bed waiting for her n when he saw jodha coming out of bathroom he smiled n told her to come n sit next him n jodha nervously came near him n sit beside him n then Jalal took her hands in his n felt her hands trembling n very cold. Jalal smiled and said, " jodha, i know u r very nervous...so am I." then he cleared his throat and said " u know jodha first nights don't usually have to be what is shown in the movies or many people told n for jodha it was like as if he was reading her mind, it is not about my life my feelings my desires or my pleasure, it is ours coz we r now one. There might be lots of things you like or not n similarly there are things I wouldn't like or like. We will explore every aspect of our marriage together n marriage is complex because people make it look like that, it is different for different people. I assure you it will be different for us, just the way we like it n not others do or have done in the past."..

Those words of jalal made jodha's all fears about her new life n first night disappeared from her mind n heart n she felt happiness in her heart n started cry which shocked Jalal n in panic he said, " what happened jodha did i said something wrong please jodha stop crying he said with an expression of guilty n in pleading tone he again said please stop crying jodha, I can't handle crying girls, so please stop." Jodha raised her eyes and looked directly into his eyes as the last drop of tear trailed down her cheeks n she chuckled at his almost comical expression n Jalal looked her in surprise n said " now u r laughing please tell me did i hurt ur feelings" jodha node her head in no n Jalal looked deep into her eyes n said." then why r u cried after listen my words haa tell me. Jodha lowered her eyes n shyly she told him everything about her fear her conversation with her cousin and her confusion about her feelings for him n Jalal smiled n raised her face from her chin took her one hand in his n tucked a strain of her hair behind her ear n both looked into eachother eyes. There was a moment of silence as both stared into eachother eyes n Jalal squeeze her hand gently n said " see jodha...you know i fell in love with u the moment i saw you. I know we were made for eachother n as u told me ur feeling about me i m sure you too feel same its just matter of time n u understand ur feeling for me soon, but fault was mine before asking ur hand for marriage i should asked u for dating actually we never get to know eachother. I never even took you out a single date. He stopped and looked deep into her eyes n smiled then he kneeled down in front of her raised his hand n said." it is still not too late so miss jodha will u be my girlfriend n jodha shyly node yes n put her hand on his hand Jalal smiled broadly. " Look, i want to take u out on a date n from now to till we really understand eachother will continue our relationship as girlfriend n boyfriend not as husband n wife n jodha again node in yes shyly n Jalal smiled back n he stood up n said "its very late lets go sleep n jodha again looked him nervously n Jalal understand her fear n he took deep breath n in assuring tone he said..

" Look jodha u dnt need to afraid from anything n for physical relationship i just want to say i believe that comes naturally and not be forced as i told u b4 I love u so much I would die for u but till u understand or explore ur feelings for me completely i will wait for u untill u love me, even if it takes forever, even untill my hair grows white or untill Rahim his 5yrs nephew graduates. They both laughed together on his last statement n their eyes meet again n Jalal said i liked ur smile very much u look more beautiful while u smile n jodha blushed n lowered her eyes again. Jalal smiled n said " I'll sleep on the sofa in our room untill u feel comfortable with share ur bed with me n he winked jodha looked him surprisingly n thought he was really sincere n in that particular moment love cupid struck in her heart n she fell in love with her husband who had made all her fears disappear. He lived up to the vows of their marriage n she feel glad that she said yes to his purposal n now she want explore their love as lover b4 as husband wife n she took his pillows and arranged them on the sofa n looked him n find him looking at her with lots of love in his eyes n she wanted to hug him but was too nervous but he again read her mind. He came to near her cupped her face and kissed her forehead softly, "I really love you." he whispered "And u look very cute when u r nervous." Jodha blushed n hugged him n felt so warm n safe in his arms. Then they said good night to eachother n sleep in their respective places...

In the morning Jalal opened his eyes when somebody knocked on their bedroom door n looked his beautiful wife who looked serene and blissful he slowly moved out of the sofa n went into bathroom n took shower n came out n without disturbing jodha's sleep he dressed up n tiptoed out of the room. When he came out everyone looked him with naughty smile on their faces n one of his friend mischievously elbowed him and asked, " so how was everything ?" Jalal smiled n happily he answered, " Everything waz beautiful, WE BECAME ONE, ONE IN SOUL." and he moved away to meet his mother to tell her his plan for first date with his wife oops his girlfriend...

P.S. Sorry for every writing n grammatical mistakes n I m ready for all juttas n chappal if u guys find this os boring n if u like toh phir hit like button n gv ur valuable comments...
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Akdha SR
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Its fantastic jiya
jos dreams and her parents
then jas marriage proposal Jo's nervousness on it
alas jas comfortably Jo
everything good
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GOSH!!!!!!! 😲
That was truly a masterpiece... 😊
Loved it dear... ❤️
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Awesome os dr..
so beautiful..rally vry sweet..
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nice os
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Woww that was marvellous jiyu 👏
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Awsome os dear
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amazing
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jalal is so cute
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aisa husband bhagwan sab ko de
par shuruwat mere se kare
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