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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Hahaha.. Give one more from ur side ashu...
Thanks fr loving it...
I will update soon..
Love u ashu,...

Love u too dii 🤗

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#852

Nice update bangaram

i can feel jodha and jalal's pain clearly

i know what will be jodhas decision

waiting for next chap

continue soon

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Thanks Payal...
Hahaha ..poor Jodha.. She is crying na so hugged back..
Yep... Papa ka raaz hai...😡 Even I felt the same..
Wanted to give more tappad.. But poor Jodha adjusted with only one...
>>>>>>> 🤣🤣
I must say Jodha can't able stop her talking.. She slipped her tongue.. Poor girl...
Yep if it won't happen she will marry her bava.,she may miss true love of Jalal..
I will update in an hour...
Love u dear...

Love u 2 dear.. waiting for jo's decision😊

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#854

Thanks for likes & comments...

Plz silent readers hit like button at least..

Thank u all.

Love u all..

CHAPTER 24:

They didn't talked the whole journey..

Only salim is asking questions to jodha & jalal...

Salim is very happy...

Both went to Vaishu house...

In the car

Salim gives his hands to jalal to pick him..

Jalal takes him..

Jalal: ok jodha...chalo let's go.

Jodha: to where???

Jalal: ur friend house.. ur chamcha...winks at her...

Jodha: I didn't invited u.. & don't call her chamcha...looks at jalal with angry face...

Jalal: I don't need invitation jodha.. if wife get the invitation then automatically husband also can come...

Jodha: I didn't accept u as my husband...

Jalal: but I accepted...winks at her...

Jodha:.jalalll... don't irritate me...get lost...

Jalal:. No way.. look even salim wants me to come... hai na salim???

Salim:.mumma y u are angry with dad?? & mumma let's go to our home.plz... I want to play with dad. Dad y we came to Vaishu aunty house again?? I like our house dad...let's go there...we will come here tomorrow... & dad Will u go again dad?? Plz don't go.. starts crying...don't leave me...

Jalal: hugs salim tightly...no salim.. Dad won't go anywhere...I will stay with u.. I already missed u for 3 years.. now I am not ready to loose u & ur mom...

Salim: I love u dad...

Jalal: Dad loves u beta..u will listen to me na???

Jalal breaks the hug..

Salim: yes dad.. what is that???

Jalal: first we will go to Vaishu aunty house I will play with u for sometime.. then I will go back to work beta.. Dad had important work...I will come back again..ok na.. what u say jodha???

Jodha looks at him angry..

Salim: u will come Pakka?? Promise???

Jalal: dad can't leave without u & ur mumma salim...I love u both.. till today only mumma is there for me...but from now onwards u both are world to me...

Salim: we also love u dad...

Jodha pov:

They met just 3 hours back.. how come salim is so comfortable with jalal.. am I doing correct.. what if I take salim away with me?? Will salim ever able to forgive me?? Should I gave the chance to jalal?? What should I suppose to do.. even I can't accept jalal as my husband.. oh god y u stuck me between father & son?? Y u always plays with me..

But even I am not ready to face dad also..what should I do??? God I always believed u.. show me the correct path..

Jodha jodha...

Mumma mumma...

End of pov..

Salim: mumma mumma...

Jalal: jodha jodha...where are u?? What are u thinking?? Actually I want to talk with aunty.. that's y I wanted to come inside.. if u don't want ...I won't come jodha...

Jodha: Amma didn't came with me.. she is in home only...

Jalal: I know about aunty jodha.. she won't leave u alone.. if u don't want then I won't...

Jodha: ok..

Trio goes to home..

Maina & Vaishu are waiting for them in the living hall.. & both feels happy looking at both jalal & jodha with salim.. they just wish they get married & live happily...

Maina: jodha I am very happy.. I am waiting for this day jodha.. I am so happy for u jodha... u both are made for each other...

Jodha looks at maina with angry.. but jalal is very happy with maina words..

He came forward take blessings from maina & says thank u sooo much aunty...

Maina gave blessings... & hugs salim...

Jalal: aunty I want to talk with u.. can I??? Jodha can u take salim inside... plz...

Jodha: but... I want to...

Jalal cuts her.. it's not good jodha if we talk in front of salim..he is just kid..

Will u plz take him..

Jodha thinks what the he'll he is ordering me...y should I follow..no way.. I will stay here only...I won't go...

Jalal: jodha go... no need of thinking for that small work...just go..

Vaishu laughs looking at jodha.. oh god.. first time someone ordering u na Jodhu.. hahaha... u got ur partner..

Jodha gaves angry look to Vaishu..

& don't think that I am following ur order mr jalal.. I am going inside for my son sake..not for u.. salim is little one.. he should not listen ur crime towards me.. if he knows ur crime he hates u..& I hate u.. goes inside...

Jalal feels stab in his heart.. but composes him self...

Jalal: aunty thank u soo much.. for believing me again.. aunty I want to marry jodha...

Maina: I am happy for that jalal.. but I am scared to face my husband...I don't know how will he react..

Jalal: aunty I will talk with uncle.. don't worry.. just tell jodha to give me one chance.. Plz..

Vaishu: yes aunty.. we should try to convince jodha first..

Jalal: vaishnavi can I ask u something???

Vaishu: tell me..

Jalal: at least for once u should inform me about my son.. then she won't suffer for 3 years Vaishnavi.. u know Vaishnavi howmuch I loved jodha.. but y u did this to me?? But still thanks for taking care of my love& son.. I will owe u for this help..vaishanavi... thank u soo much...

Vaishu gave a tight slap to jalal..

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#855

Awesome chapter👏👏

loved it dear❤️

Since the beginning I was like 😃😃

but then I remembered jalal's wrongdoing and I was like😡😡

what the hell do u think of yourself??😡😡

but I enjoyed his flirting😆

He always called vaishu as her chamcha😆

I don't know what problem boys have with their gf's friends😕 They always addressed them as chamcha or bodyguard😕

Anyways I enjoyed this chapter. They made a team to unite jo-jalal and poor jo was only giving angry glances at a trio, what could she do other than that?😆

And and and, how emotionally jalal was cursing vaishu to hide salim from him and what he got??😆😆

Actually jalal was right at his place but what vaishu did was absolutely correct👏👏

Poor jalal😕 Abhi to papa ko pta lagna baki h😛

but the thing is he deserve this.. what he did was not acceptable and he deserves more than this but as we know that he loves jo so we can mamage with this slapping sessions only.

Thankyou for the pm dearie 🤗

Will u update next chapter today???

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Love u 2 dear.. waiting for jo's decision😊

@ bold: poor jodha Hai na...😆😆

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Jodha didnt say yes yet and our majnu started calling her wife

pretty fast haan , i like it .

maina and vaishu r happy to see jajo together with salim

Hope to see them like this soon 😉

vaishu slapped jalal 😆

I understand why she did that , im sure she wanted to do it long time back but got the chance now

I really like vaishu here ,she is the best friend jodha could ever got

continue soon

thanks for pm

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#858

wow maina & vysh happy seeing JJ together... ja thanked vysh she slapped OMG... i agree with vysh feelings but i am feeling bad here none of them is thinking hw could have ja lived those 3 years without jo...continue soon & do pm

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#859

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

@ bold: poor jodha Hai na...😆😆

😆

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Awesome chapter👏👏
loved it dear❤️
Since the beginning I was like 😃
but then I remembered jalal's wrongdoing and I was like😡😡
what the hell do u think of yourself??😡😡
but I enjoyed his flirting😆
He always called vaishu as her chamcha😆
I don't know what problem boys have with their gf's friends😕 They always addressed them as chamcha or bodyguard😕
Anyways I enjoyed this chapter. They made a team to unite jo-jalal and poor jo was only giving angry glances at a trio, what could she do other than that?😆
And and and, how emotionally jalal was cursing vaishu to hide salim from him and what he got??😆😆

Actually jalal was right at his place but what vaishu did was absolutely correct👏👏
Poor jalal😕 Abhi to papa ko pta lagna baki h😛
but the thing is he deserve this.. what he did was not acceptable and he deserves more than this but as we know that he loves jo so we can mamage with this slapping sessions only.

Thankyou for the pm dearie 🤗
Will u update next chapter today???