Kon Hai Jo Sapno Mein Aaya last chp (Jodha & Jalal final milan)pg1 - Page 76

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome chptr dear
loved it
hope ruqs or maham show real face soon plzzz
cont soon


thnks for pm



my pleasure thinking to update it today stay tune
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Posted: 9 years ago





chapter 22:

Now Its Third Month of Jodha Pregnancy , Jodha Jalal was really excited
to become a parents soon
On the next day after finishing all works
Jodha and jalal was spending some quality time together as they promise
last time
they going to spend time with each other daily
no matter how much they are busy in work but in the evening time
even for 1 hour they going to spend time together



Jodha Jalal was standing in front of window and watching rahim
and laughing ,smilling on rahim naughty acts because
naughty rahim running and one poor bhandi back of rahim
with plate of food😆


Jalal To Jodha : jodha begum ab taiyaar ho jaye appko
app doo bache sambhalne hai baad mein

Jodha was puzzled two kid ? how
then she asks
TWO kid how ?
doctor didnt said i have twins , she said i have one boy😕is it ?

then jalal laughed and he says

app hi hamesha nahi kehte hum ek bache se kam nahi

then jodha remember her words and start laughing
on herself😆



Jodha To jalal : wo tho hum khushi khushi karege shehansha par
appko bhi mere saath dena hoga


Jalal To Jodha : wo tho hum hamesha dege
hamari pyaari begum


then jodha looked at jalal and she says

Jodha to Jalal : jalal i want permission for
some thing


Jalal To Jodha : my permission for what ?


Jodha To Jalal : mein ne maanat maagi thi
jab mere bacha hoga hum mandir jayege

then
jalal cupped jodha face and he says

today iam really busy and i cant come with u
and i cant let u go alone


Jodha To Jalal : nahi shehansha hamein aaj hi jana hai
maanat aaj ki hai aaj hi jana zaruri hai
hum kisi ko apne saath le jayege
aur jaldi pooja khatam kar ke ajayege
please shehansha let me go
then she make puppy face🥱

then jalal says
ok fine but take moti and reva and todarmal
also with u and please be careful

then jodha hugged jalal very tightly🤗 and she says
pakka


on other side maham heard every thing and she smirk evilly😈

maham fastly to her room and enter her secret room which is behind big mirror
some one is waiting for maham there already
that person is standing in dark so i dont know who is that person wait for some chappy
to reveal that person identity
maham tell that person to follow jodha in mandir and that person nodded and walk out from there

Jodha was ready to go mandir while she , reva and moti walking toward the door , they bump into
sangram singh
and sangram singh
friend where r u going ?

then jodha smile and she says

we are going to mandir

then sangram singh start jumping like small kid and start shouting and saying

hamein bhi mandir jana hai hamei bhi jana hai

Jodha dont want to take him becoz
there is one reason and reason is that
jodha know
jalal dont like when she talk and be with him
but she is compel she have no other option but to take him
with her then
she agree to take him and she says

teek hai but app waha hamare saath hi rahege
yaha waha bhaage ge nahi ok


then sangram was about to hug her again but jodha stop him and
she say

Not Again

then sangram singh says sorry by holding his ears , jodha says

its ok lets go we are getting late then SS nodded



while they are walking toward the palanquin jodha remember
jalal words that dont go alone ,
take todarmal with them since atgah is not in the place
then jodha ask one guard abt todarmal then guard says

malika-e-hind wo kal raat hi Amer mein chale gaye the
kuch kaam ke sinsile mein

then jodha put her hand on her forehead in worried and she
think how
they will go now ?
then moti come to jodha and she ask

what happened jodha?

then jodha says

i forgot to inform todarmal to dont go any where today bcoz i want to go
mandir , jalal warn me to dont go alone
what to do now ?
but this is very important pooja i cant missed it

then moti says

lets take some more soldiers with us
it is just about 2 hour we go fastly and come back soon
and jalal ko pata bhi nahi chalega


then
jodha think for while then she agree with moti
because she have no other option left then
they went without todarmal

when they reach mandir , jodha ask solider to stay out side
then
they enter mandir
jodha give pooja taal to pandit


pandit : aao malika-e-hind
hum jante hai ab yaha kis pooja ke liye aye hai
uss pooja se phele hamein ek aur pooja karne hai
appke saantan ke lambi umar ke liye aaj
puni mashi ki raat ye pooja rajvanshi auratein apne ane wali saantaan ke
liye rakte hai
iss pooja mein hum sabko Adha ghanta (half hour) ke liye apne ankhe (eye)
band kar ke ek mantar padna hote hai iss doran (during) koi bhi apna
ankh nahi kol sakta jab tak pooja khatam na ho

jodha was puzzled what pandit saying because she never heard about this pooja
ever before

then jodha says

par pandit hum ne iss pooja ke baare mein phele kabhi nahi suna

then pandit start sweating in fear and he says

iss pooja ke baare mein kam log hi jante hai

before jodha ask more question pandit says

mohrat nikla raa raha hai hamein pooja shuru karne hoge


then without thinking much jodha nodded

on other side jalal in his room start feeling uneasy , he feel some thing really bad gonna
happened today 🥱🥱



In Mandir

Pandit Start pooja , jodha , sangram singh , moti and reva close their eyes
and pandit keeping saying some mantar
now its around half hour they all are sitting with close eyes
with folding hands
then moti
feel suffocated and pandit also stop saying
mantar
so she open her eyes by mistakenly
and she found
jodha , sangram singh and pandit is not there
then moti put her hand on reva shoulder , she also
open her eye
and she ask

what happened ? pooja is finished ?
she looked around and found no one and she says
where is jodha and pandit

then without uttering a word moti run toward door and she found all solider was death then she shout
jodhaaa name loudly
then reva also run toward moti and she says
what happened then reva also see all solider was death
then she put her hand on her mouth and she says
hum shehansha ko kya jawab dege ab 😭😭


Precap : Jalal was hell anger on jodha becoz she went mandir alone
even after warning her to dont go alone
and jalal says in anger

jodha i hate you to the core , if some thing wrong happened to my unborn kid i never forgive
because of that 😡😡😡


Important Note : guys i decide to change my story line little bit so please no chappal😆😆 because i know
u guys will be not happy with new twist but trust me it gonna be interesting😃😃
FF without twist is boring according to me so decide to change my FF story line ,
new story iam gonna start writting after my exam
becoz my exam gonna start at the end of this month and that gonna end 7june👍🏼

soo new twist gonna be like this(lets make u guys more curious what will happened next but i will nt reveal all twist but some of them i will reveal now😃

i will not tell you who kidnapped jodha but because of that JO-JA seperated for 1 and half year😭😭Again (no chappls just a new twist )
jodha birth salim in other place not in Agra and she and salim living with that guy who kidnapped jodha before one year😭😭
why she is living with him ofcourse there will be big reason behind that which will reveal when i start
writing next chappy👍🏼

on other side jalal was totally change before he loved jodha now he hate jodha
because jalal blame jodha what happened he feel becoz of jodha that happened

jalal know jodha is alive and she birth baby boy
where are they living even he dont know

jalal promise to himself one day he will found them
them by hook or crook , after that day he make jodha life hell😡
and killed that person who kidnapped them and take his son from jodha forever😭😭

on other side jodha was living without jalal , she was living like body without soul
but becoz of salim she forgot about her pains of life some time becoz salim love her mother alot and
jodha too love her son alot , salim is only reason
to live after she separated from jalal😭😭

what will happened when JO-JA meet after 1 year ? jaane ke liye wait for next chappy😃😃

guys new banner for upcoming twist
this banner will give u idea abt upcoming twist in KHJSMA


Edited by Susan.Dsouza - 9 years ago
kartikaJA thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
but Scarry promo
why maham and ruks can't expose
all time jalal and jodha separate in your story
and know jalal want scntch Salim from jodha and want jodha to suffer
please can't do that
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG Di this is not we wanted but you made it
I really hate this separation between them
Please patch up them soon Di
Can't wait for ur next update
Update soon Di
All the best for ur exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update and twist is superrrb
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc chappy
Omg u change story line y again jo ja seperates and y he take salim frm jo ...
Its really sooo scareyyy but interesting ...
Updatee soonn
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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic update dear
jodha is again kidnapped
continue soon
thnks fr pm


all the best for exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ye kya hai.. Phir se separation
Jalal aor jodha mil kam bichad zyada jate hai aor ab to jalal use hate bhi krega..
Jodha salim ko leke jalal se alag rahegi kyu..
Plzz plzz update nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

chappy is nice
Thats not fair dear why always jalal have to suffer
please don't do that bichare abhi to mile after 3 months and now you gonna separate them vo bhi 1yrs and 6 months.
And you don't gonna reveal the identity of kidnaper but its ok with that but the separation wala twist is so horrible.
Buddy please think again on this after your examinations.
Please exam ka gussa is FF par mat nikalo 😉

waiting for next chappy
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry dear. Dont have a right to tell you what to do in your story. But being an avid reader of your story its my request to you to not take your story in ekta kapoor style where the hero heroine always separate come back together and then separate and this keeps on happening till the show ends. Sorry if i have offended you.

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